Reply to this and I'll check back tomorrow!
Besides the fact that your sentences seem to run a bit too long (maybe add some commas?) the character is sounding pretty good! What set of gear does he favor, and what weapons does he use?
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As far as armor, im not quite sure what i want to create for him. (he is based off of my friends titan) And weapons (beyond what ill make up for him) are: The last word,Hard Light, and o forget what else at the moment. and as far as the punctuation and such.. yeah im notoriously terrible with it at times. however in my defense,Im doing this in my phone and tend to forget anything beyond the occasional comma or period. But thanks for the help stranger!