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originally posted in:Hardcore Raid Team
6/11/2015 6:43:28 AM
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I am a professional author and I winced by the second sentence. Keep your tenses the same!
Other than that it's one of the better examples of fan-fic I've come across.
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I am an author as well. I find it nice to see the hobby still has its dicks!
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How am I a dick? I admit I miss little things more than I like to admit (we do have editors for a reason) but tenses are not "little things" by any means. Writing is an incredibly hard field to break into and it's better that someone gets a kick in the bum than to lie to that person and say it's fantastic.
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I don't have an editor, nor a publisher. Writing is more of a passionate thing for me. Don't get cocky, Sunny.
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don't be a dick, sunny.
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Filthy Weeaboos...
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Weabitches more like.
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What books have you written?
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My agent wouldn't like me saying such things on a forum. My agent doesn't even like me posting on a forum, haha.
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Edited by n0tgm: 6/11/2015 9:27:36 PMi am...i winced ...tenses... heh.
