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"The Blood of Aezathra" Preface

[i]So here's my improved version of my fantasy epic preface. I was tired when I made the last one, and missed some errors and forgot tags. Unable to edit the last thread for reasons I won't bother disclosing, I wanted to correct those issues to convenience any who might be interested in this. This has been a long time work of mine, that unfortunately hasn't reached the writing phase yet, and has only recently gone into the planning phase. This isn't your typical fantasy full of elves, dwarves, wizards, orcs, goblins, trolls, and dragons, nor is it your kidsy bright themed Disney fairy tale or fable. This is a dark tale, wrought with action, adventure, pain, tragedy, death, war, etc. Though on a fun trivia note, this was a storyline concept I was working on when I wanted to be a video game designer about ten years ago. Now, I'm working on making it a novel. This is only an introduction to "The Blood of Aezathra". I look forward to your thoughts. Enjoy and thanks for reading. (The link above contains another short piece of history for this story.) This link as well offers another piece related to this story: [url=http://www.bungie.net/en/Clan/Post/39972/83750875/0/0]At the Edge[/url][/i] [spoiler]https://docs.google.com/drawings/d/12wbnKZAZNJEaM-3m_xbHmfvEPBka3YhKXL-wzUfynCU/edit[/spoiler] Strength. Honor. Love. Peace. As was the land of Aezathra. As was the Age of Solidarity. This era of unmatched strength and tranquility was unparalleled in any of Aezathra's ages. The Age of Solidarity was the pride of the land's years. From the Shores of Eodorath in the west to the Othrethoa Coast in the east; from the Sea of Kazodoh far in the north to the shield of the Athrogmak Mountains in the south, the peoples of Aezathra lived in peace and joy. Armies drank nights away with laughter, kings walked among peasants as friends, and ballads of glory were sung for miles around. Strength and honor. Love and peace. As was Aezathra. As was its children. But good things come to an end. For strength cannot reign without weakness. Honor cannot prevail without dishonor. From love, hatred birthed. And peace. Peace cannot exist without war. Far to the south, beyond the Athrogmak Mountains, a people less blessed than the northern nations lived miserably in the harsh Shograreth Desert. Clinging desperately to life in the Ergs of Tektabar, the Vokkeba grew immeasurably resentful of the kingdoms of the north, for their children grew old in cities of prosperity and plenty. But in the merciless wastes of the desert, the Vokkeba watched their young die of hunger and thirst far too many times. Though their distant kin, the Shazolo in the north, opened up their lands and offered to share their halls with them, the Vokkeba were a bitter and envious people, and no generosity could wane the clinging parasitic hatred they had for their relatives. They believed that the Shazolo's fortunes were undeserved, or rather misplaced, and they didn't intend to share the plentiful lands with the nation they loathed with passion for as long as they could remember. Their malice festered and grew stronger. The Vokkeba waited. And after years of preparation, they led a campaign of war against the kingdoms of the north. They trekked through the Ergs of Tektabar, marched over the Regs of Erotath, and when they emerged from the Athrogmak Mountains, the Age of Solidarity ended swiftly. And for the times that disappear, something must take its place. Thus, the Age of Strife was born with the Age of Solidarity's death. The Vokkeba were a terrifying foe, full of wrath, and their thirst for the Shazolo's demise drove them mad, and their desire to bring about the north's prosperous peace to end spread across Aezathra like a vicious plague. The southern hills and woodlands north of the shielding arm of the Athrogmak Mountains were stained red with blood and burned black with fire. Death was met thousands of times as the Vokkeba pillaged villages and razed them to the ground, leaving behind nothing but carcasses and ashes in their wake. The victims of this crusade were left with but two choices: face a quick and merciless slaughter or attempt to flee with man and beast at their heels. The Vokkeba were provisioned with many spoils in the early years of the war, and they grew even more powerful, both in body and mind. Their hearts blazed with an ever more potent lust to conquer the north as their victories amassed. They relished in their blood thirst, making them more deadly over the years of destruction, and soon much of Aezathra had been overtaken by the Vokkeba campaign, their dominion swiftly approaching the