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Halo 3 Epilogue Story (Part Twenty Now In) see page 35

[b] Prologue [/b] Mist and distant stars swirled and danced in a dazzling display of colour. In the distance he could make out the faces of those he had lost, many of them friends but all were heroes determined to ensure the survival of mankind. But unlike them he had prevailed where they had not and against all the odds he had defeated countless enemies on countless worlds. He had survived and was now the last of his kind in a universe full of uncertainty. As he continued to drift in his new found peace the distant mist changed colour once more to a fiery red, which radiated with blinding beauty in the dark and empty void. His name was whispered amongst the stars over and over again, but then the whispering became louder until a deafening roar filled his already ringing ears. “John, wake up!” screamed Cortana. John quickly opened his eyes only to see the shattered and broken section of the frigate before him. He opened the stasis chamber and pulled his weightless body from its inviting warmth. All around him the hull of the ship seemed to warp and shudder as a series of bright red flares cascaded around the bulkheads. “Status,” Barked john “Re-entry Chief, we’re about to make an emergency crash landing.” Explained Cortana “Where?” asked John “I don’t know, but wherever we are it’s nowhere near Earth.” Replied Cortana John moved to the far end of the deck to see what Cortana was talking about. Below the broken UNSC ship was a large planet shrouded in darkness, the only visible light was on the horizon from the now rising sun. “Firing emergency thrusters!” stated Cortana Despite only having half the ship to use, the robust structure and redundant back-up systems were still capable of manoeuvring the hulk in the planets atmosphere. The ungainly shape of the UNSC frigate would provide maximum surface for slowing their descent. The only thing they had to worry about was the landing itself. [b] Part One [/b] “What are our options?” asked John “I could crash-land the Forward Unto Dawn, but I doubt that even you would survive chief. Our only other option is for you to get to one of the ships’ hangar bays and try and fly a Pelican to the surface. Once there, I’ll land the Dawn as best as I can.” Explained Cortana “I’m not leaving you behind, not again.” Stated John “Chief you don’t have a choice; if you stay you’ll die. Falling from the sky is one thing, but falling from the sky in 600,000 metric tones of frigate is another. Flying a Pelican to the surface is your only option.” Said Cortana John stared at Cortana as he weighed the possible options. No doubt every conceivable plan that he was going through in his head had already been examined, summarized and discounted by Cortana along with another ten thousand options within the blink of an eye. Her calculating abilities were only matched by his stubbornness, something which Sgt Johnson had remarked on more than one occasion. But deep down he knew that she was right and reluctantly agreed. “Where’s the nearest hangar bay?” he asked. “Two decks down, the damaged lift shaft is your best way of getting there. Once there I’ll try and steady the ship enough for you to fly out, but once your out it’ll be one hell of a ride.” Replied Cortana “I can handle it.” Stated John with a confident tone John grabbed the assault rifle and attached it to his armoured back before boosting himself off the stasis chamber and towards the darker section of the ship. Cortana had activated several way-points on his NAV computer all of which illuminated a small section of his display like a trail of proverbial breadcrumbs. Ahead of him the hull shuddered under the increasing stress of re-entry. Although they were still some way out before the ship would start to burn, John knew that the most time he had was around seventeen minutes. Then as if by some form of telepathy, Cortana activated a small timer display in the upper left section of his helmet which read: 17:28 before it began to count down. “This is how much time you have chief before the Dawn becomes too unstable for you to leave, so I suggest that you hurry.” Shouted Cortana John glided towards the lift shaft ahead of him and then placed an armour encased hand on the twisted door. John planted his feet on the floor before exerting some pressure on the broken doorway. After several seconds of pulling, the metal gave way and the door glided slowly away from him revealing a dark lift shaft that almost seemed to descend into infinity. After increasing the power to his helmet mounted lamp and boosting the gain on his night vision sensors, John quickly dived into the bowels of the Dawn. All around him shapes and shadows fleeted and warped in the changing light, giving the illusion that he was traveling with company. John only wished that were true. He would have given anything to be with his old team again. Cortana snapped John back to reality with a progress report on their re-entry; he was surprised to discover that almost five minutes had passed since he left the upper deck. John once again focused on his lonely descent just as the hangar lift doors came into view. Unlike the ones that he had left behind these doors were untouched, which presented more than just one problem. As there was no damage to the doors it left John with very little to hold onto. “Cortana can you spare any power for the doors at the hangar level?” asked John “Not at the moment chief, I’m using all I have just to keep us pointing the right way. You’ll just have to use your head.” Replied Cortana “Good idea.” Whispered John John pushed gently away from the hangar entrance and towards the opposing wall of the lift shaft where the magnetic guide rails for the lift carriage were located. After slowing and positioning himself properly John pushed as hard as he could towards the lift doors and smacked into them with the force of a small tank. The impact sent stars swirling around his head and momentarily lowered his shield strength to 76% before recharging. Cortana immediately noticed the change in his status and asked what was happening, John replied with his usual sense of wit. “Just following your advice,” The encounter with the lift door had left it bent and buckled with enough surface gain for John to twist the metal into a more appropriate doorway. After passing through the gap John found himself in a large room that barely resembled any sort of hangar. All him around were various and untidy piles of logistical containers that had either been left unsecured or had been shaken from their mountings. Ahead of him were six Pelicans; four were clearly damaged to the extent that flight was not an option and two of those had been ripped from their ceiling mounted transit clamps. The other two seemed intact and were still fixed to the large mechanical clamps on the hangar ceiling, but as John glided closer he noticed that one of them was covered in a series of large, deep gouges that meant re-entry would be more than a little warm. The last remaining Pelican, apart from a couple of dents, was still perfectly flight worthy, and the automated release system for that particular clamp was still working. It seemed that John’s unusual run of good luck was still with him. John swam in the zero gravity towards the working Pelican and hauled himself inside through its rear deployment ramp. Despite the outward appearance of the drop ship its interior was anything but calm as John made his way to the cockpit across an internal sea of scattered weapons and ammunition cases. The cockpit was a welcome sight and despite his bulk john managed to secure himself in the small pilot’s chair and activated the controls. Lights and display screens flickered into life giving the cockpit a strange glow that was more reminiscent of a Covenant cruiser. It had been a while since he had flown himself, but he had a huge area to land on; the planet below. So getting down would not be a problem. John glanced at the timer display in his SPARTAN helmet where it read 4:09; the trip had taken longer than expected. In a series of quick stabs at the control panel the engines erupted into life and John released the Pelican from its transit clamp and turned the ship around before stabilizing the drop ship in a small hover. “Cortana, status!” bellowed John “The Dawn’s a little sluggish but I think I’ve managed to stabilize her trajectory. I see that you finally got yourself a means of transport,” Answered Cortana “Opening outer doors.” As Cortana opened the hangar doors John was greeted with a blaze of light from the rising sun on the planets’ horizon. His faceplate polarized to compensate for the intense glare, allowing John to see the interior of the frigate around him once more. “Chief you’ve got less than three minutes, get out!” commanded Cortana John answered with a light push on the engines thrusters, which sent the Pelican towards the illuminated opening. The Dawn shuddered several times in the increasing turbulence before Cortana regained control long enough for John to activate the afterburners on the drop ship, sending it hurtling outwards and into the violent atmosphere. The Pelican jerked suddenly as it came into contact with the rushing air, sending Johns head down with the g-force. After a couple of seconds John regained his control on the nauseating dive and turned to follow the descending frigate just as the Dawn’s forward hull began to glow red from the re-entry manoeuvre. John fired the afterburners a second time and sped towards the falling frigate. “Cortana what’s your status?” shouted John “I still have control of the descent and expect impact in twenty two minutes, after I have made a series of-.” Cortana’s conversation was cut short as the antenna array was ripped from the Dawn in the glaring inferno. John followed closely behind in the Pelican trying to raise an answer from his artificial comrade. [Edited on 01.27.2009 12:56 PM PST]
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  • How long till the next part?

