Hello there! So, as I lay awake at night in me bed, I wondered "Should I expand the Fireteam?", "How would my readers react?" "Would they like it?", "Do they have any ideas to put in?" and so on and so forth. So, yeah. Just answer in the poll! Or you know, post your ideas!
I have loads of unique and quirky characters stored in my memory chip (brain), and I'd like to implement them in my Takes! Who knows...
[spoiler][quote]"NOTHING IS CERTAIN!"[/quote][/spoiler]
ALSO.
It looks like the Fireteam's answering your questions, about anything and everything! ASK. You'll be given a story..ish explanation, heh.
[quote]Missed the previous Take? No worries:
https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/162296308 (Take 21)
https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/150599228 (Snark's ☆.。.:*・°☆future☆.。.:*・°☆ Stories)[/quote]
[quote][b]If you want to be kept up to date on my new Takes, just follow #gotclass! It's much, much, much easier than me trying to hunt you guys down.[/b][/quote]
[b]Meet the Team... [I]Fire[/i]team[/b]
[b]Warlock[/b]
Awoken, Female
"I have books... Of course I have books. I have [i]hundreds[/i] of books. The only problem is: They were meant for my Fireteam. And you can imagine that they don't get opened often." -Warlock, complaining
[b]Hunter[/b]
Human, Male
"What does the Vex say?" -Hunter, about to become incredibly annoying
[b]Titan[/b]
Exo, Male
"Don't worry! Of course I'll take care of her! And if anyone tries to touch her... Hehe... [b]I'll kill them[/b]." -Titan, taking a dark turn
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"You did [b]what[/b]?!" The Warlock said over the Titan's comm link in disbelief. She, the Titan, and the Hunter were riding their Sparrows on a dark, empty road.
"She said she wouldn't tell!" The Titan said, trying to alleviate the situation. The Warlock shook her head.
"Titan... I [i]warned[/i] you not to do [i]anything[/i] that might tamper with the past!" She scolded.
"How was I supposed to know that Glimmer tampered with anything?" He asked, getting flustered by the fact that he [i]might[/i] have put the team at risk.
"Titan, these are primitive times... These humans and their technology... It's so..." The Warlock looked for the right, derogatory yet subtle word for it all, until the Hunter tapped into the comms.
"You know, I can [i]hear[/i] you!" The Hunter said. The [i]last[/i] thing he wanted was for his own race to be insulted by [b]other[/b] races.
"Look, in the morning, we shall discuss this. Right after we find the appropriate resting facilities. If they even have those..." The Warlock mumbled the last part.
"[b]Hey![/b]" The Hunter shouted, catching the last bit the Warlock had said. Humans weren't exactly [i]that[/i] behind.
"Guys, guys!" The Titan said to both the Hunter and Warlock. "What's [i]that[/i]?" He asked, pointing to a small convenience store, which seemed to be in the middle of nowhere.
"Let us stop here." The Warlock said as she turned her Sparrow towards the store, the other two following her lead.
"Wonder why it has a big seven on it..." The Titan speculated.
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Steve ran out of his house to see the authorities surrounding the area.
"Wh-what's going on?!" Steve asked, confused. He looked around, until he saw a police officer questioning his little sister.
"And what were they doing at your house?" The man asked the little girl, having finished writing down previous details on his notepad.
"Mm," she began, pulling out a white lie, "There was onwy one." She said happily, bouncing up and down on her feet slightly.
"Thought you said there were two..." He said, tilting his head to side. The little girl shook her head.
"Changed my mind!" She wasn't the best at lying... But, she [i]was[/i] paid to keep her mouth shut.
The man came to a conclusion that he wasn't going to get anything out of her. He'd have to ask someone [i]older[/i].
"Amy!" Steve called to his little sister, running over to her and giving her a big hug.
"Mff! Big bwother you're cwushing me!" She strained, trying to wriggle out of his hug. Steve finally let go of his sister, and, still holding onto her shoulders, Steve started questioning her.
