Finally got around to reading this, and was not disappointed. I really enjoyed your description of the cave and monsters.
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Did you read all of it? I'm impressed! Thanks, Chorrizo. It took a lot of work.
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Not all of it, just this chapter. I am going to read the other ones though when I have some time. I really enjoyed this one.
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But now you ruined it for yourself...the "awe" factor won't be there. Haha. I just hope you like it.