scale of an empire. An empire ruled and driven by power, malice, death, and war. As the innocents perished horrifically in the rage torn blight in the southern reaches of their nation, the Shazolo were unable to ignore the threat that invaded their lands. Refugees flooded their cities and warriors marched against the Vokkeba armies. During that time, their expansion slowed, as the regular Shazolo army held them at bay. Valiant and vigilant, the Shazolo succeeded in holding the enemy lines back in the middle of the Haledra Forest, but without warning, more of their adversaries swarmed out of the Athrogmak Mountains, and like a tidal wave, the surge of reinforcements broke through the Shazolo army hardly opposed. Never before had fear like the Vokkeba nourished, stricken the northern kingdoms. Their peoples were overcome with the dread of when and where the Vokkeba would strike next. With the shattered Shazolo lines, and severe casualties, the north was sent into disarray. Hoping they wouldn't need to do so, the Shazolo resorted to the Ehzakol, the most skilled of their warriors, brave and resolute, each man worth ten in battle. Though few, they were a force to be reckoned with, and to be frightful of. Led by their most skilled champion and experienced captain, Rezoaroh, the Ehzakol emptied Mazhedra, the Shazolo nation's capital city in the northern reaches of the Atheosha Prairie, and marched for the frontlines, ready to meet and challenge the Vokkeba's might. By this time, the Vokkeba, prevented from pressing any further north, spread to the west. In doing so, they enslaved the poorly guarded Ethashi nation that clung to the rich waters scattered there. They found enough resources to supply several armies, and being frightening captors, the Ethashi were forced to obey their hands and fuel the Vokkeba military. Having relied on the Ethashi people for aid, the Shazolo were then at a disadvantage and soon the difference in numbers and provisions began to overwhelm their hold on Aezathra. Spread thin and being pressured from many fronts, the fate of the Shazolo and all of Aezathra appeared grim. The Great War was bound to reach its end. Realizing the doom that would befall Aezathra, the Nobruen, a noble and kind people occupant of the Mountains of Kethromar in the north, became entangled in the conflict that had been raging on for years to the south. Their King, Dotrenon, a good and old friend of Rezoaroh and his family, took it upon himself to provide the commander and his people with whatever supplies he could spare. Initially, the Nobruen had absolutely no intention of getting involved with the Great War, and some still didn't long for it, but some understood their kingdom wouldn't be spared from the Vokkeba's lust for dominion and they would become engulfed by their murderous crusade. The King was one of these men, and he commissioned the mines of Kethromar to be scoured for every trace of a special material. Although difficult to find due to its rarity, the Nobruen miners managed to stockpile a multitude of Helathra ore from the veins of the earth. Sent to the best forges, the Nobruen produced a supply of Helathran steel for their Shazolo comrades. Whilst this occurred, diplomatic efforts to end the war failed time and time again. And eventually they stopped entirely. The only conclusion to the conflict was a bloody one, and with that in light, the northern nations' leaders grew spiteful toward one another. Their wishes were divided, and although unified under the same cause, many disagreed in a number of ways on how the Great War was being handled. In Mazhedra, the Shazolo Elders couldn't agree on whether to annihilate the Vokkeba entirely or spare the survivors at their surrender, should it ever come. In Drelemor, the Nobruen lords argued over aiding the Shazolo. Some believed the Shazolo were already dangerously powerful enough, and any further reinforcement to that was unwise, as they could just as easily seek to overthrow the land of Aezathra as the Vokkeba had, leaving the Nobruen in an unwanted weakened position. Others, like Dotrenon, had faith in the Shazolo's morality and nobility, and refused to sit idly by and watch their allies perish under the Vokkeba's tyrannical campaign. Contention was becoming all too familiar, both on the earth of Aezathra and in the courts of its nations. (continued below)