"What happened?! Are you alright?!" He asked worriedly. Amy nodded, a smile plastered on her face.
"I'm fine, I'm fine! There was just a wobber in our house, and I cawwed nine-one-one, just like I was 'sposed to!" She explained. The man that was originally questioning the girl looked at Steve.
"She originally said there were [i]two[/i]. And one of them was..." He looked at his notepad once again, before looking back at Steve. "Wearing a... Cape...?"
"The aliens..." Steve muttered.
"What was that?" The man asked, giving Steve a weird look.
"N-nothing!" Steve lied.
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A pale, Gothic girl leaned backwards on the store counter, chewing gum and texting on her phone.
The Fireteam entered the store, each of them looking in awe.
"Woaaaaah..." The Titan said in awe, as he looked around the store, eyeing all the food and candy. "This place is [i]amazing[/i]~!"
"Ayyyyyyy--" The Hunter remarked, running towards a machine that held multiple frozen, slushy drink combinations. "What is this bad boy?"
"Slurpee machine..." The girl said, still texting on her phone as she blew a bubble with her gum.
The Titan pressed his helmeted face against a display of doughnuts. "My goooooosh~! They have [i]doughnuts[/i] in this time!"
"Yeah... You don't get out from under your rock much, do you?" The goth snarkily remarked.
"'Ey, Floofy!" The Hunter called to the Warlock, who was looking for any source of reading material. "Hows about a hot dog?" The Warlock perked her head up after leaning down to check out isles of food, and [i]still[/i] no books of any kind.
"Oh yes. I do love a hot dog." The Warlock nodded towards the Hunter, who she could see over the isles. "They are simply [i]delicious[/i] cylinders of meat~."
The Hunter snickered. "Floof, you say the best things~..." He said under his breath, eyeing the display of hot dogs. "'Cylinders of meat', oh 'Lockie, you're [i]perfect[/i]~..."
The Titan ran up to the counter, holding multiple boxes that contained dozens of doughnuts. "How much?" He excitedly asked the girl. Who, was still texting.
"How much you got there...?" The goth asked, who couldn't be bothered to check for herself.
"Uhhhh, I guess... Maybe four... Five boxes?" The Titan guessed, lifting his arms that held the boxes to try and nab the accurate number.
"Okay then, lemme just ring it up..." The girl said, turning properly to face the Titan. "Will that be cash or credit-- Woah..." After she set down her phone, she looked at the Titan. Chewing her gum, she blew a rather surprised bubble. After it popped, she addressed the Titan.
"Are you from Comic-Con...?" She asked, still in awe. What the heck were [i]they[/i]?
"Why do people keep asking that...?" The Titan asked, looking at her name tag. "Ah 'Angelina'?"
She scoffed lightly. "Because you're in San Diego, Comic-Con happens here."
"San Diego...?" The Titan repeated. Where in the world was San Diego? "Uh, okay. Thanks Angelina." He thanked, dipping his head once in gratitude. "And by the way... I think Angelina is a pretty name. I like it!"
Angelina blinked, slightly charmed by the [i]oh-so-charismatic[/i] Titan. "Ah... Just grab your buddies."
Nodding, the Titan called his team. "Guys! Guys we're about to go!"
The Warlock nodded, muttering under her breath after having no success finding anything to read that [i]wasn't[/i] a menu, and called the Hunter.
"Hunter! Hunter, we are about to depart!" She called. No response. She was getting annoyed, fairly quickly. "Hunter?!"
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"Everything is awesooooome..." The Hunter sang along quietly to a tune on the iPod, looking for something to get the hot dogs out with.
"Everything is cool when you're part of a team, everything is awesoooooome..." He took out his knife and stabbed the hot dogs to pick them out of the display. "When you're living our dreaaaaam~..."
"HUNTER!" The Warlock called him, much more louder than before. The Hunter grumbled looking over at the Warlock.
"Yeah, princess?" He replied, oozing with sarcasm.
