The writing isn't very inspired, it's dry and to the point. As if you are not sure you should write more. Flesh it out dear
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I typed it out in class really fast like yesterday. My bad. I might come back to redo it but I just wanted to do this chapter and the one before as an exposition dump of what happened before he crashed on Mars
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A writers tip honey, if you even think of the word rush when doing a piece, stop. Better to wait and actually take time to make it better
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Yeah I know. I actually have some really big stuff planned for the end of this book and this is basically just filler. It has something to do with the vex