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Sorry for the smallness. CHAPTER 6============= “What is it?” Kelly asked. “We’ve already located a strange room, and they say we’ve found a possible entrance to the huge structure.” A man said. Dr. Halsey, Kelly and Fred ran over to the dig site. “identification?” An ONI agent asked. Fred and Kelly showed his their cards. “Terribly sorry sir, and ma’m.” the ONI agent said. “And yours?” He looked at the doctor who was searching frantically through her pockets for her badge, or any other form of identification. Nothing. “I must have left it on Reach.” The doctor said. She looked around in horror. “You may not enter the structure, but you may watch from the outside.” The ONI agent decided. Dr. Halsey thanked her, and sat down, to observe the archaeologists dig. Fred and Kelly entered the structure, and noticed how perfect everything was. The floor had extremely complicated geometry on the floor, and roof. This was something they still took time to complete, even though it would be overlooked by most people. “Fred. I’ve got enemies on my motion tracker.” “Me too, but they’re not enemies are they?” “No, they’re unidentified.” “That can’t be good. Hand signals from now on.” Fred declared. Kelly nodded. And they walked quietly down a ramp, leading deep into the structure. Finally, they noticed the brightest room ever seen, and there was a glowing light in the middle. Unidentified alien creatures poured in from a whole bunch of entrances the two Spartans didn’t even know about. They studied the room, it had at least a 30 foot arching roof, with 30-40 foot high walls. Fred looked at the aliens, and identified them as the ones he had faced on Installation-02. He wasn’t going to mess with them, because these were no doubt Special Operations men. He wasn’t going to challenge an alien race’s best men. Not to mention that the alien race was at least 300 years ahead of the humans, which means they were at least 100-200 years ahead of the Covenant. The rooms silver walls reflected much of the light from the T-shaped green object. Even though the object was green, it shone golden light. The object floated over a glass portion of the floor, probably only 1 metre by 1 metre. Surrounding the glass was holographic panels, which needed to be activated before grasping the object in one’s hands. Fred looked at Kelly, and gestured with his Fuel-Rod Cannon to hit Kelly’s rocket launcher shell, creating a mid-air explosion, when they had to reload, they would run. Fred held his fingers up in the air. He put one finger up… then two… then three. “mark.” Fred whispered. They fired four rockets and four Fuel-Rod rods almost simultaneously. They exploded right in the face of the leader, wearing a gold and orange head dress. The explosion no doubt caused numerous tragedies, but they didn’t care to watch. Kelly and Fred ran throwing fragmentation grenades behind them. “Get those infidels!” One of the alien creatures shouted. Explosions detonated, the aliens had planted mines everywhere. The Spartans, shields went down, then recharged. Fred’s shield never went down all of the way, because he had approximately seven on now. They found a dead end. Kelly gestured up, and they climbed up the 90 degree angle wall. Shots were fired at them, mostly missing, but caused huge chunks of the wall to collapse, sometimes hitting the Spartans. Fred fired his last shot in the Fuel-Rod clip, hitting the crowd of aliens below, killing many. Fred didn’t care to watch his work. They laughed in alien tongues in the Spartan’s effort to reach the top. Fred had reached the top. He let out a sigh of relief when Kelly appeared up top. They noticed an elevator shaft come up to their left, and out came the creepy orange bastards. Fred ran with Kelly, down the hallway, pieces of metal and of the wall falling all around them, not to mention their shields shimmering from the light peppering of small rounds. Fred noticed another staircase. He ran up it, only to find it blow up halfway up. He looked behind him. Three of the orange creatures had grabbed Kelly’s leg, and pulled her into the horde of bastards. “Fred!” She screamed as Fred leaped over the lack of stairs. He fired rockets into the crowd, making sure they weren’t close enough to Kelly. Then, Fred noticed something new… “You!” One of the aliens pointed to the orange creature shorter than him. “Go retrieve the sacred crystal, for we must do what was meant to be done. We must destroy it along with the humans. Go!” It was all clear to Fred now. They had the same beliefs as these new creatures, but yet the still wanted the humans eliminated. He turned on his video recorder, and observed the crowd pull Kelly away. He could do nothing useful. He looked back at the wall. Human shotguns, Sniper Rifles, and every other human UNSC weapon you could imagine was here. He grabbed a sniper rifle, and checked through the scope. It was a regular sniper, X5 then to X10. He saw the leader’s head. A headshot was useless with those high-tech shielding. He fired s shot at the shield generator at the back. It blew up, and the alien fell to his knees, blood dripping from his back, and he screamed, as the fight was now on. Fred also noticed that they had no shields around their shield generators. Fred fired more at the enemies. It was time to retrieve the ‘sacred crystal’ Fred thought.

