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Edited by iwritestories:
10/22/2013 9:16:47 PM
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When writing a story...
How should I write actions [i]done[/i] to my protaganist?
Such as when my character is beaten
Should I write it this way...
[quote]A. Daniel was beaten by the prison warden.[/quote]
Or should I write it this way
[quote]B. The warden beat Daniel.[/quote]
Daniel is my protaganist. I want to write my entire story from his perspective. I'm wondering if this small thing makes a difference.
Does it?
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2 RepliesA good story writes the way the main character thinks. So for example, if your character was intellectual you would use more sophisticated words and sentence structures in and out of personal text. If he was under privileged and uneducated, you would use the respective structure and words. This is done many time is some of the most popular and well know books of history. Just do what you think is right for you.
