originally posted in:Fireteam Shachal
Excellent chapter. Quite the presentation at the beginning I must say, very blue. I was very intrigued with what Shachal and some particular individuals discussed pertaining to Selana and her dreams/visions. Then there was the confrontation at the end, but that's for the readers to find out and those who have read it to know.
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Right now, it's just going to be one thing after another. There's not much left to observe. I did enjoy the beginning a lot. I know a lot of readers are excited to see the continuation of how Chapter 31 ended, and luckily enough, I feel confident I delivered adequately. So some questions that have been following her late experiences have been answered with that lecture. Yeah, the end I hope to have the same kind of effect on the readers the end of 31 had. What do you think of the short road ahead?
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I'm not sure. I guess I see an articulate ending with a twist between Selana and Tharsos. Lukos' involvement I'm not very sure of what it might be.
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With the stringent legislation about Awoken complicating things, I can see what you mean. Lukos, ever the mystery. Have there been any points in the plot that you're still wondering about; things that haven't been answered?
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One that stands out is a rather personal one to Selana, but I'll keep it to myself for now. Other than that...no, nothing comes to mind at the moment. I may just have to get back to you on that one.
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Alright, I can understand that. Any predictions for the next chapter?
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Edited by Hobbes92: 6/14/2015 10:37:52 PMA game of hide and seek between Shachal and the City. Not 100% how it would go. Or, alternately, they return to the City and face trial after completing their quest, with the result being Tharsos and Lukos being excommunicated from the Guardian ranks an exiled to the Wastelands. Selana meanwhile is taken back into the City by her father and secretly gives birth to and raises her and Tharsos' child until he or she is old enough to be taken to meet his father, and his counterpart, in the waste. In which the sequel picks ups, or at least soon after. However, they could comeback and be hailed as heroes who saved the City/Earth from Fallen and/or Cabal destruction or capture. In which Tharsos, Selana, and Lukos are honored for their deeds. Fast forward to when the sequel picks up where a new threat among the Vex have been stirring. [spoiler]Alright, I'll just come out and say it...?I have no idea, what I'm talking about.[/spoiler]
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Wow, those are some crazy predictions, especially the one where Selana gives birth to Lukos' child. I have no recollection of them being with each other, whatsoever! Haha, I think you'll be surprised. In any case, I think these are interesting ideas.
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Meant Tharsos, edited for accuracy. In the fray of thinking I got the names confused. Sorry.
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No worries. I was just having some fun.