1) Love the name. In my opinion, I would've left off Protocol and leave it at Ragnarock. That's just me.
2) I feel that a "final raid" wouldn't be in our Sol System. We already plan to, at some point, leave Milky Way. Why would our Sol System be named so specifically in the directory?
3) You use a variety of mythology. Ragnarock is Norse mythology and Apophis is Egyptian. Both names are cool in their own rights, but that's just it. They are cool in their own rights. Try to focus on one or the other.
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Thanks for the advice, bro.