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Fine ill add more but i dont want my story over master chief 117's

nice chapter chief, and another cliff hanger to drive us all crazy again.

how far officer? asked strause, we are 200 miles of the ciro and slowing for a rought dock. good the admiral will enjoy this the PINNICLE docked with the ciro.witch could be attached with aloss of some manuverability but that wasnt on strauses mind he needed fleet admiral on the ship to en gage an direct his ships from a safer position. sir we are docked and reciving personell. and the admiral, he is on the way up the bridge dors opend to show an admiral in full dress uniform admiral on deck Yelled a corparol the bridge crew saluted and went back to there posts sir the master in chief has ordered u comand of the PINNICLE thank u straus please help me in commanding. aye sir. The PINNICLE dodged a plama round only to get hit buy another the shields held just before 3 mac batteries fired and 200 arcer missles were let loos. the covy capitol follingship dodged two rounds all 200 archer rounds hit there target as the othe mac round hit the ship exploded. the admiral hood smiled strause take command of our plasma weapons hood took an orbital burn around the planet to charge the weapons he got a glimps of the battle just before entering the earths shadow he saw the WASHINGTON open fire on the covanant fleet along with the RESERVE a full broadside times two the 4 crisers and 2 frigates looked like horse flies next to the 2 battle ships farther on the battleships LIBERATOR and MODERATOR gave several covy ships an invitation to the abis.

