Omfg! That was awsome! But there were some inconsistencies. The Ahemkara were *and are* the size of [i]mountains[/i]. (Yes mountains, as in many) and the were [i]incredibly[/i] intelligent. (It was said that the Ahemkara had answers to questions no one knew to ask) and ate [i]reality[/i]. They were soon hunted to extinction in fear of more guardians trying to search them out. But other than that, it was a [i]very[/i] good chapter. When is the next one coming out?
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I realize that, in the next chapter the Ahamkara speaks, however since this one has been driven practically to it's primal instincts, with it being one of the last existing ones. As for it's size, I know that they are as big as mountains (Concept art even shows this), however in order to keep the story realistic, I made it smaller so that Saliks and Matthew actually have a chance at beating it. As for the next chapter, it comes out on Friday night.
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Edited by Legion: 5/13/2015 11:25:07 PMOk. I understand now. I cannot [i]wait[/i] for the next chapter. I [i]love[/i] this story!(but, about the smaller Ahemkara, maybe it was just an infant. But, the Ahemkara now reside within the void. They were [i]not[/i] hunted to extinction, they just re-wrote history to make it seem like it. Can't wait till Friday! Keep it up!)