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Halo Fanfic: The End of a War (NEW CHAPTER PAGE 219)

Prologue - to - Chapter 5 = 1st Page Chapter 6 = 2nd Page Chapter 7 = 4th Page Chapter 8 = 7th Page Chapter 9 = 10th Page Chapter 10 = 17th Page Chapter 11 = 23rd Page Chapter 12 = 29th Page Chapter 13 = 37th/38th Page Chapter 14 = 47th Page Chapter 15 = 56th Page Chapter 16 = 61st Page Chapter 17 = 68th Page Chapter 18 = 86th Page Chapter 19 = 102nd Page Chapter 20 = 118th Page Chapter 21 = 124th Page Chapter 22 = 137th Page Side Story = 163/164th Page Chapter 23 = 171st Page Chapter 24 = 182nd Page Chapter 25 = 191st Page Prologue Tartarus swung his massive battle hammer in a wide arc, slamming it onto the ground a hairs-breadth away from where the Arbiter stood. Snarling viciously, Tartarus pivoted his feet and leaned his shoulder downwards. Moving faster than his bulk would suggest he was capable of, he slammed into the Elite and sent him crashing into one of large structures that were littered about in the chamber. Following through, he used his forward momentum, charged the hammer, and thrust it towards the fallen Elite. The Arbiter felt the distortion the energy peeling off Tartarus’ hammer a moment before it discharged. Grasping a human firing weapon in his left hand he pushed off the ground and threw himself to the right, saving himself from being slammed into the stone monument when the influx of energy impacted. Shaking the cobwebs from his head, the Arbiter grabbed his bearings and slowly regarded the leader of the Brutes. That hammer Tartarus touted was powerful enough to not only send him flying across the chamber with one good hit, but it was also emitting a shield that protected the Brute from harm. The Arbiter was confident he could defeat Tartarus simply by outsmarting him, but that would take time, something he did not have much of. The Holy Ring was almost ready to fire, which would mean the deaths of every single organism capable of sustaining the parasite. There would be no time for outsmarting Tartarus once that happened. The Arbiter caught sight of several Elites preparing to jump onto the structure that held Tartarus and himself. The others that had faced Tartarus already had been beaten down by the Brutes’ hammer, a fate he did not wish to see bestowed upon anyone else. “Hold your positions!” the Arbiter bellowed in his native tongue. The Elites stopped their charge and stared down at the Arbiter in confusion. Satisfied that they would not join the battle, the Arbiter turned his gaze on the human soldier, the one that had piloted the Scarab. He held a Jackal Rifle in his hands. The weapon was powerful enough to pierce any shielding ever created, but it required a steady hand and a light touch. “Human, do you know how to use that gun?” the Arbiter shouted at Sergeant Johnson. Despite the situation, Johnson felt a smirk light up his face. “Let me tell you something Mr. Arbiter,” he said sarcastically, “there isn’t a weapon known to mankind that I don’t know how to shoot. I’ve hit the wings off Drones with this little number in my sleep!” The Arbiter returned his gaze to Tartarus, who was preparing to charge once again. “Then show me.” Tartarus shouted once again as he rushed towards the Arbiter. Before either could comprehend what was happening, three plasma shots raced by, slamming into Tartarus’ chest. The white shield that had once covered his body faded, and the Arbiter’s brain kicked into gear. The Brute had yet to stop his charge, and was within a few feet from the Arbiter when he swung. Ducking swiftly, the Arbiter avoided the hammer, brought the human pump-handled weapon to bear, and waited for Tartarus to close the gap between them. Bringing the shotgun up, he pressed it against the Brute’s thick chest and fired. Brutes were known for their muscle density. There had even been reports that some Brutes had survived after being hit by a human land-roving vehicle at speeds that would render all other species incapacitated. None of that mattered, for the one weapon that the humans continued to use with dominance against the Covenant in close quarter fighting held up to its reputation. Two buck-shot rounds entered the Brute’s chest cavity and promptly made a mess before exiting out its backside. Tartarus felt his grip weaken on his hammer, and dropped it as he fell forward. Before he could collapse on top of the Arbiter, the Elite fell onto his back and brought his legs up, kicking the Brute up and over himself to land roughly, and several feet away. Tartarus managed a strangled curse before he felt the light begin to fade and finally disappear altogether. The Arbiter slowly got off the ground, his legs burning from the exertion of lifting Tartarus. He leaned against one of the tall structures in an attempt to catch his breath. It was a moment before he remembered that he had killed Tartarus for a reason, a big reason. Snapping his gaze to the collecting energy in the center of the chamber, the Arbiter saw the female human leap down upon the firing mechanism and remove the Icon. A sigh of relief escaped him, until he felt the control room begin to tremble. ‘Were we too late?’ The thought resonated through the Arbiter’s mind when the chamber began to shake violently, throwing him off his feet. As quickly as it came, the disturbance left, leaving only silence inside the control room. Where the human had removed the Icon, was now a hologram of some sorts. “What’s that?” the female human asked the Oracle. “A beacon,” it responded simply. “What’s it doing?” the female questioned. “Communicating at super luminous speeds.” “With what?” “The other installations.” The Arbiter felt his head throb as he slowly got to his feet. He started over to where the two humans and the Oracle stood. “The other installations are now prepared for remote activation,” the Oracle explained in response to something the humans had asked. “From here?” the female asked. “Don’t be ridiculous,” the Oracle replied in a patronizing tone. That seemed to get the human soldier riled up. “Listen tinkerbell, don’t make me-” his response was cut off by the human female as she waved him off. “Then where? Where would someone go if they wanted to activate the other rings?” “Why, the Ark of course,” the Oracle replied as if it was supposed to be common knowledge. The Arbiter walked between the two humans and regarded the Oracle. “And where Oracle, is the Ark?” the Arbiter inquired. -------------- If there was one thing John 117, otherwise known as the Master Chief, truly despised, it would have to be fighting in space. The thought of being blown to bits by some orbital fire without so much as the chance to pull the trigger on his weapon made him feel vulnerable in a way that should not have been possible. If he had his way, the Covenant would not fight their battles in space, instead they would land there ships on whatever planet that was in their way, and engage the enemy from on the ground. Fighting on the ground with dirt beneath his feet was the only way to fight a war. Unfortunately, the Covenant preferred to stay in orbit around a planet, and burn it into cinder and then finish ‘glassing’ it with plasma fire from their fleet. Because of this, it was inevitable that John would be forced to fight the majority of the time in space. Not that he was useless when it came to fighting off the ground. The Master Chief had been trained since the age of six in nearly every form of combat known to humankind. The destruction of the ‘Unyielding Hierophant’ was proof enough of this. Now though, he wished that he wasn’t on the Forerunner ship, and was instead down on Earth, fighting against the Covenant forces. That was his luck though, he always got the more interesting missions. Some radio chatter caught his attention and he recognized one of the voices as Lord Hood, commander of the orbital defense guns that were positioned to protect Earth from the Covenant carriers. The Master Chief quickly identified himself before the ship could be targeted. ‘Isolate that signal,’ Lord Hood’s voice ordered. ‘Master Chief, you mind telling me why your on that ship?’ ‘I’m not entirely sure myself,’ John thought to himself. “Sir, finishing this fight.” Even over the chatter, he could hear the amusement in Lord Hood’s voice. ‘That’s good to hear, but as you’re the only soldier I’m receiving messages from, I’m presuming that you aren’t on that ship as a passenger.’ “No sir, the Covenant hierarch, the Prophet of Truth, is aboard this ship.” ‘Well, looks like you’ve completed your original mission from Reach then. What type of ship is that Chief, I’ve never seen a Covenant ship like it.’ “This isn’t a Covenant ship sir, it was built by the Forerunners.” The silence that remark generated was long and poignant. ‘I suppose that means it’s in all our best interests for you to take it over then. Is there any assistance that we can throw your way?’ “Not at the moment sir, all I can ask is that you refrain from attacking the ship until I have gained control. I’m not sure what kind of weaponry it carries,” the Master Chief explained. ‘Understood Master Chief, report your status every 10 minutes from now on, and when you get the chance I will need to hear about what happened after In Amber Clad followed the Prophet of Regret through Slipspace.’ “Yes sir,” the Master Chief replied, and closed the chatter. He picked up the Battle Rifle he had managed to hold onto when first entering the ship the hard way. Not counting the clip already in the weapon, John only had three spare magazines, definitely not enough to take out an entire ship filled with Covenant. Chambering a round, the Master Chief started down the tunnel. It was time to do what he did best. [Edited on 09.18.2008 7:45 PM PDT]
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  • Dude, this is epic!!!!! I would pay you over $200 for 1 book, and I would want to buy over a million! Once this is done, you should try to get it published. You would become a [b] FREAKING MILLIONAIRE !!![/b] [Edited on 07.24.2009 1:19 PM PDT]

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  • Great Chapter.

