originally posted in:CentauriAlpha Fan Fiction
I've always loved a good mystery story. Great work.
"He was murdered on purpose" is a tautology, but other than that great writing.
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Edited by JarodColdbreak: 4/16/2015 5:12:59 AMOooh thank you!! Really helpful advice, you are right and just cleared some word meanings for me! Corrected, thanks!