[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Master__Chief117 [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Mr super grunt hey dude, great job so far but i think it could use a little help. could u do somethin? get all the entries u have made and post as many of them as u can on one entry. so that we can c the whole book together, not broken up by useless jabber and other things. O... would u mind if i copied and pasted it on my comp and also edited it? thnx[/quote] Sure, you can edit it, but give me your e-mail address and then I'll send you the Microsoft Word Document, which would be a lot easier.[/quote] its ok ive been copying and pasting your work and its workin ok. im on chapter 3 (i think) and so far about 99.5% of the work is still the original. yer doin purdy good, ive noticed that l8r on though the story gets a little... sketchy... ill have 2 do alot of work on that ill do a little more work on chapter 1 then post it 4 u 2 c the improvements

[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Mr super grunt hey dude, great job so far but i think it could use a little help. could u do somethin? get all the entries u have made and post as many of them as u can on one entry. so that we can c the whole book together, not broken up by useless jabber and other things. O... would u mind if i copied and pasted it on my comp and also edited it? thnx[/quote] Sure, you can edit it, but give me your e-mail address and then I'll send you the Microsoft Word Document, which would be a lot easier.

that was pretty good, keep it up btw eastlaw, how did nylund rip enders game? the only cross references i can get is kids being taken young to train for killing, but other than that nothing - feel free to post your resons, its quite likely ive missed something

hey dude, great job so far but i think it could use a little help. could u do somethin? get all the entries u have made and post as many of them as u can on one entry. so that we can c the whole book together, not broken up by useless jabber and other things. O... would u mind if i copied and pasted it on my comp and also edited it? thnx

Answering questions, since 1963. >>>Yes yes. right. I'm gonna kill Master cHIEF, the main charactar, the only thing anyone cares about in Halo. Right Bungie? Master CHief dies. >>> That guy who wanted to join my group without joining any clans: Of course you can join wtihout getting stuck to a clan. >>>Yes... It's Foundation.

something there reminds of oh.... FOUNDATION lol...... i hope chief doesnt die..... same with arbiter..... that would suck...... [Edited on 3/9/2005 5:43:57 PM]

Can i join your group, but i wont have to join any halo 2 clans will i BTW the story rocks i keep comin back to this page only but you shouldn't of killed the chief like that or is the white light a scarab gun or sumtin [Edited on 3/9/2005 5:25:11 PM]

You killed the chief.......................................................................................................................... HOORAY

The next chapter. (please note that this is the end of the chapter, not the start.) I think it may be a little short, but I haven't done anything for a week. Thanks for keeping it on a page in triple-digits, Good thing it's in my favourites. Cortana exited slipspace to find hundreds of orange ships, easily four kilometres long. They had plasma cannons double strength of the MAC guns. She remained stealthy, heading over to the Rome. The Pelican touched-down. Will looked around, examining the run down TARDS facility. Robotic defence? He questioned. What was that? He asked himself. Did the UNSC have robots? He entered the beige facility. He noticed four rooms, each with a huge stone wall in front, with a number painted on them. 1, 2, 3, and 4. Room 1’s stone wall had cracks, and was falling apart. That’s where he was heading. He walked over there, noticing fusion cores scattered around the area. He guessed that there was no way in, besides up, because his Pelican has dropped him on the roof, and he jumped down. He was told by the pilot to go to room 1 for now. He also noticed some parts with stairs, and some with visible air firing up, probably with enough force to lift up a Spartan, or heavy cargo-or heavy robots. “It’s good to see you, Spartan.” A scientist said. He clearly knew nothing about Will-not even his name. His number in this situation was obsolete. He would just stand there with his weapons, and kill anything in his way. He followed the scientists and their silver-grey lab coats to a room with a large yellow ‘1’ painted above the entrance. He observed the dark room. In the back, lay a corrugated piece of what looked like cardboard. Beside it, two containers, containing an item that remained irrelevant to whatever was going on now. The scientists entered the room behind Will. Will noticed two holes in the roof, one to the left, on to the right. They had fans in them, and light filtered down. The room was empty, and symmetrical, except for the cardboard and canisters. “This will do.” A scientist said in a cowardly voice. The Earth depended on three things. Orbital MA Cannons, Spartans, and these creepy scientist fellows. “Wait. We need the abandoned test tubes from the other room-two I believe. Not to mention materials from rooms three and four. Spartan, can you retrieve these items, we are too timid to leave, and we must start setting up.” Will nodded his head. He walked out of the room, and noticed on a wall in front of him, paint that showed room 2 to the left, and room 4 to the right. He would search all four rooms starting by going left. He walked, noticing two mounted gun turrets, human, green in colour. What was the purpose? He asked himself. He found room two, and sent a fibre-optic tube around the corner. The room was unoccupied. He crouched, and crouch-walked in, then noticed a tube lying down on the floor at the back of the room to the left. He saw two lying down now, and another standing up. He grabbed the two lying down in his left and right hands. “ABANDON IN PLACE” one said. It also said “TEST” in big black stencil letters. No doubt something went wrong when it was decommissioned. He would bring these back, then make another trip. Then, walking back to the lab, one of the boxes cracked open, and a human-like, robotic creature was revealed lying on the floor, curled up into a ball. It opened up, and started talking in an unnatural human voice. “Ah, yes. A fellow robotic life-form. Of course, we are not really life, we are just programmed to live a life.” The thing said. Will nodded. He ran back to room 1, and gave the scientists the tube. “Only one?” They questioned. ‘Well, one kind of got out.” Will explained. “Why hasn’t it killed you?” A scientist shouted. Another one began to speak. “Because of his robotic appearance!” “Listen Spartan, you have to destroy it! This is why we have gun turrets, because of the attack in 2403, when robots went ramped, and escaped to the cities, and fortified residential zones. Destroy it, before it finds us.” ‘Right away!” Will replied. He didn’t bother saluting to a citizen. “Three more coming left!” Sergeant screamed. He fired his last two rounds of his Sniper Rifle into a Brute’s head. He dropped his rifle, and picked up a nearby Covenant Carbine. This weapon was so unlike the regular plasma weapons the Covenant normally used, except for the ‘Needler’. For some reason, he didn’t get the same feeling when holding one as he did holding the plasma rifle, or other plasma based weaponry. Flood emerged from the cave. The Elites appeared ticked off that they had to do this all over again. Johnson fired a round of the Carbine right into the Elite-Flood’s chest cavity. He realised that he had popped the infection form within, in which the flood fell, dead until repossessed. This was still a great strategy, until of course the flood became immune to it. The once with energy shields were immune, but the human flood had no chance. An elite flood form carrying a sword ran towards the Arbiter. The Arbiter fired his plasma rifle with his right hand, frantically searching for his sword-stub with the other. Nothing. He couldn’t find it. The Flood form issued severe slices to the Arbiters chest and neck before collapsing onto the ground. The Arbiter fell. Was he dead? Was he defeated? The Chief found a plasma grenade lying on the ground. He grabbed it, and pushed the button. It was activated. He threw it, and hoped he would kill something. John popped around the corner, and aimed a Battle Rifle to the Jackals operating the turrets, they started firing, and John got a headshot on the on the first one, then fired nine rounds into the second. It died. His shields were low, and he jumped behind the wall again. “Sam, stay here. You don’t have energy shielding yet.” “Energy shielding?” Sam asked John. John jumped around the corner, and fired his Magnum at the scrum of warriors. Out of nowhere, and Ghost boosted right into the Chief. Master Chief was knocked backwards, and into the wall, creating a three-foot Spartan-sized dent in the wall. He tasted the familiar copper and blood mixture. He saw a white light. The light got bigger. And bigger. He entered the white light. Yep. THere you go. I swear it looked longer on Word. Once again, JOIN MY MAILING LIST! Sign up now, while you still can!!!