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  • But its wierd how its like EXACTLY the same...but w/e i had more fun just messing around :)

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] king pannu One of the best thought out and planned fan-fics ever. THe one thing the bothers me is that i thought i was the only one that thought of the name Halo: Epilouge as a new halo game title, i even started to write it a bit. Then i saw your and quit....your is better any ways. :P Now onto my next thing. NEXT PART NAO! Plzzz :P [/quote] Sorry. I think I caused that with my link...... You should have carried on with it, everyone has their own ideas.

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  • One of the best thought out and planned fan-fics ever. THe one thing the bothers me is that i thought i was the only one that thought of the name Halo: Epilouge as a new halo game title, i even started to write it a bit. Then i saw your and quit....your is better any ways. :P Now onto my next thing. NEXT PART NAO! Plzzz :P

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  • wow....amazing....I can't find the right word to explain how awesome this story is. I miraculosly stumbled on this topic and now just reading all the parts in one day, I WANT MORE. I am officially now addicted. Dude... If you make any books, I would have to get my hands on one.

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] MaxRealflugel You do realise that you're asking me to bring a character back from the dead? I'll look into it though.[/quote] I'll PM you with my idea.

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  • Bias' fate is unknown, he survived the firing of the Halos and perhaps he is in shards on different worlds. I think a shard of him is on Guardian (Palamok, the Drone homeworld) which is the blue eye. I'd go into depth on that theory but sadly that is not on topic.

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  • You do realise that you're asking me to bring a character back from the dead? I'll look into it though.

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  • I'm hoping for Mendicant Bias to feature somewhere in this fanfiction. And, could Johnson have survived somehow, maybe thanks to MB? Make it so Max.

