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12/15/2014 4:37:18 AM
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Remember kids, "uneducated Neanderthals" tend to try to cover their tracks by using the biggest word they can think of to make themselves sound smart. Also remember "uneducated Neanderthals" have nothing intelligent to say in retort to a comment geared to make him sound smarter but went right over his head. Also remember "Neanderthal" means quite literally "uneducated human", therefore using it after uneducated is an unnecessary double use of the term. Also remember that no matter how many people don't like your posts/comments/replies you have the right to say them. and finally remember this is all information the Neanderthal above this post post would have gotten had he stayed in school.
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You're the only negative one in this thread so you win unique snowflake award. You started sentences with 'and' and they weren't even capitalized, so you should come to class with me. The whole thing was a continuous list that could have been condensed, and finally, Neanderthals were a group of hominids that were effectively wiped out by modern humans as well, as they were not as intelligent. The term "uneducated human" comes from that. I'd re read and edit your posts so you at least sound like you have an edge.
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Despite the fact that the guy was actually a jerk in posting that, it doesn't make your post any more intelligent. Uneducated human? As if the Neanderthals had the opportunity to be educated? By whom exactly?
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Not being a jerk when I say the fact that they lacked the opportunity to be educated, makes them uneducated.
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Edited by devilarmor 1991: 12/15/2014 5:01:02 AMOk so we're critiquing now. First off I started a sentence with "and" singular not plural. two neanderthal is a slang term used by scientists to describe the species "homo-erectus" which was the inferior species that gave way to what we are now "homo-sapian". Three I chose not to condense the list as most of it was sarcasm. Which once again, right over your head. "A"nd the word "and" is permitted at the beginning of a sentence it the "and" does not refer to a continuation of the previous sentience, but instead to the start of a new but additional part of a paragraph. Also please remember this is an informal setting in which grammar is only mildly important. Also I would recommend remembering for the next post I'm quite sure you're going to make in response to this. If you're going to criticize someone's work, make sure you are a) the smarter one, and b) correct. Otherwise you just embarrass yourself. P.s. you missed a "the" in your first sentience, and you're missing commas everywhere.
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Edited by CeriseArt: 12/15/2014 5:12:54 AMNo, I put commas where they needed to be, school taught not to put too many. Look at your P.S. because there is a mistake there I'm sure you'll have fun finding; in fact have someone read your entire post. Also, type an even bigger response next time, I'm sure it'll open my eyes to the wonders of the world. Toodles. Edited reply: I also laughed at you admitting this was an informal setting, yet, you started this because I was informal, well played.
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No offense guys but please stop. You're both acting like children. Why fight on the internet?
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The last reply was 4 hours ago why did you revive this?
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Well technically it's not revived it no one else respond so let's not please.
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No I agree with you, it never should have been a thing in the first place, all I was saying was that it did stop, four hours ago. I'm not mad, I'm just saying....
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If you're not mad then don't reply. Unlike the other guy, I don't wish argue.
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Oops I didn't read that right.XD no offense other guy.