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    [i](continued from above)[/i] The Nobruen King, faithful to his friend, Rezoaroh, continued to offer him as many supplies he could spare and the Shazolo champion accepted Dotrenon's offers graciously, indebted to the lord's generosity. All seemed well in Drelemor, despite the circumstances beyond their borders, and the King was feeling optimistic about his people's allegiances regarding the Great War, but one unfortunate day, Dotrenon was brought news on treacherous activity outside of his city. His eldest son, Deonu, the heir to the throne, was witnessed smuggling Helathran armor and weapons out of the city and delivering them to Vokkeba caravans. Utterly shocked and skeptical with his son's betrayal, Dotrenon called for him and asked the young man about the account himself. To his surprise, Deonu answered candidly, revealing that he didn't agree with his father. He thought that the Shazolo were secretly corrupt and fork-tongued and the divided, hostile disputes in Mazhedra were only proof of their true intentions. He said the Vokkeba had suffered enough in the Shograreth Desert and should occupy the heartland of Aezathra, for the Shazolo were far more dangerous as its inhabitants than the Vokkeba would be if they received what they wanted. And the War would end if the Vokkeba would be given what they desired. Brokenhearted and confused, the King was pressured by the nobles to execute his treacherous child. Refusing such an act, Dotrenon decided to first try to plea with his eldest son to reconsider his loyalties, but the young prince disappeared, as did a disturbing host of Nobruen smiths and soldiers, as well as stock of Helathra ore and arms. After Deonu's betrayal and self-exile became aware to the public, the elderly King Dotrenon, incapable of even stepping on a battlefield, had no choice but to enforce his son's execution, and laid the difficult burden on his second son, Beonu. Deonu, intended to be the next heir, had been taught the secret that Nobruen kings passed on from generation to generation. The Royal Key of Inscription was only to be known of by a special few, and revealed to even fewer, and with the technique known by Deonu the Traitor, the Vokkeba could most definitely become far more deadly than they already were. Never before had the Nobruen Kings needed to eliminate a bearer of such secrets, but this became Beonu's charge. Because of the Nobruen defectors joining the Vokkeba lines, the kingdoms knew how much more difficult the Great War would become. And as for Dotrenon, he dreaded horribly what would happen if the Royal Inscription was used by his son. In order to bring the Great War to a rapid and less bloody close, Dotrenon ordered his military to aid the Shazolo on the fields of battle. To the south, Deonu joined forces with the Vokkeba captain, Gezor. And in the north, Beonu accompanied Rezoaroh. Two mighty armies of hardened, grizzled men and massive, towering Nobruen stood against each other, marches like thunder and blades clashing like lightning. Just as he feared, Dotrenon's son used the Key of Inscription and the Vokkeba army had become even stronger. Only the Nobruen King understood what the implications were. As much as he didn't want to, he decided to use the Key of Inscription to aid the Shazolo and his kinsmen. An act of treason that would forever tarnish his family's name and strip them of their nobility. The newly acquired strength the northern army received came with the desire to finish the War with one last battle to decide the fate of their peoples. Messengers were sent to the Vokkeba camps, and Gezor accepted the challenge. Both armies gathered every able man available and met in the heart of the Atheosha Prairie, on the night of the Storm of Ahdelor. The heavens wept with a torrent and cried with thunderclaps under the black veil of twilight. Both gigantic militant shadows charged, every man knowing in their hearts that the final battle of the Great War had arrived. Flesh met flesh, steel met steel. And steel met flesh more than the former. All night, both armies fought like mad, desperate for life and country. Fate would have it that the commanders clashed with each other. In the midst of the bloody chaos, Beonu met his elder brother, Deonu, and the Shazolo Rezoaroh met Gezor, the Vokkeba leader. A furious battle was fought. Few were able to witness every strike that was thrown, but history tells that there had never been a more astonishing fight. For hours they contended with each other, and their subordinates, respectful of the pride that was at stake, stayed clear. Stories tell that the steel roared like a ferocious beast and the rain that fell on the men hissed like angry serpents. That night, they say enough blood was spilled to fill Roshedom Lake. Finally, the terrifying battle between the captains came to a close. Beonu succeeded in slaying his traitorous brother, but grieved and wept over his corpse until the following dawn. And Rezoaroh defeated