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Edited by Spawn: 5/24/2015 2:25:17 PM
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Alert your proofreader

The Thorn 3 grimoire card has two grammatical errors in its text. [u.1:3.4] You dismiss it, but [b]it's[/b] a very serious question[u]s[/u]. -- Two questions were asked, but the contraction "it's" is broken down to "it is." So the sentence reads "it is a very serious questions." "It" being singular, "questions" being plural. [u.1:3.8] If only the change was simply one of perspective. [i]You're "evolution"[/i] was no choice. -- The contraction "You're" is broken down as "You are." Remove the contraction, the sentence reads as "You are 'evolution' was no choice." That just makes no sense. The correct word for the sentence should not be the contraction "You're," but the pronoun "Your." I can get you the number of a proofreader who'd love to work with you...

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