Havok messed up Elite kills in campaign, though. Btw, keep it up. It's not a monument of sci-fi, but it's a lot more entertaining than Nylund's work and definitely better than Dietz's. Nylund just ripped off Ender's Game. The best way to become a better writer is to read better books. Please take my advice. (Dune would be a staple read)

I've been working midlessly on chp 7, waiting for the moment to release it. Theres a nice juicy kissing scene between Sam and Kelly. (100% sarcasm) I have some sweet fight scenes, though, not to mention another plot twist. (Chief leaves? HOLY ****) Many will disagree with my decision. But being wrong can lead to decapitation, and that looks funnny! Remember, my mailing list remains open, and your e-mail adress remains highly confidential. Well, not that high, it's just no one sees it but me. You can PM me or e-mail me @ NVGC_19@hotmail.com (I have 9 e-mail adresses, so I just use one now). My group has 66 members and is growing, so join now! We really finally got some decent talk going on the Forums. P.S. HAVOK physics system rocks! Nothing better than blowing a box in someone's face, than killing them with the SMG will they thing [i] WTF just happened??? [/i] once again, GREAT JOB BUNGIE!

Sure, just give me your e-mail adress!

leave room on that list for me, when's next part?

I love Sam as well! ~~~~~ Whoever's gamertag is EvilTurkey64 or something like that, and they sent me a friend request, PLEASE SEND ME ANOTHER!!! I accidently denied it! (Me in my involuntary movements!) Oh well, I tried to send you one, but I couldn't get your GT right. Right now, I have 55-60 people on my friends list, and thats room for a lot more, so I'm acepting any fanfic-friends who want to play with me on Live. I mostly play Rumble Pit, Team Slayer, or Custom games with my friends. ~ONCE AGAIN< EVILTURKEY GUY PLEASE SEND MEA ANOTHER REQUEST!!~

[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] roninfoxtrot OMFG!!!!!!!!!!! You copied and pasted this story from some one elses post. i am going to try and find the topic and post the link here. OMFG!!!!!! Make up your own story man.[/quote] I wrote it myself you idiotic idiot. Get a life. look look look, you'll never find it. I've changed the title of this thread a while, so that might be it.

You wrote it so Sam lived! I love you!

nvm keep up the good work! [Edited on 3/6/2005 12:05:22 AM]

dude i really have respect for you as a writer. you are genious. i enjoyed erics boocks, but yours keep me wanting more. personally i think you are a better writer. i joined your group and stuff. my gamertag is: Shabalama thnx for writing

nooo, damn you, the story is the best story i have ever read in my life, how dare you do this, post post, post every page you have, now!!! aahhh:(

oh well i can't find it

OMFG!!!!!!!!!!! You copied and pasted this story from some one elses post. i am going to try and find the topic and post the link here. OMFG!!!!!! Make up your own story man.

Awsome story so far. Keap up the good work Chief.

Thanks guys, join my group ASAP, and from now on, I think it'd be cool if we all posted or Live gamertags (if we have it) I'm working on the next part, don't worry!

It's a fun group

This story is great! Kudos to 117! I'll probably join your group, but later because I gotta go to bed now.

so am I, and YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sam's back, I creid when he was killed off! [Edited on 3/4/2005 5:30:14 PM]