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originally posted in:Destiny Fiction Producers
9/22/2017 8:48:22 AM
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Nice bit of military fanfic. however, the end didn't quite fitt
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the end of the story or the bit of binary at the end?
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The end of the story. It felt... disappointing
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Gotcha. First time wrighting something like this. Thanks for the feedback.
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Anytime. Also, it's small but the 'extremely hostile' irritated me. And the ending ('I'm putting my ship in full throttle... OH NO')... Why would he say that he's putting his ship in full throttle?
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dunno lol
