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The Flood 4: Parallel Worlds

[b]The Insertion.[/b] The moon looked down on it all. A hazy, thick blanket tucked in close to the ground, as though it were a duvet warming up a child in winter months. From simply looking at the moon, and the sparkling mass of stars clustered above and beyond it, you wouldn’t know a war was on. Looking lower, and if you knew they were actually knew they were there in the first place, a trio of black, almost invisible planes glided seemingly without effort above the low level cloud layer. A larger transport plane, accompanied by a pair of smaller, sleeker escorts. On command, the two escort fighters peeled off from the transport, that was startlingly quiet for its size, and flared their afterburners. Specks of light amongst the dark they sped off east, towards a monumental battle in the skies, where jets screamed around at ridiculous speed, engaging one another in elegant rolls and dives, blasting away at one another in a deadly aerial combat. Quietly, the transport carried on without an escort, confident that the greatest in radar spoofing technology and stealth equipment would keep it hidden. But what really mattered was within the plane itself. Secured firmly by strong magnetic locks that were connected to a pair of rails stood a bipedal machine, fully the size of two men with one man standing on the first’s shoulders. It was expected to be the last fully operational unit of its kind in this entire region, or so intelligence said. Red markings that had once adorned it’s armour had been replaced with the occasional blue stripe, but little broke the jet black coating besides the single large, bright red eye and a pair of smaller ones to the left of it on the metal rectangle that assumed the place of a head. A handful of mechanics and technicians dashed around, running last minute checks on armour and weaponry, especially the most potent of all armaments. The weapon in question was literally the latest of all developments. “The most secret and devastating device in development for this decade” many heralded it. Mounted onto the right shoulder, it was tubular with a circular cooling device attached to the back of the weapon. A technician had affectionately painted on a snarling set of teeth around the muzzle, and no one had wanted them removed. The interior hold was illuminated by a pair of baleful red lights on either side of the mechanical masterpiece, two of the technicians secured their equipment in specially prepared places and ran to seats and strapped themselves down whilst the third jogged to the rear of the craft, where the bay door stood closed. The man secured himself with a short tether and grasped the lever controlling the door. He looked up to the bipedal machine, shook his head and pulled the lever. Suddenly, the interior was filled with noise and the temperature dropped like a stone as the whooshing, freezing exterior found a way into the craft. Fighting the biting cold wind, the mechanic hit a red button, and with a deafening [i]clang[/i] the magnetic locks uncoupled and the machine raced along the rails and out of the hatch of the plane, falling away into the darkness. After a moment of free-fall the machine hit the cloud layer and carried on going, the thick layers of cloud parting like paper. It punched out the other side, and the pilot inside it immediately took stock of the locations below the vehicle. Breathing through a gas mask that fed him a constant supply of Combat Stimulants, the adrenaline inducing gases made his senses as sharp as that of any computer. The machine was heading towards the river bank opposite the ruins of Floodlin. From here, the man inside could see pinpricks of flame dotting the area, marking out where enemy artillery pieces had made their homes, but one stood out. A gargantuan column of flame made an impossible target to miss, and the machine rolled over to get a better angle of descent toward it. General Guscon was taking a tour of the front lines, accompanied by a handful of other Undergroundican leaders, and a force of bodyguards, he had come via a convoy of staff cars and Half-Track tanks to this, the greatest piece of military engineering he was likely to ever see, [i]The Marathon[/i]. He emerged, clapping wholeheartedly from a improvised bunker after he had witnessed the firing of his most potent artillery piece. “Excellent work! Where was that shell aimed at?” He shouted, ears ringing from the blast. “A concentration of Floodian forces in the east of the city, General. It is bizarre, the enemy gathers in large numbers, but does not strike our forces trapped in the city.” Replied a young adjutant. It angered Guscon, but he nonverbally admitted the young soldier was right. The entire reason that he had come to the frontlines in the first place was