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Edited by McBitties: 8/15/2014 2:04:07 PM
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Who do you think your Guardian was?

[b]I wrote this because I was curious about what my Guardian's life may of been like before he died and was resurrected, also, I've been really bored since the beta ended, and I need my fix. Everything here is strictly fan fiction, and in no way reflects Bungie's thoughts. What do you people think? Who was your guardian?[/b] Memories flickered in his mind like a dusty, old jukebox sputtering back to life after decades of inactivity. The first few were faint, brief flashes of light, but they progressively became stronger and more vivid. His fifth birthday party, meeting his wife for the first time, the adorable smile of his precious baby girl. They kept flooding in, and just when he thought he couldn’t handle anymore, it suddenly stopped. He was in a mall, holding the hand of his daughter. Light shone brightly through the glass canopy, and people were bustling to and fro, just like any other day. He looked down to see his daughter smiling at him, she was pointing towards the storefront of a candy store. There was a lollipop the size of her head in the window; she loved lollipops. He remembered this day, actually, it’s the last day he could remember, everything after seemed hazy, as if shrouded in a dense fog. That was when it hit him. Darkness, he remembered the darkness. He jerked his head to the right, putting himself face-to-face with his impending doom. Before him was what appeared to be a tidal wave of pitch black nothingness, it was as if he was gazing into the bellows of space itself. It was hurtling down the large, open corridor, consuming anything unfortunate enough to be in its path. His awe slowly began to fade into fear and panic. He tried to grab his daughter and run, but he couldn’t move his body. He was stuck in a snapshot of the past, forced to lose his daughter, everything he held dear, all over again. “Ella, can you hear me? It’s daddy! Please, Ella, please hear me!” He frantically screamed with tears starting to stream down his face. It was in vain, part of him knew this, but he didn’t want to accept it. The darkness was closing in now, he only had a few precious seconds left. He choked back his tears and looked down at his daughter for the last time, his imaginary hand gliding across her cheek and tucking her curly blonde hair behind her ear. “Ella, your daddy loves you,” he said quietly, “and he always will.” Then in an instant, it was gone, and only darkness remained. He floated alone in the dark, empty space, his body uncontrollably convulsing from sorrow. “Are you satisfied?” he yelled out, “has my suffering appeased whatever sick, sadistic fetish you have?” Suddenly there was a flash of light and a feeling that can only be described as being struck by a defibrillator; although he had never actually experienced that himself. It happened again, and again. Each time the shock was stronger, and the light grew brighter, until he suddenly shot up and gasped. The air hurt as it shot into his lungs, but he breathed heavily nonetheless; wait, why was he breathing? He frantically looked around, but his eyes were having trouble focusing. The only thing he could see was the faint outline of what seemed to be a floating object in front of him. That’s when he heard it. “I’ve been looking a longtime for you, Guardian. I’m glad I finally found you.”
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  • It was a regular, spring day at the academy, and Daren lay next to Lucy, his girlfriend, in the tall flowing grass of the courtyard outside the traveler studies building. The sun was shining, and the waves could be heard crashing up against the rocks of the cliff just a few hundred feet away. "What do you think you'll do after graduation?" Lucy asked propping herself up on her elbow. "Honestly, I don't know, my parents want me to be some great student of the traveler, but all I really know is that I want to be with you no matter where I choose to go." "Oh" Lucy said "so, big plans for the future." "Yeah, I guess so." They were quiet for a minute before Lucy said "Daren, I don't want to follow everyone else's wishes, I don't want to go to the big cities on mars, or to Earth to look at that giant friggin orb everyday. What I want is something that no one will let me have so I'll just have to take it for myself." Laying back down she whispered into Daren's ear saying " I want to escape to mercury, to paradise, and I want you to come with me." " Okay Lucy, we'll escape, we'll go and we'll never turn back." The couple laid there for hours holding hands and daring up at the sky until rain started pouring and they had to take refuge in the traveler studies building. They sat on a bench in the deserted lobby, seeing as it was spring break and nobody felt the need to visit those stone cold hallways. They watched as a deep fog set in over the campus thinking how strange this storm was seeing as though the forecast was 90 degrees fahrenheit and sunny. The wind started howling and huge streaks of lightning could be seen shooting down from the clouds. The pressure on the glass grew stronger and stronger until the windows shattered sending shards of glass everywhere. Then, slowly the fog crept in the room, "run!" Daren shouted, but Lucy could not hear his words for the wind was too loud, the fog crept closer enveloping them in its dark tendrils until their eyes were useless because of the extreme dark. And that was when they felt a dark, heavy presence envelop their minds, crushing their souls into bits. Daren heard Lucy scream and that blood boiling sound was the last thing he remembered before falling into the darkness. That was, of course, the last thing he remembered until he saw a light. It was a faint light but a light none the less and it started expanding, stretching glowing tendrils out as if to grab him and pull him out of the sea of dark that he had been in for what seemed like centuries. He heard a voice that steadily got louder as he was being reeled in, away from the darkness. Slowly it got louder until he could almost make out the words it said and he could see something floating above him. "Hello guardian, I am a ghost, well, actually I'm your ghost and I've been looking for you for a long time." Sorry if this story was kind of long, I tend to get carried away when I start writing, I know it's not the best and I probably have a ton of errors in it but thanks for reading anyway. P.S.-IF YOU DID NOT READ THIS STORY I WOULD VERY MUCH APPRECIATE IT IF YOU WENT BACK AND READ IT. IT'S HARD TO REALLY BE CRITIQUED WHEN THE ONLY PEOPLE YOU HAVE ARE FRIENDS AND FAMILY.

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