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concerning the battle over earth the humans need battle ships. this was my origanal story before i started reading your storys witch i have to say are better than mine.:( ''my god what is this to end like'' exlaimed hood. 600 covanant ships appeard from slipspace. he looked to his left at his weapons officer swet dripping down his forehead, "sir the ships are engaging" a lanse of energy reached out from the covanant ship and touched the nearest human frigate, it was gutted from bow to stern and exploded as the engins overloaded. sir were out numbered 2/1 the 1200 covanand ships engaging 600 human ships including destoyers and frigats with the 50 cariers and 20 cruisers left in the system not including the 225 super mac guns left. my god set up the desres cal to all human ships to abandon there stations and planets this is our last stand. Harper stood on the bridge of his crusier and stared out his windows at the spectical in front of him ships exploded randomly mac rounds missed and sped of into space some impacting the moon, displays pulsed around him. "sir" his weapons officer annonced, mac capacitors at full power. fire! 2 dull thumps sounded throuout the ship and to heavy mac rounds headed straight tward a covanet ship one bounced off the shield the next embeded itself in the bow then exploded tering of the bow of the ship it spun and impacted into the closest covy cruiser they exploded in a helfire of plasma. harper smiled proud of the new mac rounds. sir, radio officer shin announced, in coming orders from admiral hood. on speaker!. this is admiral hood this is our last stand ships from all systems are converging at system at best speed i wish you all the best no amount of training can prepar you for the on coming onslaught, hold on help is on the way god help us. hood out. canary system. special operations center. location classified. Admiral straus incoming distres call from earth, exclamined Mirth the ai on the station, thier under covanant attack over 1200 ships orders to leave this station at best speed and assist. from admiral hood, hood never asked for help this was bad. "i thought the battle was over there was only 30 covant ships. gues not she exclaimed. order defcon 4 we are leavin the system prepare a message. "this is special fleet admiral straus my fleet is inbound to your system arrival in ten minutes. Straus stared out his ferry to his battleship the pinnical of human tecnolog it used covanant weapon tecnology copyed and redisignd and improved it was over 3 miles long and 1/2 a mile fat at its widest piont it had five of the same ractors used on the pillar on its doomed mission giving the ship over 500% power it had 10 plasma turets the size of an orbital mac gun two on each turret along with 20 super mac turrets each with one gun the size of an orbital super mac also the ships had over 2000 archer missle pods inslaled and to top that the ship had a shield system that equaled the covanants there were still bugs to work out but thats why they were equiped with an ai, the down side of the ships was it had no point defence from covanan single ships usualy done by 70MM chain guns, but point defence was provided by the 3 squdrons of longsward fighters obard his ship the PINNICLE was th first of 10 gaiath class ships that were compleate olong with the newly commisioned ship rolled out this morning, 20 more were due. he entered the bridge, "give me slipspace to the sol system". his fleet of battle ships would push the covanant back to hell were they came from. he pressedthe com this is admiral straus to all in system ships all ships are to move to the sol system. he looked at the displays they showed 10 galiath class battle ships and 30 other figats and destoyers, ready to go jump on my mark 3. 2. 1. mark! the ships jumped, all at once and they disapeard in a haze of blue. 5 minutes later his ships appeard on the dark side of the moon it was poketed with scorch marks an plasma burns. stray plasma and mac rounds appeared from the sides and traveled into space. all ships power up weapons and shields give these bastards a full braod side cruisers and frigats keep them off our back". the cruisers surrounded them protecting them from medium ships. " squadrons A and B Point defence!" the other battle ships did the same sir all weapons powerd up and ready same reporting from the other ships. good, send out a probe get me intel on the situation. a probe was sent it rounded the moon the sencors over loaded the camera however showed over 2000 ship firing at each other hellfire came from all diretions sevral plasma rounds impacted a orbital supermac and turned it into a blob of floating metal but not before it fired a round it impacted a capital battle ship and wen right throught the ships engin went out and floated dead in space. order shields full power. aye sir. straus had never seen such a specticle. hood chased a frigate tward the moon sir! Mac capacitor at full charge. fire! a single thump sounded thought the hull the round impacted the covy shield ricoshed of and impacted the moon. what happend?! demanded harpor second mac gun has depolorized fire control is lost, Damn! Dump the capacitor carge into the second gun and fire 2 seconds lator the round fired and impacted the ship as the frigate fired the plasma emergency thust! a bak sonded and harpor flew to the sid and imapacted the nearst support beam a single plasma round impacted the top of harpors ship meltin away 3 meters of armor burning throught 4 decks. Report! sir mac gun offline main engin down station keeping engins are operational and the covy. rounds impaction he's done! good get me to the dark side of the moon the ship slowed slowly harpor was anxtios he was to slow. "about 180 degres" aye sir! he faced the earthe the onslaught continued sir in coming call from admiral straus on speaker! thought you gyes could use some help hood rounded the moon wat he saw scared him and brought him to a sence of aw get harpors cruser on my ship.the two ships docked."Welome abord all your personell are on my ship and we are jetisoning the VISTA welcom to my bridge we are starting off. strauses fleet rounded the moon all battle ships full braud side 440 rouns impacted 200 covy ships some vaporized some a melted blob ceased to exist thought the good admiral hood could use some help? ."welcome home straus" your company is welcomed straue gave an order al ships break fight individualy i want 3 crusers or frigates to acompany a battle ship i will move on to the ciro and retrive the admiral. the fleet broke off sevral fired and all were fired opon the shields held. the battleship RESERVE made two kills a carrier sent off a wave of serivs the three cruisers fired there 70 MM auto cannons a squd of longswards intecepted the wave sevreal were destroyed but the overwhelming cannon fire wittled the serif wave down to jus 20 they seemed to be more skilled than the others they doged cannon fire and headed straight for the nearest cruisers engins and impacted desroying an engine the cruiser fired at the carrier impacting the bay another wave of serifs were coming out of the wave was destroyed along with 25% of the carrier it vented atmosfier and retreted bac to the protection of the main fleet. a nuclear mine went off in the fleet and several covy ships were destroyed. the nearest 4 capitol ships fired at the RESERVE and the shiels poped out of existance a plasma round ompacted a mack gun an melted it and crew. how far officer? asked strause, we are 200 miles of the ciro and slowing for a rought dock.

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just wanted to say read the 3rd book the size of the gun on the pelican is like 70MM no joke

good story keep at it

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Holy S*** I just realized that the artifact from reach is the key to the ark

[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Master__Chief117 Halo 2 is such an awesome game... Everyone complains, but when we go to a ps2 [fanboy] site, we notice immediately how nobody films Grand Theft Auto videos, nobody creates theories about JAK III. Nobody writes fanfictions about Sly Cooper. XBOX IS BETTER[/quote] AMEN!

