It's called "Remnant of the Old World", and it's about a hero named Power Boy and his pal The Watcher on a quest to help Sophia, the Vortex Girl, rebuild a magical temple; they're beset by the seven robot Serpentus Servants who used to maintain the temple and rebelled :D

Cool. Here's the synopsis for mine: Synopsis: As a sufferer of chronic schizophrenia, Jacob Cordell has spent his life battling unreality and delusions. Wracked by paranoia and false conspiracies, Cordell found the only safeguard against the chaos was logic. In his moments of lucidity, what defied context must not be real, a mantra he religiously adhered to. One day, after getting into a seemingly fatal car crash, Jacob awakens in Falius, a world that defies the laws of physics, a world where the continents are woven together by gigantic threads as they float on Falius' vast oceans. There he inhabits the body of a lithe reptilian being, a form that disgusts him, but a form shared by the dominant race. The Falians revere him as the prophecied hero who will purify the "World Weaver's Flow of its corruption". But he thinks it is all a coma-induced dream compounded by his schizophrenia. So he refuses to participate, seeing Falius' miracles as temptatious seductions. In doing so, he may deny his one chance at redemption. As for suggesting light hearted ideas, I'm actually a but darker than that.

That's awesome! I really like themes of paranoia and conspiracy, questioning reality, etc. and there's still a lot of room for optimism for Jacob. You might like to see the first chapter of RotOW; I'm trying to go for a cheerful, innocent, fun, nintendo-y thing, but there are some very dark themes in it too. Could I send it to you?

If you post it in a spoiler I'll check it out when I have time.

I'd rather PM, is that okay?