Interesting idea, but I'm not a fan of the fact that people will randomly get on the coms with you, like the Petra and variks part. It made sense why you had them there but lore wise they would be occupyied with other things, not waiting for you to need them, you know? The mission is very well written and put together, that's the only part that threw it off
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Thank for your criticism. As for the Variks/Petra part, I just kicked that in there for nostalgia/comedy.