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1/22/2015 1:01:55 PM
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Interesting story. Lots of potential but you need to fix a lot of grammar mistakes. My advice is give this to someone before you publish and have them edit it.
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Sadly that is why I have never really gotten into writing. I always can make good stories and ideas, but when it comes to putting them into words I tend to make small mistakes in my writing.
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Don't worry about it. I am in your shoes as well. I have some friends read my work before I publish it and it makes a world of differance. Have someone either in the community or a friend you know read your stuff and they will find a lot of your shortfalls. (They kinda have to be grammatically inclined and know what they are doing as far as writing goes.)
