If you miss the guys, don’t worry! I’m busy writing and planning their story on paper, having mentioned that, Slingshot has been postponed for the time being. I write all of these on my iPad thanks to my trusty Bluetooth keyboard. Unfortunately it ran out of battery and I don’t have any double a’s to revive it. I ask for your patience and understanding, thanks for all the support!
In the meantime I’ve been wondering about story strength and what people have enjoyed most about reading this series, if you haven’t read Fireteam Slingshot, be sure to check out the homepage linked in any of the chapters!
Ciao!
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I think the story is going great. I'd like to see a little more casual dialogue between the two fireteams. Just random silly comments and chats. So far I feel like most of Fireteam Rescues' talking is done by Jaymen when she's bossing Slingshot around. I'd like to see Rescue's members talk to each other more, so we can see their team dynamic and how they treat each other