I love reading these type of things. I myself, have written a fan fiction counting to over 95,000 words.
This is insane! It is so well written and I loved how you portrayed the characters in this. The way you described the last scene with the bandit was amazingly well paced and I had a blast reading!
I hope that I can see more of your work in the future! Keep it up!
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I'm really glad you enjoyed reading... ;; But I have to wonder if you know the conversation between the bandits and Yor comes from Grimoire? And there is another part in a comment below continuing from the initial post. Like I really appreciate your compliment but I don't want to take the credit away from Bungie here if it's a misunderstanding. ([i]Everything aside from that conversation I wrote[/i])
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No worries, friend. I am well aware that you have taken inspiration from the grimoire. I love reading them and love the way they are written in a sometimes even poetic way. I haven't had the chance to read the continuations of you story yet, but I am sure that they will be just as good!
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Okay I just wanted to be sure ;w; If you enjoyed the first half I'm sure you'll like the second as well. I had a lot of fun writing the dialogue between Hal and Yor... starts off as "I'm just trying to not get myself killed" and ends up... well, where it ends up. I won't say anymore. I hope you get the chance to read it soon. Thanks again friend :)