[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Sniper McGee Blimper’s tank[/quote] ♥TANK♥

Wow. Let me be the first to say [i][b]'no thx.'[/b][/i] I seriously thought you were taking an interesting turn when I read the first few paragraphs, Sniper. And then, out of no where, you lost me. Hardcore lost. Without a map. In fact, it seems like this wasn't Chapter 7 at all. More of a Chapter 6.5. Or maybe just a Chapter 6.2. We need more action and plot development! The problem with syndicated work is that to keep the readers interested you need to do more than just give them the latest edition. You need to give them a reason to come back next week, leave them hanging on the edges of their seats and screaming in frustration when they don't get the ending they wanted. Other than that, nothing to complain about. It was well written and obviously took time to think through. I wouldn't have had so many complaints if this had been released earlier. I guess I was expecting more of a bang when you returned. [b]: /[/b] [i]speed it up pl0x[/i]

Sniper McGee... your my new hero <3 <3 I want sexcy time with you!... and babies. [Edited on 02.27.2008 10:41 AM PST]

Daaaayyuuuuuuuuum, that is pure badassbeef mixed with winsauce. Can i be in it? But i don't want to be a bad guy, and please, if you do use me, don't kill me off quick.

[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Mabian [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Vaderhater027 That was awesome. And very immaculately written, if I may say so myself.[/quote] It's not perfect! That's what he gets for not asking me. But the story is interesting, at least.[/quote]Well, that's what happens when you aren't on MSN. He has to use me, and God damn is that ever a bad idea.

Very nice, keep it up.

That was good. Not as good as the Floodiad, but better than my Oddyssy. Good job nubcake.

Nice work McGee. A good read.

[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Vaderhater027 That was awesome. And very immaculately written, if I may say so myself.[/quote] It's not perfect! That's what he gets for not asking me. But the story is interesting, at least.

It's fantasic McGee. Keep working on it!

Love it, McGee <3 Like Sharpest said, he better come back to me or...or...or I'll cry! ;-;

Put me in! As some asian guy that sells rice... or goes around eating other peoples rice! :D

Genius. There'd better be three new chapters tomorrow though. I kid, I kid. That was awesome. And very immaculately written, if I may say so myself.

DAMMIT! He didn't make me a zombie with chainsaws like I asked.

I'm MYSTERIOUS!!! awesome! [Edited on 02.26.2008 7:54 PM PST]

I better not die. I have to come back to Wolfie. For secksy time.

