From popular demand here are the links to all 16 chapters. I will be adding a link to this post in each chapter post. There is a lot, for new readers it would probably be best to right-click on each chapter and open it in a different browser tab so you don't lose this Table of Contents. NOTE: I wrote this prior to The Taken King, several things were revealed that no longer line up. Fan-Fiction. Enjoy!!!!
Adding Link to other story: https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/106891427/0/0
[url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/100293343/0/0]Chapter 1[/url]
[url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/100293779/0/0]Chapter 2[/url]
[url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/100294377/0/0]Chapter 3[/url]
[url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/100295222/0/0]Chapter 4[/url]
[url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/100295734/0/0]Chapter 5[/url]
[url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/100296388/0/0]Chapter 6[/url]
[url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/100296978/0/0]Chapter 7[/url]
[url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/100297520/0/0]Chapter 8[/url]
[url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/100297812/0/0]Chapter 9[/url]
[url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/100299060/0/0]Chapter 10[/url]
[url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/100299361/0/0]Chapter 11[/url]
[url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/100299675/0/0]Chapter 12[/url]
[url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/100300149/0/0]Chapter 13[/url]
[url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/100300485/0/0]Chapter 14[/url]
[url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/100300959/0/0]Chapter 15[/url]
[url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/100301363/0/0]Chapter 16[/url]
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Any other stories coming soon?
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Still love it
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I still love your stories
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This is still a great read
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Love this story!
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Bookmark awesome story ;)
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This is easily the best destiny story I have ever read however the paradox mission totally disproves all of this.
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Revive
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Do another, I raed two of your stories and need to read more!
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Love it
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Makes me want to play VOG again with more emotion
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This needs to be read by all guardians
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NECROBUMP
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I kinda wish destiny focused on the raid stories along with regular stories, fingers crossed for the future c;
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I hate reading would be cool if you made a voiced version
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This was amazing
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Here is an idea i came up with. Maybe this can inspire you to write a sequel to this story about the Vault of Glass! [u][b]CONCEPT ART - NEW VEX RAID (TOMB OF THE HEZEN LORDS)[/b][/u] [url]https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/137202071/0/0[/url] Here is some fan lore exploring the possibility of Osiris having a connection with Kabr... [url]https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/138729220/0/0[/url]
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Bumped to save
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Can someone bump me please so I can show my friends
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Absolutely spectacular. Just the right amount of creative license while staying true to the lore provided. I do however have a few complaints. The dialogue doesn't seem natural all the time. Phrases like "I think my leg sustained serious injury" doesn't feel as natural as just saying "I think my leg's broken." It's almost as if English wasn't their first language. (Who knows, maybe it wasn't, but let's assume that it was.) It doesn't take away from their character, they're all dynamic enough to be identifiable, Preus being the weakest of them though, but it does take away from them speaking in a way that we've seen from things like banter between Eris and her fireteam, very smooth and almost like Wild West like, which in a way, is what Bungie created, just more space themed. TITAN A.E. comes to mind. Again, the dialogue does create clear traits about each character. Kabr doesn't speak casually, because he doesn't want to get attached to them, but some of the dialogue feels like there's a dialect barrier. On a lighter note, Kelvin reminds me of Anger from Inside Out. Keep up the excellent work.
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This is by far my favorite fan made story in a while. I personally consider it canon because I felt such a connection to the characters and I love the explanation you gave for guns esp regarding super good advice's origin- the cutest ghost gun ever. I see the vault of glass so differently now- my favorite raid to do. Like a lots of things happened here. I look forward to reading your other works!
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This is so good man! You have true talent. I enjoyed ever second of it. I'm trying to write a story of my own and can't get the links to work properly. Can you tell me how you did yours?
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Let me just say that this is incredible. You should definitely do a story on Crota's End and the House of Wolves DLC as well. You have an amazing talent. BUMP