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Edited by L117:
2/15/2015 2:38:26 AM
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Nice! for a beginner
My review as a professional artist:
•Okay balance
•Need to work a bit on the texture
•Improve your Emphasis
•Increase the amount of Scale you put in it.
If you work on that then your hand drawn warlock will look Great!
But on honestly your lines look bad,horrible Emphasis,and hard to follow.
But great job for a beginner!
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As a professional artist you should know how to critique a beginner (age 13) artist better with less advanced suggestions.
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thanks :)
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The best advice that I could give to you is to not worry so much drawing all the small details. Sketch your reference picture and do it fast. Don't worry about mistakes just draw what you see and keep the pencil pressure light. Once you have the overall structure of the drawing done then you can go in and fine tune the drawing by slowly going over spots with a little more pressure from your pencil.
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k thanks