Halo 2 is such an awesome game... Everyone complains, but when we go to a ps2 [fanboy] site, we notice immediately how nobody films Grand Theft Auto videos, nobody creates theories about JAK III. Nobody writes fanfictions about Sly Cooper. XBOX IS BETTER

Just HAD to finish Chapter 5!! Truth floated gently down the purple gravity lift, anticipation for the Halos to be activated was overcoming him. “How much longer?” Truth asked his loyal Honour Guards. “Not much longer Noble Prophet,” The Honour Guard answered. He looked down, it was to dark. Then, they hit a floor in a pitch-black room. The lights of red Brute Plasma Rifles filled the air, then the set up flood lights, illuminating the area. It was a circular area, with golden symbols, and they glowed slightly. The Prophet immediately hovered to a cluster of them. He put his finger in the middle of a circular design. He waited, until it shone light. An extremely bright light poured out of the figure, and Brutes and Jackals came to watch the scene. A cave opened up, with a loud sound of rocks scraping. Finally, a twenty foot arching cave was visible. He entered it, and saw- Absolutely nothing. “What is it, Doctor?” Kelly asked. “My radio was on.” Dr. Halsey replied. “Does that mean-“ “I hope not.” The doctor quickly ended the conversation. “Let’s get to work.” The doctor said. The Spartans nodded, and walked over to the largest dig area. The doctor observed the plains of absolutely nothing. The planet was uninhabited. There was no animals, or even molluscs here. There was never any form of life here-except for the Forerunners… Dr. Halsey had told Kelly about the Forerunners. Kelly thought that the Forerunners we’re her ascendants. That would make the Forerunners humans, and that could shake up the Covenant Loyalists. “Dr. Halsey. Pleasure to make your acquaintance.” A man said, perhaps leading the dig. “Loto! Loto!” A man yelled from the hole. “We’ve found something!” The man that was talking to Dr. Halsey said. Tentacles slashed at the Elites, the Arbiter had already cut off four with his energy sword. “Throw plasma grenades in it’s mouth!” the Commander shouted to the Sangheili. Unggoy sloppily chucked plasma grenades at the giant’s mouth. Gravemind made an effort to dodge the blue grenades, then whip with his tentacles. He had killed at least seven more Sangheili, and countless Unggoy. Lekgolo stood strong firing their Fuel-Rod Cannons at the tentacles and huge mouth of Gravemind. One whipped at the Arbiter, the Arbiter narrowly dodged it, but grabbed onto it. It pulled him up, and slapped him at the wall, but the Arbiter hung on tightly. He then waited until the tentacle stopped moving around wildly. He then jumped from the tentacle into the Gravemind’s mouth. It seemed it hadn’t noticed him. He primed four grenades and dropped them before jumping out. He turned invisible on his way the ground. He then unsheathed his sword, cutting down more the Gravemind’s tentacles. All four grenades exploded at the same time, Gravemind screamed a disgusting roar, falling to the ground, but it got back up. It swung it’s tentacles more violently than ever, killing another Sangheili, then roaring. Plasma that touched the tentacles lit it on fire, enflaming the entire tentacle. Unggoy that decided to charge up their Plasma Pistols and fired them were able to burn a hole right through whatever part of Gravemind it hit. Gravemind seemed to have infinite tentacles, they just kept coming. Lekgolo managed to destroy most of Gravemind’s ‘facial’ area. They kept shooting, and then finally, Gravemind dropped, but landed right on the Arbiter. An Unggoy ran up, charged up a shot and fired it at the part of Gravemind that was on top of the Arbiter. The Arbiter thanked him deeply. “By the rings…” A Sangheili said. They looked around the room, nothing but the slaughtered Gravemind and their own corpses littering the floor. A blue Sangheili knelt next to his fallen comrade. The Arbiter looked around the room. He stepped into the magma, which was not hot, but almost freezing cold. He recoiled his blade, then pocketed it. “Of all my years, I have never experienced a battle so great.” The Arbiter said. “You may have failed on the first Halo, but we’ve succeeded here. He was ramped.” The Commander said to the Arbiter. “I know.” The Arbiter said. “I just, don’t understand why one would go ramped, with no reason.” The Arbiter said. “My know why!” A worthless yellow Unggoy cried. “When me lonely, me want to hurt someone!” It yelled. Fellow Unggoy told it to be quiet, but the Arbiter saw he was right. He was one-hundred percent right. The Gravemind was lonely. “500 more ships exiting slipspace!” “Get MAC Cannons on it!” Lord Hood shouted in reply. “But sir! They’re not Covenant.” The voice called. “Then my God, what are they?” Lord Hood saw through the Cairo’s veiwscreen, a huge ship, four times the size of any Covenant Frigate or Flagship. “My God.” Lord Hood whispered.

