Meh. 6/10. Not because I'm a comment troll either. It's for a few reasons. First, you need some legs that do something for your character. Because of your chest you don't need discipline. You need all the intellect and strength for extra blink strike and Blade dance. Also, try to get some with extra heavy ammo perk. Speaking of heavy, ditch the rocket. Rockets are easy to get kills with PvP. But without extra ammo you have what? 2 or 3 rockets? That makes usually 1 or 2 kills. If you use a high impact Chain Gun, like BTRD with good perks, even without extra ammo youll get 5-8 kills per heavy. And you can use blink to dodge enemy rockets. TLW is great, and pairs well with your sniper. But you also need to perk as much as you can into recovery. It's the most relevant and noticeable in PvP. Especially if you're sniping and 7/8 other players are running thorn or red death. You need to keep up your active combat time. All of this is modified by my own personal opinion of hunters in general too. I feel that playing a blade dance hunter is the PvP equivalent of a cheese. It's the cheapest and easiest class to run in crucible. Guaranteed the most kills per super of all subclasses. You'll be powerful, but it will leave you feeling hollow because of the lack of effort it takes to win. At least it does me. Defender Titans EARN the crap out of their kills. Idk, just my opinion. Get new boots, get ashes to assets on a helmet, spec in intelect and strength, build recovery, use Jolders hammer or BTRD. Otherwise, looks good.