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10/11/2014 7:49:15 AM
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Constructive Criticism: you have an opportunity to stretch it out a little bit. It's easy to go and describe mars in detail as the astronauts walk through. Towards the end it kinda just hurried through. But overall, good work
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Thank you, it's appreciated. The only reason it sounds rushed though is because it's based off of the opening cinematic and the ending to it is abrupt. So I tried to stick to that. I do agree though, there is a massive amount of description that could be added to it. Possibly even more dialogue. I'll have to go back through and see what I can do. Thanks again. :)
