dont worry, it gets better as you read!
“That ship’s not one of ours; take it out!”
“This is Spartan one-one-seven, can anybody hear me? Over.”
“Isolate that signal. Is that you Master Chief? You mind telling me what your doing on that ship?"
“Sir. Finishing this fight.”
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Master Chief checked his motion tracker. There were no signs of flood in this part of the ship. Thousands of Brutes and Elites were scrambling to board the ship to get to Earth to annihilate the humans, but most Elites were denied by Honour Guards. It was all Brutes running the show, not to mention Jackals and Drones. Master Chief noticed the Elites starting to break the Covenant, and fighting the Brutes, regardless of what the prophets had ordered. Without Cortana, what was Master Chief?
A geneticly enhanced super-soldier.
He was… lost. No. Not lost. What was this feeling? He didn’t know what to do. Kill the prophet of Truth? Yes. That was his mission. Kill or capture. Either way; he had to kill everything on this ship, may it be Elites, honour guards Brutes, Hunters, Drones, Jackals… everything. “Well, here it goes.” Chief said to himself. He jumped into the ship, and slid down the ramp. Spartan John-117 walked up the arching stairway. Corridors… empty. No one anywhere. Then, out of nowhere, something hit John and his shield meter reduced to absolutely nothing. Jackals with Sniper Rifles. John thought as he dived behind a wall. He didn’t know where the bullet had came from, but the Prophet knew he was here-and he prayed that the jackal wasn’t on an angle to hit him. Nothing sizzling plasma or explosive Brute Shots, nor any Carbine rounds-and yet, Master Chief’s motioned tracker had dozens…hundreds of red dots-indicating enemies. Should Master Chief kill the prophet, exit the ship, then to the surface of Earth? No. He would find out the secret of this ship, and then protect Earth. Master Chief still had the nagging thought in his head-What do the Covenant want from Earth? Was it like the crystal from Reach, or was there something even more important? That didn’t matter now… The red dots proceeded on Master Chief’s position, when only about three meters away, stood a Brute Captain. Luckily Master Chief still had a large box between him and the Brute. Master Chief wished he had his fellow Spartans here-were they dead? All these questions… John threw a plasma grenade he had picked up on High Charity, it stuck to the Brute Captain’s face, and detonated. This explosion killed about seven other Brutes following closely behind the Captain. Now, it was the oh-so-familiar sound of plasma sizzling the through the air, but no grenades. Chief heard the Prophets voice, yet he did not know how, probably from the COM frequency. “The Demon is now on board. I want all Honour Guards and personnel to the bridge of the ship to guards the,” The Prophet paused. “Sacred Icon.” The Prophet finished. Master Chief noticed a lot of the Brutes turn and head towards the bridge. Master Chief now only had to take out 43. That was a break. Master Chief had no weapon, only three more plasma grenades and a fragmentation grenade, not the weapons of choice in this situation exactly. Master Chief poked his head around the corner and threw a grenade-without even looking to see what was there. About twelve Jackals spread across the hall, the hall only being two meters wide, caused the Jackals shield to overlap. Even if Master Chief got by those, there were two hunters with their shields up behind the jackals. John noticed a Needler on the ground. Why had he not noticed this before? John asked himself. He jumped of his cover position, fired eleven rounds, and dived back. He noticed his energy shield bar had dropped by a quarter. They were ready for him.
[Edited on 7/2/2005]
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aaaaaaahhhhhh! noooo! lol
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Yeah Chapter 10 is the sweetest chapter but the file disappeared!!
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oh, ok then.
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Hey Ultimate Grunt- don't bump too much because they'll lock the thread. But yeah chapter 10 is going really slow right now. See you soon.
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[b][u][i]Come on people! Keep this place active![/i][/u][/b]
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Master__Chief117 [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Vasheeth I have read every chapter posted in this thread and found that it is quite good. I would like to see some more added here.[/quote] Thank-you, always nice to have a new reader. Would you like to join the mailing list?[/quote] I do! I do!