Thanks guys. A friend told me I was lacking "Grunts" Watch for the rest of chapter 5 and 6+ to find more on Grunts.

oh and a note, i think this is one of the most overlooked pieces of fanfic, i love it, it feels more personal than the other ones that have a huge following

nice, now get the rest up, lol, and get back to me about the other thing please

CHAPTER 5==================== “Where is the creature?” The Commander asked. “Down that hole.” The Arbiter gestured in to the hole. “By the rings,” the Commander said. “Surely, you are fooling us.” “No. This is where Tartarus pushed me over. I thought of death, then realized not.” The Arbiter said. “We will die.” The Commander said as he looked down the hole. He saw nothing. All of a sudden, Flood poured in from every direction. They wielded Fuel-Rods and Rocket Launchers, and other heavy weapons. Wraiths and Scorpions, all ready to decimate the Elites. The Arbiter jumped into the hole, then was followed by the Spec-Op Commander. After a moment of being puzzled, the other Elites in the squads jumped, followed by Hunters and Grunts. They fell, for quite a while, before stopping in mid-air. Some were caught by the tentacles of the Gravemind, while some were gently floated to the ground, which was just a large rock surrounded in greenish-yellow magma. The Arbiter was one of the Sangheili caught by the Gravemind. “What… Have you come for? Why have you not gone to the Sacred World, and stop the leader of your futile race from acquiring the key to the Ark.” Gravemind said. The Arbiter caught a funny look from some of his Sangheili. ] “We have come to ask of your assistance.” The Arbiter said, calmly. He noticed some of his Sangheili trying to wriggle free of the creature’s grasp. “Hold still. He will do you no harm.” The Arbiter announced, loudly. Gravemind looked at the Arbiter. “You know nothing. You must receive the key.” Gravemind said. “I am sorry, parasite.” The Arbiter was interrupted. “I am not parasite. I am not live, or death. I do not breath, I do not eat. I have been created by your creator, and the humans’ creator, I am much like you, but I face death more than you ever have. To you, I look like one of… them. I am not. I am the buffer between the extinction of all life in the universe. I am the most important being ever.” Gravemind then dropped the Elites he was holding. “Do not talk of what you are, for that does not matter to us. Our faith no longer matters to us.” The Arbiter said, sitting on the ground. “What do you mean by key?” the Arbiter asked. “You are disturbing. Why do you waste all of this time with talk?!” Gravemind said. “There is no time. We have a trustworthy human saving us, he is on the Ark.” “He knows nothing. You all know nothing. The Ark is worthless unless you have the key!” Gravemind took a nasty swipe at a minor blue Sangheili, killing it. “Open fire! Kill it! Fire until it is dead!” The Arbiter screamed. “Finished.” Dr. Halsey said. “Good, can I fight now?” Kelly asked. “Well, I have a special mission, now.” Dr. Halsey replied. “Let me just run the polygon transfer routine… adjusting atom size, divide by the nucleus of the average heart cell-got it.” The doctor said. “What are we doing?” Kelly asked as rings, orange in colour surrounded her. “Let’s just say we’re helping another Spartan in need. Let’s go, we must hurry.” Dr. Halsey disappeared, followed by Kelly’s disappearance. “Where are we?” Kelly asked. “It’s more beautiful then I’ve ever dreamed!” Dr. Halsey said. “What is it?” Kelly asked, irritated. “This is another Halo.” The doctor replied. Kelly said nothing. She just looked at the other side of the ring in the air with awe. “Fred is here, and he’s about to make a huge mistake.” The doctor stated. “If you say so. Mission Objective?” “I recommend opening that door before you go through it.” “Yes m’am!” Kelly said. She ran over to the enormous blast door and looked at the hollow panel. She didn’t know how, but she understood them. She made the door open, seeing a battle between huge orange creatures, and Fred taking cover behind a box. Kelly jumped behind a wall, taking the doctor with her. She examined the nine-foot-tall giants. They were huge. They wielded powerful guns, and destroyed the floating robots they were battling. “Sentinels.” Dr. Halsey whispered. Kelly looked at the armoured giants. They were completely covered in an orange suit, and it covered every bit of their bodies, then they had the armour placed on top of the suit, covering their entire bodies except for their key joints, their knees, elbows, shoulders, and parts