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So, now that you binge read, like, 6 chapters, what did you think?
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I apologize for the latency. However, it's a very good story Onyx. Your storytelling is much better than mine, in my opinion, and you still manage to create complex action sequences. Grammar, as always, is spot on. However, you do have a tendency to create some cliche moments, something that I am also guilty of. It was still, however, an interesting and enjoying read. It isn't over yet, is it?
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It's alright, Photon. And no, it isn't, but we are on the home stretch. Two more chapters and an epilogue, both of which I'm really excited to write. Thanks for your feedback, and I'm not better than anyone. You and I just have different styles, and great styles at that.