I like how the story is on The Taken. I think you should move to something more horrific and terrifying, almost like a creepy pasta.
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Part 3 is up
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Interesting outlook. I think that destiny has its limits when it comes to horror but believe me when I say I'll try to make the next part a bit spookier.
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Look into some creepy pastas. I'm sure you'll find them very interesting and influential on your posts.
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Psychosis is one of my favorite creepy pastas. Check it out if u haven't read it.
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Wasn't scary, but it was very frightening. It felt like I was slowly drifting into insanity with him as the story went on. I don't feel right after reading that. Everything just feels awkward now.
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I know it messes with your mind.