of their neck and ankles. They had no facial features, they were completely covered in the orange material. Kelly wielded a modified Jackhammer Rocket Launcher from the armoury where she had her MJOLNIR Mark VII armour put on. She also had taken a Fuel-Rod Cannon, from the captured Covenant weapons bin. She had all she can carry-40 rounds. She remembered only being able to carry 25 plus five in her weapon, now in the new armour, she could carry 40 plus five in the weapon. She could also carry sixteen Jackhammer rockets. That was including the four already in this modified edition of the regular M19 SSM rocket launcher. This was the M20 SS2 BM Rocket Launcher. Clearly the more compact and explosive rocket shells made it a much more acceptable weapon for ground forces. She fired two rockets into the crowd of the orange aliens. Only one of them died. She noticed their orange energy shields flicker as well. They wore hideous headdresses, orange and lime green in colour. Some were larger, smaller, and different colours, these determined ranks. She fired another two, then unloaded the slip. She then fired her Fuel-Rod Cannon into the group, five shots, with help from Fred, they had eliminated the groups. The room looked like a hallway, and it reminded Dr. Halsey of the video John had sent her of the control room. This was the hallway before it. “Good to see you, Spartan-104.” Kelly said. “No time for pleasantries. Fred, your making a huge mistake. What your about to do will wipe out all sentient life in the galaxy.” The doctor said. “What about that?” Fred gestured toward the Monitor. “His purpose is to activate the ring if the Flood get free. We came to stop you, and get the key to the Ark.” Dr. Halsey said. “The Ark? The key?” Kelly and Fred said simultaneously. “Just do as I say. I’ll do the smarts part, you do the fighting.” The doctor said. “Let’s just teleport to the Polarific system… got it!” The orange rings surrounded them, as they have so often. Then Fred wondered deeply how Dr. Halsey teleported, without a SPARTAN suit and all. Then they appeared on a rugged empty planet, with nothing but archaeologists, digging for clues, and the odd cheep-budget spaceships that littered the empty, orange field. “This was uninhabited by humans until passing ships realized an unlikely amount of heat from their infra-red sensors two years ago. They had then ordered all of the humans skilled archaeologists to find out what it was. It was deep enough to be the core either, so this was important enough to look at.” The doctor said. “Before activating the Ark, you need a key.” Dr. Halsey started. “Just like when activating the Halos, you need an index,” Kelly stated. “Yes.” The doctor continued. “The Covenant do not have this key, and we know that. If Master Chief, Linda, Will, and the other UNSC forces can stand the assault, we can secure the item before the can.” Dr. Halsey looked at her helmet’s HUD. She needed a helmet to breathe on this planet. She read the HUD, and noticed that she had just broadcasted that conversation to the Covenant leaders. But they were too far away to receive it until at least seven days… “Oops.” Dr. Halsey whispered. “This is Spartan 117 to Lord Hood. We’ve located and secured the ship with two Scarabs. We are awaiting explosives from a delivery Pelican”, or Longsword. He didn’t know. So they waited, and waited, and waited. They waited in the ship hopelessly. They could not drive the Scarabs because of the purple barrier that blocked the room to the controls. Half of an hour later, their pelican arrived. “Time to get busy boys!” Will exclaimed.

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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] cortana4ever awsome chapter, i like the idea of new aliens, what are you going to call them?[/quote] Still thinking. If anyone has any suggestions, PM me, or preferably, post it here!!

awsome chapter, i like the idea of new aliens, what are you going to call them?

you DO all realize that this is my rough version. I have an editor, and I'll probably add in a lot of detail. Glad to see some new posters (hehe, posters,) I encourage you to post to keep it on the front page, support me. Please. If enjoy the story, I suggest you check out my group. (Check my sig!) Just picture the launch bay as the one from The Truth and Reconciliation of Halo: Combat Evolved, and the place with Will and Master Chief like the Metropolis area. I'll add a lot more detail when completing my good copy.

very nice man, explain a lil more on the orange aliens. What do they look like.