Thanks Daythin, appreciate it! I'm working on this being the first part of a longer story - stay tuned for more. Also hope to be posting other content set in different parts and about different people in the Destiny universe. Hope you continue to enjoy and any feedback is always welcome!

I guess my feedback is that I think it's great so far. The way it reads is like how I would imagine a trailer/extended sneak peak for a new show about to start. You built up the suspense and teased the audience curiosity enough to make then want to come back and find out what's gonna happen next. I myself am really curious as to what's wrong with the Dreg. Is it earths atmosphere? No, they have helmets and masks to prevent that. Our water? I don't think you'd pull a war of the worlds moment on us. Simple tetanus from cutting himself on one of the rusted cars? Maybe, but that's not worth writing about. Or something more destiny-ish? Like something wrong with the fallen's soul itself? I wanna know! You got me thinking. I like that. I'll definitely read what comes next.