originally posted in:Collective Of Knowledge
Very well done, thought i should add the fact that the policy of the Firebreakers is attacking the enemys to move the battle away from the city and its population, additonally Saint-14 was a member of the Firebreakers back in his day. Roarack is a very famous member of the First Pillars and the fact that you have left out Rezzyl Azzir (The original guardian) when speaking of the Pilgrim Guard is also not ok. Lord Radagast; founded Firebreaker commander, founder of the Iron Lords and retook 5 miles of land from the fallen yes, but Commander Jagi, also a Firebreaker retook the land all the way down to the black sea, but never returned, he too deserve to be mentioned. Another worth mentioning is Holborn a Firebreaker who said that: "The best defense is a good offense. We are both shield and Sword".
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A quick additonal note, you wrote that the breaking of commands not was anof to topple the Chain order, but in a matter of fact; the Chain order was broken during the battle, yet the renskning three order manager to sucseed.