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Halo 2/3 Book Posted, Pages 342-345. Page 351: Sequel Revealed

September 9, 2006- Halo: The Ark is officially available online for everyone to read. There will be several websites hosting them, and each additional one will be added to this list here. The Ark is also in this thread, from pages 342-345. Feel free to read them and post in this thread. The cover/concept art is also available for anyone who wants to see it. Just follow these links: [url=http://img370.imageshack.us/my.php?image=halocoverartfromjoeslayergk8.png]Cover art by JoeSlayer[/url] [url=http://img147.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sb2copygi6tc1.jpg]Back cover art by JoeSlayer[/url] [url=http://img201.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dandonahueconceptartvn0.png]Concept cover art by Dan Donahue[/url] [url=http://img224.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bookcoveroh0.jpg]Concept art by Paul[/url] [u]Here is the list of websites hosting Halo: The Ark[/u] [url=http://game-spectrum.com/news/entertainment/halo_the_ark.html]Game Spectrum[/url] Nov 17th, 2005- by now, there are 30 chapters of the book posted. if you dont want to look through this entire thread for them, click the link in my signature, it will take you to my official site, where all the chapters are posted. May 17, 2006- Work on the book has come to a halt as all editing (professional) has been done. There is work currently being done to get The Ark published, hopefully by TOR. Any questions about the book can be asked here, and i will answer them as promptly as possible. This is not an official bungie project. Click [url=http://www.archive.org/download/The_Ark/theark.pdf]Here[ /url] to download a pdf version of it. Actually, right click and save, otherwise it won't work. The following material is the original post from way back when, so if you're looking for the more recent stuff (that has been modified from reading the beginning works), please visit my website, which is in my signature, or click the link above to download a pdf version of it. Please do not ask for the last chapters, as i will not send them to you. Any and all news will be posted whenever it comes up, and i will say so in the subject heading, with the appropriate page number and date. Chapters are generally posted weekly, though i discuss each chapter's release date beforehand so confusion does not ensue. If anyone knows anything about the Halo 2 book, or what comes after it, let me know. Cause if nothing's happening with it, im gonna write it. Here's the prelude to halo 3(?)... Prologue Ninth Age of Reclamation/First age of Rebirth Yielding Righteousness/ Current Flagship The doors opened as the Arbiter walked into the Grand Chamber, seeing rows of his brethren. His Sangheili. They all uniformly bowed down on one knee, their heads to facing the ground. The Arbiter turned to his Spec-ops captain, now the general of the armies, and said, “You never told me there would be this many.” “I thought you would like being surprised, Arbiter.” He showed a grin, at least as best a Sangheili could. They started walking through the main aisle, with an honor guard walking behind them as protection. The Arbiter felt that the presence of the honor guards was not necessary, but understood the honor they must feel to be here, especially now. Walking past each new row allowed all to stand in that row, which alerted the Arbiter of some discrepancy. He turned his head left, and saw several rows of Lekgolo, their massive bodies gracefully rising as he passed. And further ahead, even more rows were filled with the small Unggoy, who fidgeted even while trying to keep their composer. And they all were bowing. He looked back at the Lekgolo, shocked at the amount of them in one room. He had never seen so many, and they could easily overpower the entire ship if they wanted to, but they also didn’t carry their normal weaponry, which attached directly to their arms. The Arbiter forced himself to look away so not to draw attention to himself in any negative aspect, for it could ruin his purpose here today. They climbed the ramp up to the stage, where the honor guard behind them went to the right side of him, and to the left he saw another waiting for his arrival. The Arbiter went to the front of the stage, and the Captain/General stayed behind several steps. He looked upon the crowd, understanding that the future may rest upon their shoulders. The chamber had fallen dead silent now, and the Arbiter scanned the room once more. He stood tall and came to the very edge of the stage. “As you all know, I am the Arbiter. I have been chosen for this… this honor, by our previous leaders. However, there may be those among you who believe that their word is heresy, regardless of when it was said. And because of my rank, my position, I will become the leader of our group, our new covenant. If anyone disagrees with my appointment as the Arbiter, speak now.” The chamber stayed noiseless, but faces animated and expressions came to color. The Arbiter looked back to his Captain/General, who nodded to him. Suddenly, one Sangheili stepped out of his row, and yelled, “Long live the Arbiter!” As the Arbiter turned back to his audience, he found that he was deafened by the cheering of his name. A wave of relief struck him, and he held his hands to show silence was required. Moments later, it was so. “You all honor me with this privilege, yet I must postpone our celebration for another time. This meeting is one of urgency, where three important things must be discussed. The first of which being the creating of a new Grand Council. After this meeting, all not stationed upon the Yielding Righteousness are to return to their home planets to decide on the council members.” “Our next goal will be to secure as many Huragok as possible. They are a necessity on every ship, world, and army. If we can take many away from the Prophets, it will give us a strategic advantage against them. They will undoubtedly be attempting the same, but we cannot allow them to take any Huragok, or the upper hand will be theirs. Do not forget their usefulness, even in the heat of battle.” The Arbiter sighed, and looked up at the lights, then directly into the holocron monitor, which was projecting his face among countless worlds. “The final article is something that has come into my thoughts several times during these past few days, something I would like express to you. The Prophets have always asked each race to join the covenant, or even allow them honorable submission, but not the Humans. These Humans are a strange race, yet nothing about them is notable in any sense with the exception to the demon. Regardless, it makes no sense for the Prophets to ‘fear’ these Humans. But I understand why they do. I have fought and killed them, as well as fought beside them as allies.” Whispers appeared throughout the room, and the Arbiter raised his voice to overrun them. “Wait!”, he yelled, and the chamber’s only sound was the Arbiter’s echoing voice. “Through my experience with these Humans, they fight with the same honor we would, use clever tactics as we do, and will die for victory if necessary. And now that we are not at the prophet’s side to protect them, they have much to fear of the Humans!” Cheers wailed throughout the room, and a group of Unggoy began jumping up and clapping. The Arbiter allowed the crowd to settle down by themselves before speaking again. “From now on, if you should see a Jiralhanae, Yanme, Kig-yar, or a Prophet, you are to conquer them, and show them who truly is strong.” He smiled as best a Sangheili could. “Even more so for the Kig-yar, if you know what I mean.” Laughter broke out, especially through the rows of Unggoy. The Arbiter walked off the stage, followed closely by both honor guards and his Captain/General. Suddenly the laughter turned to applause, as the Unggoy yelled, and the Lekgolo and Sangheili bowed again to one knee. The Unggoy followed suit quickly. With each passed row, the rising covenant would chant “Long live the Arbiter!” The Captain/General whispered gently to the Arbiter as they walked down the aisle, “ It would seen that you left a good impression with the covenant.” “No, we are not the Covenant anymore. We are the Preeminent." If you guys like this, let me know, I have about 10 more pages written, in no partucular order, and can post them if anyone wants to read them. [Edited on 12/17/2006]
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  • IM HOME Will read later