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Vasheeth I have read every chapter posted in this thread and found that it is quite good. I would like to see some more added here.[/quote] Thank-you, always nice to have a new reader. Would you like to join the mailing list?
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I have read every chapter posted in this thread and found that it is quite good. I would like to see some more added here.
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Okay, pretty far in to Chapter 10 now, with no editing and no reformatting to get it into Microsoft Word. Anyways, hope to see it up by September =(
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Okay, I just emailed to myself, and added some to it (I think this is the best yet) and now I'm just waiting until I get home and have time to continue
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Okay I'm at the computer where I have the beginning of chapter 10 right now, so I'm gonna email myself then accept it when I get to my home computer.
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Oh thank god! Please keep this thread alive! Me want more! Me want more!
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Well for starters, ot would take several posts and a lot of copying and pasting to get it all here (which it actually is right now). But also, when i e-mail it, I can send it as a Microsoft Word Document (which is the main format it is in and should be in), and it's easier to read, in better fonts, sizes, no interruptions etc. It's definitely more effecient that way. You can even change it to fonts that you prefer if you want when I e-mail it. Just so you know, I did a few paragraphs (with editations) on a different computer that I won't have access to until after September (unless I somehow do get access to it, which seems about a 60-70% chance right now). Don't worry though.
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Isn't it just!
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you said something like you are going to mail the whole story including chapter 9 an 10 Why don't you just post it right here in this thread btw keep up the good work [Edited on 7/28/2005]
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Why thank you. Haven't had time to work on the next chapter however, but I can try. I have a lot of work to do.
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that @%#$ IS AWSOME!!! NICE WRITING
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Is anybody going to bother to post here?!? This is stupid! Somebody come and say hi! Now!
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Hey thanks man!!
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Ultimate Grunt Hey guys! MC117! Did ya get my e-mail renewing me?[/quote] I'm not a 100%, I did get like 5 or 6 so yours is probably in there. I'd have to check however. ANyways, I'll renew you.
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Hey guys! MC117! Did ya get my e-mail renewing me?
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Yeah the alliance is over.
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pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease try and post more, i'm really enjoying it ta ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Humans will destroy the covenent
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This is to all my fans: [b] Hello everyone. A long time ago I created a group where my fans can get together and talk about my fanfiction, and now I'm going to bring it back alive again. You may have noticed that I haven't exactly been paying much attention to my fanfiction lately, and more to fanfiction promotion and chapters. But that's probably over. As I promised earlier, I will be working a lot harder now that it's finally summer vacation. This summer I'm going on vacation a lot, and I won't be bringing my laptop, but no worries. I won't be going anywhere in August (I think) and still for the most part of July I'm here. So I can edit the first few chapters and improve them. (like they desperately need to be). Chapter 10 may have to wait a while because of the first few chapters' improvements, but once again, no worries. [u] (Part of news story from the chapter)[/u] This chapter's fanfiction set up will be a little different. Every chapter I make will be a thread. Example, my first thread would be chapter one, then I'd make a whole other thread for chapter two. You may then post your comments in that thread. I will be stickying them, but they can't be in order because the most recent one that got posted on would go on the top, therefore there won't be any order, but at least it'll be easier to read that way. I will also be making an archive thread where you can find everyone of my Bungie.net fanfic chapters, threads, and pretty much everything else. My e-mail address is NVGC_19@hotmail.com, if you want to sign of for my mailing list. [obviously] it's free. Every time a new chapter is released, you'll be first to hear it, and you get it as a Word Document making it thousands of times easier to read. [url=http://www.bungie.net/fanclub/55203/Group/GroupHome.aspx] You can find the chapter HERE/[/url][/b]
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I was gonna go to the Live Aids concert but I couldn't make it, apperantly Billy Talent was there, that would've ruled!