Hey, Guys! So, I wrote this Destiny Fan Fiction in a few hours and decided to share it with you all. I hope you guys enjoy. Of course, bungie owns all of this. I do not. Its filled with a bit of speculation, but you get the basic gist of it. Thanks guys!
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Edited by ColCaboose: 5/31/2014 4:14:47 PMVery well written and thought out. Love how you weave those delicious details into the rest of the scene. If I may make one small suggestion, I think the part where you say "his training quickly kicked in" could be mentioned a bit differently to better fit the environment he is in. That line seems like it would precede actual combat. Great job! I really love it.