you have a very good writing talent, i just discovered this story today, i also noticed you stay very true to the writing style of the books, but since im lazy and think this is one hell of a damn story i would have to ask if there was say a website up or something that you could post here that contained your story, becuase i think its really interesting and i know alot of other people do too if this has been asked arleady i apologize in advance, but would like to say that you should obvously pursue a writing career, the only critisicism i would have for you is your detail, remember from what i ahve read so far, and thats the first part of the MC thing, so i may just be making an ass of myself, anyway keep it up, see if someone can get you a website operational, because you are one hell of a write, and I have known many writers, and I live with a few, so keep up the good freakin work