because of the disastrous turn of events in the enemy city. In the space of a few hours, Undergroundican troops in the city had been surrounded, cut off from the river and home, and were now being herded into an ever shrinking perimeter. It was hoped that by his arriving, the troops would rally and gain much needed morale. Guscon had a sinking feeling that Floodland no longer cared about the collection of forces stuck in the city-a full two thirds of the units in the entire sector-but cared more about striking out across the river. “What is [i]that[/i]?” Guscon asked, pointing out a slight patch of movement amongst the night. “It’s coming right for us. Quick! Get the convoy tanks! Hurry!” The adjutant shouted, panic in his voice. Shells and bombs were never that big, so something far worse must be en route, it would seem. The pilot had waited until the very last moment, with alarms bleeping and wailing all around. Relishing every moment of danger, he finally triggered the chemical boosters in the legs of the walking tank. With a slam far more powerful than any shell, the jets that folded out of the legs roared with the strain, nearly shearing off their positions with the energy of the halt. With his velocity slowed sufficiently, the pilot released the thrusters, and the now useless devices, along with the empty fuel tanks, sprang off the walker as explosive bolts attaching them detonated. The walker dropped to the muddy ground, sending clumps of semi-solid earth flying. The pilot had landed in one of [i]The Marathon’s[/i] firing pits, huge holes in the ground, dug with three tunnels leading in different directions. One heading West with a large railway to accommodate The Marathon and a similar one heading East. Another subterranean tunnel came from the North with a dirt road constructed for ammunition transport. But it wasn’t ammunition vehicles heading towards him, it was a quartet of Half-Track tanks with Heavy Machineguns bolted onto their hulls. They didn’t get a chance to fire. The Mech hefted it’s arms, and the two chain guns on each arm began to take them down. Rapid pelts of bullets rained down on the slowly advancing tanks, and their paper thin armour was torn apart in seconds, each one detonating as bullets ground through them, setting off ammunition, petrol or both. With the immediate threat out of the way, the walking tank turned to find the [i]real[/i] target. A truck filled with shells the size of houses next to the hulking Marathon, a pile of rail stock, there it was. The walker broke out into a run as it spotted around a dozen figures trying to sneak away, and they looked suspiciously like Undergroundican staff officers. One in particular looked like General Guscon. But a buzzing filled the area and suddenly, a Helicopter Gunship burst over a side of the firing pit, blasting immediately with everything it had. The Mech shrugged off the blaze of gunfire as though it were light rain, and brought the flying machine down in a return salvo. As the Helicopter fell, the Mech jumped up, landing before the fleeing party of Undergroundicans, and mowing them down, rendering the defenceless enemy into lumps of bloody meat and tatters of clothes. To finish the job, the pilot whipped the seemingly invulnerable walker around and charged up the wonder weapon. As if from nowhere, blue dots of light began to appear around the gun muzzle weapon. The Mech planted its feet firmly, and steadied itself as the blue dots were sucked into the gun itself. The temperature of the barrel soared, and the circular cooling device hissed superheated steam as it tried to keep up with the heat, if the weapon grew too hot, it would fuse and explode, not something that should be allowed to happen. With a blinding flash like a star exploding, the weapon discharged, and a crackling blue stream of energy scythed across the barrel of The Marathon, cutting it off entirely. The pilot changed the angle, and the beam vaporised a pack of terrified crewmen. The pilot turned the weapon slightly, and touched off a truckload of highly explosive shells. The entire area shook as though an Earthquake had arrived, and the shells exploded simultaneously, throwing lighter objects, humans and debris into the air. Feet planted firmly, the mech simply rode out the blast, and watched with satisfaction as [i]The Marathon[/i] was lifted off it’s tracks for a moment and crashed on its side with a screech of torn metal. Behind his gas mask, Corbec smiled at the destruction. “Mission Accomplished.” [Edited on 10/14/2006]
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  • I will hasten to add a few things. 1.) I have a horrible regional debate competition thing coming up next week, so I won't be on on Monday or Tuesday, I'll be off debating against Eaton when I should really be doing my homework. 2.) The story is not yet over.

