While good I do prefer brave coles. You tried to hard to keep it similar I think you should try and branch off a bit.
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I was originally going to use BraveCole's kinderguardians as an audience. That might explain the similarities.
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Ah still if you make a part 3 I'd recommend branching off a bit and doing your own thing.
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School story's a school story, but I'll give it some thought. Not hard to see the parallels, when you think about it. The neurotic, hysteria-prone Dawn became the immature, tantrum-prone Petra. The psychotic but articulate Ventis became the intelligent and articulate Gloria. And the mouthy, nerf-happy RJ just spawned a mouthy, nerf-happy brother in Marshall.