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] sir_brilliant well, i read most of it. I just didn''t know how to use the elite name system. I've asked around, and nobody really knows. so until someone does, i'll keep the names i've made.[/quote] ask Mr. Clark Brilliant he knows and swordxxxmaster, i am almost 100% sure they do mean something [Edited on 7/24/2005]

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  • Feh...I didn't think there was anything specifically special about them (Discounting the fact that they're "holy warriors" and have names for such lol) I just thought that it'd help appeal to your story is all.

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  • ok the naming system i think is quite obvious: four letters for the first name and the last 2 letters of the last name are "ee"

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  • there's a site that tells you the naming structure, i'll post a link to it when i find it, i have to go to camp right now but ill b on later. http://library.psyjnir.net/ [Edited on 7/24/2005]

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  • I know is a little late for this but the name of the new covenant could be the betreyed

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  • well, the names are supposed to have meanings to them. i remember something about how the second name is made up by three parts, and each one means something significant. if i were going to simply use that naming structure you said, then i can come up with names. however, i was hoping to get a more...intriguing way of doing it.

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  • Well, the name system is fairly simple. For example: Zuka 'Zamamee Isna 'Nosolee Orna 'Fulsamee Bako 'Ikaporamee Noga 'Putumee These are all names for five of the Elites in The Flood. The beginning part of the name is always (Except for a few cases I think) four letters and two syllables. The second part of the name always ends in a 'mee' and is usually three syllables. It'd take a bit of time and creativity (You seem to have plenty of that lol) , but it shouldn't be too difficult. If you'd like, I can help you come up with a few names.

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  • well, i read most of it. I just didn''t know how to use the elite name system. I've asked around, and nobody really knows. so until someone does, i'll keep the names i've made.

