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Edited by Pixel Crisis:
7/29/2015 3:17:26 PM
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Is making 5 posts of the same exact thing really necessary? Since you're obviously desiring some feedback with all the duplicate posts, here ya go.
Like that song, but think it's an odd choice for a fail video … the music edit at 2:40 ish is not cut right so the song messes up there which snaps the viewer's attention away from the video and on to the music that isn't correct. I like how you timed some of your shots / moves / supers to the music - many people fail to utilize songs correctly to drive the edit - well done there. :) I think the edit was supposed to be kind of funny with your fails but the song makes it seem more chill / dramatic, it kind of puts the viewer in the wrong mood for a fail video. Also, the song just ends at the end of the video … you may want to fade the music down next time or cut the video to the natural ending of the song - so it goes a few seconds longer and you have to add a couple more shots ...
Good luck with your editing! :)
P.S. - "Gayfish" moments ? Pretty sure you can find a more mature title for your video
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Edited by ItzMe Random: 7/29/2015 11:39:48 PMThanks for the feed back Pixel Crisis. I agree, around 2:40ish the song does get cluttered there i was attempting to fix it but im offally new to iMovie and i tried to fade that section and the end but i didn't know how lol Im Youtubing "imovie how to" Im trying out trending songs to grab the attention of younger viewer. Music you hear on the radio. Also the Gayfish thing is a trending saying for people i play with online. but it may not suit everyone. Its my first video with poor editing skills and knowledge. I greatly appreciate the Feed back. Thanks Pixel Crisis
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Edited by Pixel Crisis: 7/30/2015 1:01:28 PMNo worries man. I like that you're using trending songs / keywords to try to garner a younger viewers attention, good way to go about it whether or not I agree with the title! When it come to editing, it's just practice practice practice! :) Good luck!