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  • (STILL continuing from the last part of the same chapter.) JS, after a few moments of confusion, finally lost his patience with the Med-bay door keypad and shot it with a burst from his Uzi. That did the trick. The door slid open automatically, and JS burst in, waving his gun around like some kind of, well, crazy person. His bright red blood dribbled from his limp arm and contrasted heavily with the white-tiled floor as it dropped to the ground. The Med Bay was essentially a small hospital, with two rows of hospital beds along one side of the room, and various pieces of medical equipment he couldn’t make sense out of. But what piqued his interest was the four strange cylinders, linked by hundreds of cables, opposite the hospital beds. Each was filled with a semi-transparent liquid. He was drawn to them, and hobbled over to peer inside. He stopped in front of the closest tank and squinted inside, his wound forgotten. He jumped backwards as something lunged at him from within the cylinder. Beating at the glass even as he backed off, JS could make out a vague face, and it looked for all the world like Pyroshark. He took quick steps back, then tripped over something. He fell on his arse and checked what he’d tripped over. A syringe. A hypodermic syringe, a freshly used one at that by the looks of things. He whipped around as he heard the sound of a door opening, and saw a figure leave the room by a second door he hadn’t yet noticed, identical to the one he’d come trough but on the other end of the room. His attention jumped back to the cylinders. The fluid inside all of them was draining now, slowly showing their occupants, and how they all looked the exact same. Each one was a spitting image of Pyroshark, given that the skin tone was paler and their heads were bald. JS was snapped into action when the cylinders began to open from the top down, now that the fluid was at a lower level. With his one good arm, JS blitzed the cylinders with the Uzi. Glass smashed, bodies twitched, electrics shorted out and the fluid began to drain out in miniature waterfalls from the holes punctured in the glass exterior. JS dropped the SMG and resumed his search for medical equipment. Sol and Pyroshark had somewhat more luck when discerning the machinations of the door keypad, discovering that a bright, green button marked OPEN got the door to work. They burst in with gun butts to their armpits in a position ready to fire. The room was uninhabited, the operators had probably rushed out to the lift entrance to stop any intrusion. “Come on, perhaps we can make sense of this thing.” Sol encouraged Pyroshark. The room itself was a fairly wide affair. In the centre sat a spike, reminiscent of the Hive that loomed above. About the same size as two human beings standing on one another, it occasionally arced and crackled with energy. On all of the walls, banks of computers sat patiently, bringing up streams of information and readings. Pyroshark slung his G36, and produced the last EMP grenade left. He glanced from it, to the spike in the centre of the room. If Corbec planned to use this thing and the Nanites to further his own, evil cause, then it was Pyroshark’s duty to the people of both worlds to destroy it, no matter how priceless or complex it was, it had to be destroyed for the good of everyone. Sally was sitting with her back against the wall, legs crossed, fiddling with her fingernails out of sheer boredom. “Come on, Corbec, you’re supposed to be some kind of super-human mega man, start flexing those machine-enhanced muscles!” She ridiculed. Obviously, she had never tried to open a magnetically locked door with her bare hands. Corbec gave her a glare of pure acid. “What?” She asked, as if nothing had happened. Corbec turned away, and then sighed. “What now?” Sally asked, gathering her equipment and walking over. “Just found a keypad.” Corbec announced. He, like Sol and Pyroshark, found the big green button marked OPEN, something JS had singularly failed to do. “Get ready.” He said. Sally raised her MP5. Corbec hit the button and they stormed in. “Stop them!” Someone shouted as they broke in. It was a man, wearing a grey uniform with a Kevlar vest over it. He was aiming a pistol at them, and the two Floodians didn’t hesitate in gunning him down. There were others in the room as well, the first glance said something in the order of fifteen. They all wore the same grey uniform, some with Kevlar vests on. They almost universally had a pistol in their hands. “Everyone! Get down! Weapons on the floor!” Sally screamed at them. Some did the opposite, raising pistols to their heads and pulling the trigger. “Crazy -blam!-s.” Corbec remarked. “Alright, everyone, over here! Now!” He barked, herding the surviving Grizzled Ancients into the middle of room. The command centre was rectangular in shape, a large, wall filling flat screen occupied the far wall, and rows of radio sets, computers banks, seats and desks sat in ordered file before it. The freshly taken prisoners were now crouching in the part of the room not occupied by computers or the like, an open space flanked by two doors, one on either side. “Weapons go to me! Sally! Check that door!” Corbec shouted. “And which one of you is Lorraine?!” A female stood up from the huddled group and approached Corbec. “I’m Lorraine.” “Right, get back over there. You! Shut it! And you! Stay down!” Corbec waved his pistols at anyone who tried to move. “The door seems secure.” Sally reported, turning from the second doorway. As she walked back to the prisoners, the door slid open behind her. A soldier, followed by some hulking giant in a great suit of armour marched out, in an almost ironic fashion. The soldier was armed with an automatic rifle, and immediately turned his weapon on the petrified Grizzled Ancients. Stuck in the open, they died before they could scream. “Sally! Run!” Corbec shouted, but everything had happened too quickly for him to intervene. The giant in armour gripped some out-sized pistol, with a barrel diameter as wide as a grown man’s fist. Before Sally could run, a hole was blown in her chest, and she collapsed. Corbec returned fire, holding his ground. The soldier buckled and fell, put the bullets bounced off the giant’s armour. Then the pistol magazines ran out. “-blam!