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  • Lol, regardless, it's still a damned good story. More than a few times I forgot I was reading fanfiction, and not a novel for the series. I have a question though, in the books, the Elite's names were always something like Zuka 'Zamamee (The one who tracked the Master Chief) , did you avoid using that type of thing on purpose? Or did you not read The Flood? (I think I remember you saying you didn't read it lol)

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  • wort wort wort demon WORT WORT WORT!!!!!!!......I concur.

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  • alright, i'll explain what happened. the arbiter walked into this huge room, and then truth was there as well. while truth was monologing, the arbiter saw mc and the spec-ops commander(supreme commander in my book) come into the room as well. if truth didn't enter the room the same way the arbiter did, and it was a huge room, then there's more than one entrance. so the arbiter took one, truth took another...and mc and supreme commander took another! therefore, the arbiter noticed them poking their heads out of another entrance. that's it, i believe.

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  • SWEET chapter but im puzzled about ... He kept a steady eye on the Prophet, but quickly glanced over to the position of the movement, which stopped momentarily. A green helmet came into view, followed by a Sangheili’s white helmet. It instantly registered in the Arbiter’s mind whom had arrived and a grin came to him, but he dared not show it.... ok i can't see why the MC and the spec ops commander sneaking around in plain sight would make him want to grin??? was it dark or something and also what would it matter they still couldn't get through the sheild? --bursts into tears for being so confused...and probably stupid-- [Edited on 7/24/2005]

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  • no way dude...there's still 4 chapters left. the next ones gonna be the longest chapter ever...from me, that is. this last one was just a prelude to it. unfortunately, my dad has gone clinically insane, and is forcing me to get a job, not go to the college i wanted to go to, live at home for another year...the list just goes on. So i've got to figure some crazy stuff out to make him think i'm doing something productive, because he doesn't believe anything i say at all. hell, he said i had bad grades, and that if he see's any C's and D's, that there would be problems...when i've only had 3 of those alltogether throughout high school. when i said i didn't get bad grades, and that i could prove it, he said i was mixed up with someone else. wtf... anyways, bearing any or all of that in mind, i don't know how long it will take for me to get the next chapter up. and truthfully, i'm going through alot of measures to try to get this thing professionally done, so i really don't know when the next chapter will be up. all i can say is that it will be awesome, contain a huge fight, and there will be surprising things happening in it. don't worry, i'll still be around here though...so for any questions and such...

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  • Lol, I only noticed the sites in your sig after...About 68 pages or so lol. Are you going to continue it? Or is that all? Great stuff.

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  • Dude, this is great i love it and can't wait to read more of it

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  • yeah karma, that's right. and for everyone who tries going through the entire thread to read the story, instead of doing that why don't you just click on the link in my sig. the entire story is up on 2 sites, and you can check them out there.

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  • Good god....You have no idea how many pages of that I went through to find the story chapters....Only to discover that I could read them all in one place at The Ark.... Great fanfic, my friend. Great job. Nice cliffhanger on the end too lol. I'm impressed. Your story fits in very well after Halo 2.

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  • Green Helmet: MC (John 117) White Helmet: Spec Ops Commander ??? Anyway, great chapter. Uggh, cliff hangers... [Edited on 7/23/2005]

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  • awesome chapter Sir Brilliant and congrats on making this a sticky.

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  • for every cliffhanger you do a puppy dies :( [Edited on 7/23/2005]

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  • My only problem with this thread is I just started reading it : ( Good job SB Im impressed!! It's really cool that you're writing a Halo story of your own. I think the new covanant should be called the Mean Machine though! : ) That'd show em. I only read the first 4 or 5 chapters and then the new one so I dont know if you corrected this but when the new covanant (Mean Machine) refered to the Prophets they called them Heratics. That wouldnt really make any sense because they were the leaders of the religion so it was theirs to change pretty much. And it was Truth who did most of the crimes anyways. Oh and towards the end of Halo2 the Elite Commander says that the High Counsel was murdered so unless there are some other Prophets we never new about Truth is probably the only Prophet left. Im really sorry to do this because I truly do enjoy the story and if someone else said this just ignore it. ANYWHO just thought Id say that and make sure you change the rebel covanant's name to THE MEAN MACHINE. Keep up the great work.

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  • wow, as usual another bRiLliAnT chapter SB

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  • wort wort wort!!!!!

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  • awesome chapter! Keep up the good work lol, cliffhangers, you hate them, cause they make you wait :D

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Homer Time dam thos cliffhangers[/quote] lol, you gotta hate em, and you gotta love em.

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