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  • could you make the snipers "gauss snipers" (do exist, johnson uses one once) This would mean brutes exploding all over the place!!!

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  • [i] Shrinking back into the distant unknown, here i must wait for a reclaimer to restore what is rightfully mine... Galaxies will crumble before me as i climb the steps of reclamation. Until then, i must impatiently wait here in the distant unknown. [/i] [Edited on 02.07.2009 7:55 PM PST]

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  • [i] "From the darkness, a new light will spring forth and vanquish all those who dare to gaze at its beauty!" [/i] [Edited on 02.07.2009 6:50 AM PST]

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  • Lol. But, hey...I can dream, right? What? Dreaming isn't in the budget...Well you can take the budget and...er...shove it up my as*!

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] ajw34307 The Enemy approaches, people and planets and stars will become dust. And the dust will become atoms, and the atoms will become...Nothing... I can be epic too, right?![/quote] Sorry, but no. That's a privilage only the author holds.

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  • The Enemy approaches, people and planets and stars will become dust. And the dust will become atoms, and the atoms will become...Nothing... I can be epic too, right?!

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  • I think its time to ruffle some feathers. It's time, to unleash hell. A storm is coming...

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] MaxRealflugel Like the story Nuns. In a way it's like the Cortana letters that were released before Halo: CE.[/quote] thanks. thats kind of the effect that i was going for

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  • Wow, way back before the new millenium. Still no luck on the news story, It's disgusting, the way any and all machinima gets accepted, but a masterpiece like this is neglected. [Edited on 02.06.2009 7:42 AM PST]

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  • Like the story Nuns. In a way it's like the Cortana letters that were released before Halo: CE.

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  • yay plz get 21 up soon max!

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  • I'll do some or all of it this weekend, depending on how busy I am. Off Topic now: I have just started a brand new group and am eager to make a success out of this with likeminded folk. If anyone is interested, then just pop along to the Xbox Gaming League on my Groups tab. Back on Topic now, I'll get round to reading it mate and then I'll get back to you on your story. Cheers all.

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  • BTW, do we have an ETA on part 21?

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] MaxRealflugel No it's not a Halo story. If it was, I'd be looking at a law suit for trying to release something without their sayso. It's a thriller with a military twist, much like a Tom Clancy novel.[/quote] ahhh thats true. that was a dumb question on my part. well thrilling military twists sound exhilarating so if you do publish anything of that nature youve got a least one faithful reader so far! edit: if youre interested, i recently posted a piece of my own writing on these forums. its pretty short. it shouldnt take more than 5 to 10 minutes to read. but dont worry about reading it or not; ill understand if youre too busy writing the rest of this awesome story youve got here =P. you can go to my thread [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=30045999&viewreplies=true]here[/url] i'd appreciate it if you read it and let me know what you thought, but i won't be offended if you dont wanna read it. [Edited on 02.05.2009 2:26 PM PST]

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  • No it's not a Halo story. If it was, I'd be looking at a law suit for trying to release something without their sayso. It's a thriller with a military twist, much like a Tom Clancy novel.

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] MaxRealflugel Cheers Wolverfrog. I've tried twice before, but it came to nothing. Thanks Nuns, but all I really want them to do is turn around and say either "We like it Max, it really is in keeping with the whole Halo universe, but it won't become the next game." or "No it's pants and please stop writing." I'd just like to know one way or the other. I just want to hear their opinion. I'm not asking to be hired as a writer (although that would be a dream come true), I just want to hear what they have to say about it, and what they think of the whole fanfic thing. I would be surprised if they hired me to be honest. I have no writing portfolio to speak of (apart from some casual writing and this story), and I'm sure they would be a little sceptical or concerned if they hired an unproven writer. Even though I am writing a novel at the moment, which is coming along nicely, they might consider such a thing a little risky. The way that I write my Halo parts are quite different to how I write in a more proffessional manner. In the Epilogue story I tend to shorten things, or dilute them a little. This being due to the limit of characters that the thread will allow for each post. I were to go into far more detail and emphasise the emotional side of things even more, then each part would be more like an entire chapter, taking up a whole page with a wall of text that may be too much for some readers. These parts are meant to be a more relaxed and casual read for those who like diving into the Halo universe from time to time. But more than that, I just like to write.[/quote] i understand that. it'd be pretty cool to hear from bungie. but i dont think they pay attention to fan fiction in general. the only things that end up on their front page are montages and machinimas. but it would be awesome if they put someone like you in charge of continuing halo's storyline. your writing is very similar to the writing in the novels, and most of the stuff in your story is fairly plausible given what we know about the halo universe. you mentioned that youre writing a novel. is this thread your novel or are you writing something else separate from this? in either case, i'd be very interested in reading it.

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  • That was a great piece of writing. To get this straight this has nothing to do with the epilogue story right? I loved the detail you put into the Captains overall "feel"

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