You all wanted me to write a story, so here's a little taste of what I'll be handing you in a couple days (probably). [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=12235046&postRepeater1-p=3#12238986]The rest of chapter one.[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=12235046&postRepeater1-p=7#12291639]Chapter two.[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=12235046&postRepeater1-p=11#12566673]Chapter three.[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=12235046&postRepeater1-p=14#13842765]Chapter four.[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=12235046&postRepeater1-p=17#14667877]Chapter five.[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=12235046&postRepeater1-p=20#16192180]Chapter six.[/url] [url=http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=12235046&postRepeater1-p=24#17891872]Chapter seven.[/url]
[url=http://s191.photobucket.com/albums/z110/AutoRedialer/?action=view¤t=Epictale.jpg]puffy's picture. It's made of win, but I think that we can all agree on that.[/url] [url=http://img441.imageshack.us/my.php?image=omahcgeecy6.jpg]Vertrexz's comic.[/url] [url=http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c110/themadblimper/jagdpanzy.jpg]This is the tank that Blimper is using.[/url]
[i]Motion. Light. A figure was speaking in a muffled voice. Then, darkness again.[/i]
Sniper McGee woke up in a cold sweat, panting. He had been having these dreams, or rather nightmares, for a while now. He got up off of his bed and walked over to his window. A cool breeze made him feel a bit better as he looked over the city of The Flood. He felt like this place was his one home, the one place where he belonged…
A knock on the door snapped him out of his thoughts. [i]Who could be here at this hour?[/i] He walked to the door, matting down his hair on the way. He took a breath and opened the door. A figure stood, dressed in black, and was facing the other end of the hall so Sniper couldn’t see their face.
“Yes?” Sniper asked the person. He turned and looked at him, light blonde hair looked untidy and windswept, his face contorted in a mask of pain…
“Colonel Corbec?” McGee sounded surprised and confused. Corbec glanced down the hall again, then, hunched over in pain, he stumbled over to the nearest couch and grunted as he sat down. Sniper now saw that the Colonel’s hand was covering the side of his stomach. “Corbec, are…are you okay?” McGee asked. Corbec wasn’t paying attention though. He was looking around the room, glancing at the door every now and then.
“They’re coming,” the Colonel whispered. When he finally looked at Sniper and saw the questioning look he was giving him, he glanced at the door again and winced in pain. “You’ve got to get out of here,” he said through clenched teeth.
McGee looked at the spot where Corbec was holding his side, and saw his hand was covered in blood. “Corbec, what happened? Were you shot? Who did this?!” Sniper’s vision became distorted from anger.
“Listen McGee…you’ve got to…” here the Colonel paused for a moment, he grunted in pain again “…got to find Blimper. He’ll know what to do.”
Suddenly there were footsteps in the hall. They stopped in front of McGee’s door and he could hear voices mumbling something. Slowly, barely daring to breathe, Sniper crept up to the door and locked it. Immediately the voices stopped.
[Edited on 02.27.2008 11:38 AM PST]
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You my friend, have a gift.
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You should have written another chapter while you were banninated, to make your return epic.
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Welcome back.
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omg my favorate story writer! noooooooooo sigh, and i just escaped being banned bungie was nice enough to let me live, but not nice enough to sniper i must prepare a funeral *trumpet sounds in the backround*
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Sniper!! Say it ain't so man. We'll miss you. *sheds a lone tear*
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I guess that means we wait for him to finish his term blacklisted to read the next chapter?
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NOOOO! It says that sniper mcee is blacklisted. [Edited on 02.06.2008 3:03 AM PST]
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] th3m4dblimp3r [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Crimson Scuba Please tell me this takes place in Canada?[/quote] I'm pretty sure that the story takes place in the b.net forums.[/quote]No Wai!
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wow. I just spent the last hour reading your entire story. nice job, very entertaining and held my attention. keep going!
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] halo2mnky I wish I wasn't dead. I wanted to be involved in the story more. And it's 2 am where Sniper is. He's just tantalizing you with lies when he speaks of adding to his story today. And BTW Sniper. I went Prestige! It sucks.[/quote] I was abandoned around Chapter 2, I believe I was going to be a key "bad-guy" with evilcam, but sadly, things fizzles out. Anyway, did you hit your first prestige? 2nd? Maybe 3rd? I just started my 4th a few hours ago, I miss my three frags. =(
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I wish I wasn't dead. I wanted to be involved in the story more. And it's 2 am where Sniper is. He's just tantalizing you with lies when he speaks of adding to his story today. And BTW Sniper. I went Prestige! It sucks.
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[quote][b]posted by:[/b] Sniper McGee Halo? Pffft. I play CoD4 now.[/quote] O Rly? Then that makes two of us. I was using Halo because we haven't spoken in so long I wasn't sure what you play. What level you be good sir? [Edited on 02.04.2008 8:50 PM PST]
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] ODST27 Why must you torture us with your extreemly long waits?! [/quote] Call me crazy, but I have a sneaking suspicion that tomorrow shall mark our last day of wating for another chapter.
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Why must you torture us with your extreemly long waits?!
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Crimson Scuba Please tell me this takes place in Canada?[/quote] I'm pretty sure that the story takes place in the b.net forums.
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Please tell me this takes place in Canada?
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Can I be in your story too, plz...my character doesent have to be anything special
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I'll try my best.
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Sniper McGee Hmm. Probably today.[/quote] RLY? [Edited on 02.04.2008 11:56 AM PST]
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] A Swedish Dude Nice Emmanuel, I'm glad to see your story is such a success. I still think we should play Halo some time. However I know you don't want to, so I'll go crawl back to my hole and not post on Bungie for 3245345 years now. *wink* *wink*[/quote] Halo? Pffft. I play CoD4 now. [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Colonel Corbec I've stopped bothering about that now. I've come to realise The Flood has no cares for quality. Regardless, when will the next part be out?[/quote] Hmm. Probably today.
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This story is wonderful!also will you be adding new characters and when will you make a new chapter. [Edited on 02.04.2008 4:37 AM PST]
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Colonel Corbec I've come to realise The Flood has no cares for quality.[/quote] You JUST realized this? Wow.
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Sniper McGee rubbed the fact that it's more popular than your stories in your face enough.[/quote] I've stopped bothering about that now. I've come to realise The Flood has no cares for quality. Regardless, when will the next part be out?
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[quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Sniper McGee [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Colonel Corbec You [i]will[/i] be writing more, won't you Sniper?[/quote] Indubitably.[/quote] Aww... you learned a new word from me. How nice.
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Nice Emmanuel, I'm glad to see your story is such a success. I still think we should play Halo some time. However I know you don't want to, so I'll go crawl back to my hole and not post on Bungie for 3245345 years now. *wink* *wink*
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now this is what I like reading in the middle of the night, can i be in the story too?plz I can be "The Night Reader" O.o (that was a joke) oh btw im swedish [Edited on 02.03.2008 2:48 PM PST]