-!” Corbec snarled, threw them aside and rushed the giant. As he got closer, he saw the leering face of his enemy, enamoured and vulnerable, giving him a place to strike. Combined with whatever strength the nanites in him still had, Corbec threw the mightiest Right Hook he ever had, sailing in right for his opponent’s jaw. But the giant moved. With dexterity impossible of someone so heavily armoured, the man backed off, letting Corbec over-swing and expose himself. By the time Corbec noticed what had just happened, it was too late. The giant slammed his stomach with a vicious metal gauntlet. He gripped Corbec by the shoulder as he reeled back and threw him at the wall. Corbec heard something inside snap on impact. “Allow me to introduce myself, Emperor Corbec. I am Lehto #137, leader of The Grizzled Ancients, the conqueror of worlds. Like the Powered Assault Armour? It’s new. Top of the range even.” Lehto sneered. Corbec struggled back up and spat blood at him. “Oh, please, you’re still not upset about your little concubine over there, are you? Please, man, show some sensibility. Pretty little girls come and go. They’re expendable.” The last comment hit a nerve, and Corbec stumbled at him. Lehto stepped idly to one side as Corbec hobbled past, too exhausted to slow himself down. He kicked Corbec in the back of the leg, making him drop with a yelp. Showing no exertion, Lehto picked up Corbec in one hand and threw him like a doll across the room, landing with a crack in-between Sally and the dead soldier. “You can’t win, Corbec. I’m modified, three times more nanites than you have, and armoured in titanium alloy. Resign yourself to death already, go meet your precious whore in the afterlife.” Lehto cackled. He marched through the pile of dead Grizzled Ancients, former colleagues and friends were crushed underfoot by the armour’s mighty footfalls. He reached Corbec and knelt down next to him. He rolled the Emperor over so he could look into his eyes, and wrapped his hands around his throat. Corbec made some kind of gargling noise. “What’s that?” Lehto asked, leaning closer to his slowly asphyxiating adversary. To his horror, a grenade was shoved into his mouth. Corbec kicked him hard in the chest, sending him tumbling backwards and then exploding. The room was showered in metal scraps and burnt lumps of meat, jets of blood and lumps of skull fragments. “I said, smile you ugly son of a -blam!-.” Corbec spat, massaging his throat.

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  • (continuing from the last part of the same chapter.) Lehto rubbed his chin thoughtfully. This was quite the situation he was in. A band of determined and lethal intruders was practically breathing down his neck, not to mention Pyroshark who was probably out for a bit of his own revenge, and the rest of the world was making gains against his forces on the surface. Not the brightest of moments, he had to admit. The wall-size screen was filled with bad news from the English coastline and casualty estimates from America. “Wu!” He barked. Wu #136 scurried over from his radio set. “Sir?” “Have every Stalker on site activated. Now. And I want those cloning banks in the Medical Bay working full out. Have the clones report to the armoury as soon as they’re out, understand?” “Anything else, sir?” “Is there any more Powered assault armour left?” “About fifteen suits, last count.” “Right, Have the first fourteen clones pick that up. I’ll be taking one of them.” Lehto smoothed back a rebellious piece of hair. Even that was against him, it seemed. “Very good, sir. Are you leaving?” Wu got his hopes up. “Comrades!” Lehto shouted. The Grizzled Ancients looked up from their places at him. “I’m leaving for now, but will return shortly. I forbid you all to give up the hope of final victory! Avoid defeatist thoughts and do not tolerate those traitors who would spread slanderous propaganda about our cause! We are the destined victors of this struggle, never forget that, and never forget your oath to the Grizzled Ancients! Butcher #138, you have command in my absence.” Lehto abruptly turned and left through one of the two automatic titanium plate doors. Silence reigned, but the burp and crackle of Radio static. “If the threat of capture is great, then we are to fire our weapons until the last bullet, then take our own lives rather than allow the enemy to take us hostage.” Butcher said solemnly. “What? Are you mad? What good would killing ourselves achieve?” Wu burst out, forgetting what Lehto had just said about defeatism. “We swore an oath when we joined the Grizzled Ancients, to never allow ourselves to be captured by those who would seek to steal our knowledge. Would you break this oath? The very oath that granted you access to the Septagon in the first place?” Butcher spat, turning to face Wu with contempt etched onto his face. “Who agrees with this madman?” Wu asked the assembled Ancients. Of the nineteen Ancients present (excepting Mc Lees and Lehto,) eleven raised their hands almost immediately. Wu could only shake his head. “You’re all mad.” He said. “Watch your tongue, worm, or I’ll shoot it out.” Butcher threatened, drawing his pistol and aiming it at Wu. “Hold it.” Someone said, placing their hand on the barrel of the gun, lowering it slowly. It was Lorraine #137, wife of the missing Mc Lees. “And who, exactly, are you to tell me what to do?” Butcher hissed. “We should concentrate on the matter at