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12/14/2015 5:03:50 AM
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Huh... compared to what we see I didn't think the Vanguard/Crucible members would act like this... Except Cayde, Cayde is good
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It's true, I have a terribly hard time writing for characters that aren't mine:( Can you please elaborate your thoughts? Thanks :3
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For example, I always imagined Shaxx being a lot more calm and caring but serious at times you make him seem like a total bada** which is fine I just wouldn't expect that from his character but it's still really good
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Edited by Bardolos: 12/14/2015 3:00:09 PMAh well, I tried to make Zavala and Shaxx sound like they're on edge. That, and they both lack enough patience to handle Cayde-6's nonchalant mockery. They're... worried about something that might or might not happen in the next chapters :3 But thanks for the feedback!
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I see what you were going for which was good! Just not what I expected is all, I'll read the next part soon