Can i be the comic relief or something? after chuck norris, i am the best

This chapter took a lot out of me. For the love of God, enjoy it. [I]More rolling. But the men pushing him seemed to go faster with every step. Something wrong was happening. He sharply went around a corner. The men pushing him were running now. People started to shout behind him. Now it sounded like the whole world was filled with footsteps. With one final jolt, the men pushed the stretcher what seemed like past a door. The stretcher crashed into a wall as the doors behind it started to close. He was fading into unconsciousness again…but he could still hear the muffled screams of the two men who were pushing him from behind the cold doors.[/I] “A fine piece of craftsmanship, she is!” Blimper exclaimed with joy as he patted his tank affectionately. Flood lights flickered to life on the ceiling of the very large underground warehouse. It was completely barren except for the tank, Blimper, Sniper, and the others now filing in through a door. Vaderhater, Ada Astra, supercommiefu, Ltsmum, game fan, Sharpest and Wolfie all slowly walked into the warehouse. Ada noticed the shocked expression on McGee’s face and chuckled quietly. “Is everyone here?” Blimper asked the crowd. “Everyone except puffy,” Vader answered. Blimper showed a hint of disappointment in his face for a moment then shook it off. He looked at everyone, then spoke with a voice that echoed throughout the entire group. “My friends, the death and destruction that this forum has suffered is about to end. The moment that we have been fighting for is about to be achieved. Our comrades that have died will be avenged. Today, our souls will be put to rest. Do not fear death, rather, welcome it with open arms. Our enemy will fear you more for it! Today is when we take back the Flood!” As the members were cheering, cracking jokes, and in Sharpest and Wolfie’s case, making out, Blimper turned to Sniper and clasped his shoulder. “McGee…you know that we’re going to try to get you to Pyroshark. Whatever it takes.” Sniper looked blankly at Blimper, then nodded. Blimper looked like he was going to say something else then decided against it. He looked down, turned around and walked toward his tank. “I don’t want anyone else to die trying to keep me alive,” McGee said loudly. Everyone turned and started at him intently. Sniper looked for something else to say, but now that all eyes were on him, he found nothing. “Don’t worry McGee, I can’t leave your mom to be a single parent,” Ada broke the silence. Everyone laughed except for Blimper who just shook his head. The next few minutes were filled of clicks and snaps as everyone geared up. McGee climbed up onto the tank with Blimper and watched as everyone put ammo into their guns, picked out explosives, put on protective vests and made sure that they all knew their part of the plan. Sniper turned to Blimper and asked, “So why isn’t puffy coming with us?” Blimper stopped what he was doing but he didn’t look up. “He doesn’t believe in what we’re doing,” Blimper grunted as he continued to work. McGee didn’t ask him any more questions. Once everyone was ready, they all crowded around the tank again. Sniper thought he saw Blimper’s eyes gleam, but that might have been the lighting. “It’s been a privilege to know each of you. It will be an honor to die next to you.” He sharply saluted, and so did everyone else. “Now, for our plan to get going…I need two volunteers to escort Sniper. You all know the risks. Anyone?” Every hand shot up. Blimper smirked. “Alright…Vaderhater and Sharpest. You two know your way around the best.” The two soldiers started saying their good-byes, but as Sharpest was about to join Blimper on the tank, Wolfie grabbed his arm. With her lower lip trembling, she whispered, “Don’t ever stop fighting. For me.” She stepped forward and kissed him. Sharpest grabbed her hand, squeezed, then let go and stood by Blimper. Wolfie quickly regained her composure and briskly walked toward the door. Everyone followed her except for Blimper, Vader, Sharpest and McGee. “So, you two know the plan?” Blimper asked Vader and Sharpest. They nodded solemnly. “Right. Stay frosty and we’ll all get through this. And Sniper…” Blimper stepped towards him, “Take this. Just in case.” He handed McGee his Walther P99. “Just hope that you won’t have to use it. Now move out.” Vaderhater, Sharpest and Sniper left through a door at the side of the room, while the others headed off to the exit on the opposite side. Blimper’s tank roared to life and he steered it toward the back wall of the warehouse, which began to rise like a large garage door. As the tank distracted everyone on the outside of the thread, the three men silently crept away from it and blended into the rest of the forum. They would have been successful if they had known that a man was watching them from the shadows that the thread was casting. As he moved into the light, the only thing noticeable about him was the glint that the katana on his back was giving off. Sith Spartan eyed his prey intently, then melted into the shadows once again.

[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Mr Secksy Man Oh my, that cunning idiot.....[/quote] How contradicting. Yes, my comrades, I have been thinking on how I want to approach this next chapter. It is very hard work, you know. Although now that I have Mister Muffles to assist me, I think I can do it. Fear not, the next chapter is near!

[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Sniper McGee Halo? Pffft. I play CoD4 now. [/quote] WOOHOO!

Oh my, that cunning idiot.....

<_< >_> He only uses me when necessary. *Flees*

HAHAH! Sniper convinced you to bump it? What an Assbuster.

[i]... *Maniacal music starts playing* *Lightning flashes* "...Live, my humble beast! Awaken! Rise again!"[/i] [b]lolz[/b] [i][b]Bumped in accordance to Snipers orders.[/b] Fear not, children. Mister McGee will return soon enough. He's put on his thinking cap and is sitting under the willow tree out back, scribbling away at a note pad. Soon Chapter Seven will be under way. Until then, [b]TALK.[/b] Keep this thread alive. It's grown old and dusty in far too short of a time. Shame on you people.[/i] [b]Sniper is counting on you.[/b]

........... ............. ..................... SPAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARTA MUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUFFINS!

You my friend, have a gift.