It's a pet peeve of mine when writers put themselves in a story, especially as the main character.
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The name "Ricochet" is my gamer tag. I am not Ricochet. Also, if you get the impression that Ricochet is the main character you most likely misread. Most of this series is through Bishop or Fault's point of view. In fact, there's only one thing I've written from Ricochet's point of view. Either way, it's a pet peeve of mine when anyone (reader, writers) can't draw the obvious division between real world people and fictional characters.
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Still, it doesn't specify that you and Ricochet are two different people. If he was, you should at least have given him a different name as to not make people think such. I only read this one, as it was trending on the forums.
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If it only concerned someone who hasn't read the other posts, I'm not concerned. Thanks for your feedback though.