"Tsk, prepare for departure." The Warlock said sternly, getting annoyed with the Hunter.
Once the team reunited at the counter, the Titan handed Angelina some glimmer.
"Uh, is this legal tender?" He asked, still confused by the currency issues.
The Warlock helm-palmed, and the Hunter groaned irritably.
Angelina stared at the glowing cubes, speechless. [i]Who[/i] were they and [i]what[/i] was [b]this[/b]?!
[QUOTE]Take 23...Mateeeey?: https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/163050939[/quote]
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Edited by ThatAmazingIdea: 11/1/2015 11:08:41 PMCylinders of meat? Where is the guy who kept quoting everything sexual from your stories? We need him pronto! Oh and.... Titan pickin' up the ladiesssss.
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They should add a traffic cone.
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My Hunter Jake would like to ask Hunter a few questions: Da hell are you doing dude... You're in love with "Lockie", so man up and do something before Titan beats you to it. JUST DO IT! Do you like it when Lockie calls a hotdog a cylinder of meat for a reason? Wink wink. And what's your opinion of the hereafter sniper rifle?
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Make a female hunter that makes a love triangle between warlock, aura( made the name for her), and hunter by approaching him in the tower and convincing him to play doubles with her. This happens and she decides that she should sow up new designs for the two of them. Warlock is upset because the fireteam is only her and titan. Titan sees this and trys to make hunter come back only to find out that warlock likes hunter. I got nothing after that!
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When the hunter said ayyy I yelled LMAOOOO I play agario too much :(
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Again. SNARKII! WHY DO YOU HAVE TO MAKE US SUFFER!?!?!?
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Ok because the characters are in the past. There's no enemies really that can challenge them. Except one. AND HIS NAME IS JOHN CENA! Make Titan fight him plz
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Hunter in love <3 with Lockie
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I tried to read it, I truly did. So many words though... too many for me to spend time on on my day off.
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Plot twist.... TiLina confirmed
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0/10 N0T 3Nough pr0n
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Hands down, the most commented fanfiction i've ever seen...[spoiler]Mine is collecting dust :([/spoiler]
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Edited by Red: 10/15/2015 7:09:22 AMoooooooo snarki this looks like its gona be favorite story arc, i wonder how Steve will react if he find his planet unavoidable fate from the guardians, will he live until the humans find the traveler on mars for the first time, even better will he grow up to become lord Shaxx or the speaker? or will our guardian meet the traveler since we don't how much before the the golden age they are sent back to, they might even get their new super directly from the traveler :O, or will the hunter get home sick and decide not come back to the future since the past is more "non-fighting-with-killing-spacezombies-and-he-can-do-what-want-in-peace" and he can be with his people now ? snark you better be writing cuz i cant wait :3
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Be careful not to take on too much Snark. Your stories are really awesome, and every time I've read one I've chuckled. To be honest, my sources of reading material have really dwindled since they closed the Barnes and Nobles down the street. Gotta say these Takes have kept me interested, and kept me reading. Best of luck to you and yours! Sincerely, The Humble Hunter.
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Add some fans in? The ones you see comment on your takes a lot?
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Great job :)
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1 take a day doesn't keep the doctor away ;~;
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Well, having a bunch of new members would be sick and refreshing but.. aren't you only allowed three in a fire team? D:
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so they don't have parents?
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What if... Steve became a guardian...... #kinderguardian
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Snarkii. Man. Myth. Legend.
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In Character I know Kallas (aka my Titan) wants to ask the Titan a few questions. [i]So you died. Hunter probably found a semi reflective surface or something and something finally manage to kill you. How would you prefer to die? Perforation, Evisceration, Immolation, Sublimation, etc? Ever going to get a Glimmer-Ink Tattoo? If so what of? Favourite food?[/i] Now for some advice. Kitten Baby..... It's adorable. Make it happen Guardian.
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Can I have a hug from the Titan
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May I have the link to your first post where there is a list and link to every single one of your stories?