Gezor, who refused to lose the battle still breathing, and was struck down ruthlessly, for Rezoaroh had no other choice but to give his worthy opponent a warrior's death. Then the light of morning finally broke over the mountains to the east. Leaderless, and suffering heavy casualties, the Vokkeba and their allies surrendered against their pride. The Battle of Atheosha had ended, and with it, the Great War concluded as well. Had it been any other war, the victors would have likely cheered and celebrated when it finished. Chroniclers wouldn't have declared it an era of its own if it hadn't been so wrought with death and destruction; the Age of Strife was the shortest of Aezathra's ages, but there was never a soul to live during or after it who would deny that it was the most bloody and grief stricken era. The battlefield of Atheosha was eerily quiet and still. Even Aezathra was sorrowful, for not a single draft of wind blew through those hills, clouds lingered, and no creature disturbed a single blade of grass. Like a virus, the silence caused by the battle's horrors followed the victors and their prisoners of war back to the northern kingdoms. Unless necessary, not even the captains of the battle spoke during their journey back. When they arrived, the dismay of the battle could easily be seen in the warriors' eyes, especially for the Nobruen, for many clashed with their close kinsmen. With the surviving remnants of the Vokkeba army and Nobruen defectors captive, the northern kingdoms had to decide on what to do with them. Although some wanted to condemn their enemies as a whole, Rezoaroh convinced the Shazolo Elders to send the Nobruen traitors to the courts in Drelemor. They were reluctant, but now as the nemeses of the Vokkeba, they were charged with passing their sentence. Coming to a judgment proved arduous, as the Elders and military leaders couldn't agree on the punishment. For nearly forty days, debates and disputes dragged on. "Execute all of them," some said, for they were responsible for the suffering of thousands. But some of the wiser individuals were against this, Rezoaroh of which, was one. He could see the defeat in the eyes of the Vokkeba and knew better than many that enough blood had been shed over the many years of the Great War on both sides. Rezoaroh was treated with derision by many of his seniors and peers. They called him many things. Fool. Bastard. Sympathizer. Traitor. All of which he tried to ignore, but was pained by deeply. Some of the more open-minded and considerate men of the courts agreed with Rezoaroh, and against the wishes of many of the Elders, a heavily armed Ehzakol company escorted the Vokkeba survivors to the base of the Athrogmak Mountains, allowing them to return to Orebbar, their home in the Shograreth Desert. They never heard of the Vokkeba again, but for those who decided to spare the them, they were never spared from the attacks of the kinsmen who desired execution. There had never been a closer ruling, but its outcomes at home would outlive every man, woman, and child that lived then and for many years after. The Vokkeba didn't succeed in taking the northern lands for their own. But the kingdoms of the north could hardly be called victors themselves. The Ethashi were finally freed from their captors and regained their homeland, but having expected an earlier rescue from the Shazolo and Nobruen, the Ethashi held strong resentment toward the "selfish people who had abandoned them". The Nobruen found King Dotrenon guilty of using the Key of Inscription. Although used with good intentions, his house, including his son and future descendents were stripped of their nobility and forced to scrape a living amongst the commoners. With that, relations with the Shazolo were cut off. The Nobruen traitors who were apologetic served an extensive sentence in prison before being released; for those who still despised their kinsmen were banished to Romoru, where they most assuredly found their agonizing deaths with haste. In Mazhedra, civil unrest erupted. Hatred had taken hold of the people. Elders abhorred Elders for their rulings. Mourning families abhorred soldiers for not killing all of the Vokkeba. And so they turned away from each other. Various senior Elders and military figures began to abandon Mazhedra, people who agreed with their ideals following them into the Haledra Forest. Over a few short years, Mazhedra, a reminder of the Great War and the unrest that followed within the city, had been emptied of every living soul. The other Shazolo cities followed suit, for the detestation was not exclusive to Mazhedra. [i](continued below)[/i]

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