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  • Thanks for the closure.

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  • This was a very good chapter. I think it is one of the best yet.

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  • I can completely understand, Mr Clark. I've been writing the Halo 3 Epilogue for almost a year, but I've also been writing my own novel so I can understand how this gets in the way. I was pleased when I finally concluded the Epilogue last week as it meant I could let go and concentrate on my novel. I really enjoyed the Epilogue as it was a casual write and I had direct feedback from those that read it. Whereas my novel is all done and read by myself. Unfortunately that means it has a far more serious overtone as there is a lot more resting on its success. So I can completely understand. I'm on chapter 5 of mine at the moment, with around 18,000 words but I'm only about 10% into the story. After I've finished it I'll be sending it off to an editorial company for some honest and detailed feedback. After that, if all goes well, I'll find myself an agent that likes the manuscript. Hopefully after that it'll be published. [Edited on 05.13.2009 1:14 AM PDT]

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  • Damn...i never thought this would be updated again however i check about 4 times a year and am shocked to see the update. great stuff but i have to reread the entire thing to understand it but it will be worth it. c ya around!

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  • You're an awesome writer! [i]~ Whiskey[/i]

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] CyF x HeAdShOt *[i]To Mr.Clark, Thank you for a good 4 years of reading[/i][/quote] Same from me... It really has been a great run. Best wishes for the future. Stay healthy and keep writing; you're damn good at it.

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Mr_Clark Absent member? That's not good. So I'm a horrible liar, but there's a reason. I had to stop writing this thing for awhile. And then awhile turned into forever. This is just one of those things that happens unfortunately. The storyline and plot have been inside of me for so long that the story is just done to me. I figured out how this thing ends over two years ago. That's insane. I have nothing but apologies to everyone that's followed this thing since its inception, or happened to come along once it was started and I really got rolling. I am a jerk. Self-loathing comes naturally to me so I am sneering angrily whenever I see my reflection. I understand how this feels, I've had more than my own fair share of disappointments when someone gives up on a story halfway through, or even more tragically near the end. I could give a few more maudlin speeches about how sorry I am, but it won't change anything and also probably won't make anyone not hate me any less. I'm focusing on my first novel effort, which is on track to be completed by the summer. Its amazing that I'm so close to completion, but at the same time I am aware how much work is still ahead of me. Joining the internet bandwagon, I started a twitter profile in an attempt to chronicle the ending stretch of this insane long task I started six or seven years ago. Its just my name, sadly Mr. Clark was taken, I don't understand how its such an original name! [url=http://twitter.com/JacobMcDonnell] This will take you there should you ever want to see what the status of the book is.[/url] I am really grateful for everyone's kind words over the years, and even the not so kind words. You guys kept me going when I was ready to give up this crazy out-there dream, and helped me have way more confidence in myself than I've ever had. Of course, that also means if I crash and burn I will damn you all from beyond the grave forever. Whenever this idea of mine comes out in novel form, I'll want everyone to go to their nearest bookseller and check the inside pages before the story begins. Don't bother buying the book. By the time it comes out there will be a lucrative illegal download network for novels, spearheaded by the Kindle, that evil device. Read it on there and send your hate mail. Thanks everyone![/quote] Thank you for at last coming out and say you are done with this fan fic. Good luck on your real novel and work that definitely should take precedent over a fun side story. From what I have read so far you seem like a great writer and im sure it will be a success. *[i]To Mr.Clark, Thank you for a good 4 years of reading[/i]

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  • Hey if any of you guys have read the Forgotten Spartan by Rainman i was wandering if you could read wat i wrote to continue it. He gave me permission to finish it so im going to try. Post on that page and tell me if you like it. Thank you.

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  • You have a publishing contract? Congratulations, I'll make sure to "buy it". *Marks date on calendar for visiting Piratebay.org* Lol, nah seriously if I see it in England I'll buy it.

