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originally posted in:The Black Garden
Edited by o_____________o:
6/10/2015 12:06:15 AM
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Hmm, I usually deplore serious fanfictions as they are borderline plagiarism. But considering that bungle doesn't have a story to speak of and it's clear you put a lot of effort into this, I should give it a read.
Edit: just a suggestion that will save you time. Instead of having a PM list, you can create a group and use the wall to send notifications to all its members. That's what I did with Singularity.
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Edited by SaviorsBlood: 6/10/2015 2:25:03 AMI have tried my best to set this story apart, even though I'm sure I haven't succeeded in doing so entirely, but I have indeed put a tremendous amount of work into this project. I can promise you that I have performed to the best of my ability when writing Shachal and offering the highest quality I can offer. I sincerely hope you enjoy the read. I noticed some authors have done precisely what you described. I deterred from that means of notifying my readers simply because I didn't want to appear like I was following the crowd, but I'm sure I'll have to swallow my pride and resort to that outlet. Thank you for the recommendation. I imagine at some point or another I'll end up doing that.
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I read the first part and I'm impressed by the narrative. There were a few stylistic mistakes I disliked such as repetition, but gg.
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You can expect that the beginning would provide such kinds of mistakes. First writing endeavor attempted and it was early on in the story. Give it a little bit and you should see a bit of an improvement.