hand, carrying out our duty, not pointing guns at one another.” She soothed. “My duty is to prevent this coward from spreading the seeds of defeatism.” Butcher replied. “Your duty is to make sure that we all do our jobs. And Wu won’t be able to carry out his duty if he is dead. He can still redeem himself.” Lorraine said slowly yet firmly. Butcher shot a glance of pure ice at Wu. “I’ll see to it that you won’t forget this moment quickly.” he said and turned away from them. Once there was some distance between them and Butcher, Loraine whispered in Wu’s ear. “Don’t keep doing that, I won’t be there to cool him off all the time.” She urged. “Sorry, but he’s lost it. I’m not going to top myself just because of some oath I didn’t even take seriously when I swore it. I’ll surrender, that’s what I’ll do.” “I know, I know. But you won’t get a chance to hand yourself in if you go around making speeches like that.” The lift approached the final levels, and the Floodian occupants checked their weapons one final time. Mc Lees was picked up and moved to the back of the lift, Corbec told everyone to stand behind him when the lift door opened. The lift ground to a halt with a shudder, and slowly, the heavy metal doors lethargically parted, receding into the walls. Agonisingly slowly, it revealed the opposition that the intruders would face. The lift door led out onto a T-Junction entirely populated by enemy units. There were at least five Stalkers watching the entrance and dozens of average humans, armed to the teeth and clad in Kevlar vests. They took cover behind metal-sheet barricades or concrete bulkheads. The Stalker Chainguns were already cycling up to speed. “Oh, bugger.” Corbec breathed. He jumped forward immediately, then rolling to a stop just short of a sheet metal barricade. The team followed out behind him just as everything began to shoot at them. Sol 249 was immediately hit in the chest and thrown back into the lift. JS had just stepped out of the lift, Uzi at the ready when a Stalker Chaingun shell pulped his right bicep. Chunks of muscle and tatters of fabric went flying and JS dropped to his knees. Sally threw herself flat and landed next to Corbec just as he jumped over the barricade. His right foot connected with the face of a woman carrying a light machine gun. The military-issue boot pulped her nose and sent her spiralling backwards. As he came down onto the other side, he corralled the other enemy troops with his MP5 set to full automatic. The bullets passed through the collapsing enemy and plinked harmlessly off the armoured skin of the Stalker standing next to them. The mechanical killer whipped around to face Corbec, chainguns transforming into saw blades in the blink of an eye. The clip clacked empty on the MP5 as Corbec shoulder barged his way into the Stalker, thrashed spasmodically, crackling with lethal energy and died in the typical fashion, disintegrating into dust. Suddenly a second leapt from out of nowhere from behind Corbec. It’s razor-sharp fingernails buried themselves into the concrete wall mere centimetres from Corbec’s head. He pulled back, gripped it by the back of the head and slammed the Stalker into the wall. It flailed and shrieked just like the rest when Corbec filled it with a dose of electrical death. Before any other Grizzled Ancient forces could draw a bead on Corbec, he dropped down behind the barricade, covered in the dust of his latest victim. Sally jumped over the barricade as well, landing on one of the deceased hostile troops. For a moment she gathered her bearings, then spotted a string of grenades around the waist of the corpse she sat on. Working quickly, she detached the belt and pulled one of the pins on a grenade. She stood up the hail of bullets and threw the belt down the corridor to the left of the lift. She ducked down and seconds later, the entire corridor blew apart, a gust of flame, smoke and shrapnel announcing the demise of those unlucky enough to be near the grenades. Moments after, Pyroshark, Corbec and Sally rushed the last group of defenders holding the right-hand corridor, clubbing them to death with the butts of their guns and savage face-to-face shootouts. They returned back to the lift once the initial enemy presence was dead. Sol was up on his feet, checking JS over. “Body armour, my chest hurts like a right bastard, but I’ll live. JS, here, took a heavy calibre to the arm, ain’t much left of that part of him.” Sol explained. “And Mc Lees?” Sally asked. Sol shook his head, gesturing to the corpse at the other end of the lift. If he hadn’t already died of blood loss, he’d been shot to pieces by the defending forces. “Shall we get on with what we’re here to do?” Pyroshark suggested. “Right. Sally, you’re with me. JS, get yourself to the medical bay, see if you can’t use any of that high-tech stuff they’ve got in there. Pyroshark, Sol, head down the left and it’s the last door down there. Now! Go!” Corbec seemed to have found a new wave of energy, probably the last he’d get until a full night’s sleep. Corbec took off his Helmet and Balaclava, threw them aside and got out the his dual pistols, clicking off the safety as he went. “We have no idea where we’re going, do we?” Sally asked. It wasn’t really a question. “Pretty much, but I imagine it won’t be hard to find.” Corbec replied. The corridor leading straight from the lift was wide enough for a jeep to fit through, and took a right shortly after it led off from the T-junction. “As I said. Not too hard to find.” A large sign, with big black capital letters announced ‘COMMAND’ on the wall above a hefty, heavy-looking metal door. The bottom was lined in yellow/black chevrons, and the whole generally gave a deep, mental message of “stay the heck away from here you ugly little prick.” “Well.” Sally said, walking up beside Corbec. “You better get lifting. I’ll stand watch.” She bounced away smirking.