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  • Absent member? That's not good. So I'm a horrible liar, but there's a reason. I had to stop writing this thing for awhile. And then awhile turned into forever. This is just one of those things that happens unfortunately. The storyline and plot have been inside of me for so long that the story is just done to me. I figured out how this thing ends over two years ago. That's insane. I have nothing but apologies to everyone that's followed this thing since its inception, or happened to come along once it was started and I really got rolling. I am a jerk. Self-loathing comes naturally to me so I am sneering angrily whenever I see my reflection. I understand how this feels, I've had more than my own fair share of disappointments when someone gives up on a story halfway through, or even more tragically near the end. I could give a few more maudlin speeches about how sorry I am, but it won't change anything and also probably won't make anyone not hate me any less. I'm focusing on my first novel effort, which is on track to be completed by the summer. Its amazing that I'm so close to completion, but at the same time I am aware how much work is still ahead of me. Joining the internet bandwagon, I started a twitter profile in an attempt to chronicle the ending stretch of this insane long task I started six or seven years ago. Its just my name, sadly Mr. Clark was taken, I don't understand how its such an original name! [url=http://twitter.com/JacobMcDonnell] This will take you there should you ever want to see what the status of the book is.[/url] I am really grateful for everyone's kind words over the years, and even the not so kind words. You guys kept me going when I was ready to give up this crazy out-there dream, and helped me have way more confidence in myself than I've ever had. Of course, that also means if I crash and burn I will damn you all from beyond the grave forever. Whenever this idea of mine comes out in novel form, I'll want everyone to go to their nearest bookseller and check the inside pages before the story begins. Don't bother buying the book. By the time it comes out there will be a lucrative illegal download network for novels, spearheaded by the Kindle, that evil device. Read it on there and send your hate mail. Thanks everyone!

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  • I Have decided to read this fan fic, Soulguards trilogy, and the Grunt rebellion/ taming of the Hunters one.

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  • I see now Clark is an Absent Member...

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  • Depends on what you mean by alive, ive been following this story for 4 years, and between the chapter 25 to 26 breaks, my account was deleted since i didnt visit the site much, so i made this one, its nice to see clark hasnt forgotten us though, and wow his life really has changed. So im guessing hes been gone due to family or girlfriend issues, or just cuz he has a life. He'll be back, he promised it wasnt gonna be another year wait, so itll be all good. Plus hes probably working on the chapter as we speak. [Edited on 02.17.2009 12:17 PM PST]

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  • man, ive been watching this since before i had a Bnet account (kinda creepy i know) and im glad to see that it is still got a significant following and is still alive.

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] x Lai Tasha x [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] CyF x HeAdShOt [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] x Lai Tasha x I concur, and its almost an institution. This and Soulguards fic.[/quote] Except one of them respects there fans.....[/quote]Ouch, someone got burned... this made me rotflol.[/quote] lol well I think of it this way, I have been following this for 4 years now, and the least he could have done is just say hes done and that, instead of just disappearing for a year, and then even more so comes back and says he could start working on it again only to stop posting again is just stupid! Either way he is still an amazing writer though

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] CyF x HeAdShOt [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] x Lai Tasha x I concur, and its almost an institution. This and Soulguards fic.[/quote] Except one of them respects there fans.....[/quote]Ouch, someone got burned... this made me rotflol.

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  • Damn, this is a really good read. I'm sure there's still lots of people out there that remember this story. I'm going to post around my groups and stuff and try to pull more attention towards it. You're a phenomenal writer Clark. You need to post here when you make your first real book, even if it takes a few years. I'll be the first to buy it. [Edited on 12.15.2008 6:54 PM PST]

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] x Lai Tasha x I concur, and its almost an institution. This and Soulguards fic.[/quote] Except one of them respects there fans.....

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  • I concur, and its almost an institution. This and Soulguards fic.

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Wolverfrog OMG WHAT THE HELL! WHY IS THIS ALLOWED TO STAY IN THE HALO 2 FORUM WHEN MY HALO 3 RELATED FAN_FIC GOT MOVED TO THE GALLERY?? THIS IS WELL UNFAIR![/quote] If I had to make a guess, I would say that its because this has been here for so long, and because it was posted long before you could post in the gallery forum. Only the mods know for sure though.

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  • OMG WHAT THE HELL! WHY IS THIS ALLOWED TO STAY IN THE HALO 2 FORUM WHEN MY HALO 3 RELATED FAN_FIC GOT MOVED TO THE GALLERY?? THIS IS WELL UNFAIR!

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  • should cortana not escape high chairity because master chief was the one who rescued her in the game.

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  • I think that could be a possibility, remember that Mr_Clark had already finished this chapter before he disappeared... Now that he has to write a whole new chapter, we could be waiting a few decades.

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  • Did i really read the whole story again only to have you ditch us and me forget it again!

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