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  • [b]The Belly Of The Beast.[/b] The Heavy Freight Lift lurched into action, and began to slowly make it’s way downwards into the heart of the Bunker System lying deep beneath the surface. Hard, glaring light burst through into the wide transport at regular intervals as it passed high-power sodium lights along the vertical lift-shaft. The light threw strong shadow replicates of the occupants around for brief instances before disappearing once the light had faded. The Floodian strike team, drenched and exhausted, had been greatly relieved to find that their leader, Emperor Corbec, had survived what should really have been a lethal Helicopter crash. They had scavenged weaponry from the lift guards they had just killed and now Sol, Sally and Pyroshark now gripped assault rifles strikingly similar to the Heckler & Koch G36 that existed in their own world. Everyone had been given a new sidearm to complement whatever weapons they still had. (Sally and Corbec still had the original MP5s the time had begun with, but both had two side-arms to make up for this.) Ammunition however, was still at a premium. In one corner, Mc Lees sat very still, his face was as pale as snow due to the blood loss. The blood that had moments before streamed out of the crater in his stomach like a waterfall came in a paltry, half-hearted dribble. He kept slipping in and out of consciousness, gripping the ragged bits that had not long ago been vital organs, as though doing so might miraculously save him from certain death. JS stood up from kneeling next to him and walked over to Corbec on the opposite side of the lift. “There’s certainly nothing I can do for him. I barely know First Aid and he’s suffered serious blood loss. If something isn’t done soon, he’ll bleed out on us.” He reported grimly. Corbec didn’t reply. “Sir?” “Sorry, sorry. Yeah. I was… daydreaming a bit there. What were you saying?” He said. Corbec looked burnt-out, even more tired than anyone else in the lift-excepting gut shot casualties. “Mc Lees. He’ll die if serious medical attention isn’t brought in soon.” JS reiterated. “Oh. My. That’s bad. We need him… Ah… I. I need to talk to him…” Corbec said quietly, as if distracted by something. He made his way over to Mc Lees. He was awake, for the time being. “Mc Lees?” Corbec asked, kneeling next to the dying man. “Lorraine…” He whispered. “Who?” “My wife. Save her. Please.” Mc Lees gasped. “We will, but only if you tell us something. Mc Lees?” He seemed to half-look at Corbec, eyes dilating madly. “Right. We need to know about the place we’re going into, as in, where important spots are.” Mc Lees nodded. “The base… follows a basic layout. Medical Bay is the… the… third on th’ right When we c‘m outta the lift.” he slurred. “The centr’l processor is the door at the end of the left corridor of th’ lift. It runs the Nanobots…” He continued, wheezing. “The Nanobots? All of them?” Corbec asked, suddenly alert. Mc Lees could only nod. Through a Herculean effort, he managed carry on speaking. “Control Centre… The place with the other people… People like me-” He slipped out of consciousness before finishing the sentence. “Mc Lees? Mc Lees?” Corbec shook him, then checked for a pulse. It was extremely faint. Barely noticeable. Corbec wearily stood up and made his way back to JS. “Listen. I need you to take him-” He pointed to Mc Lees “-And get him to the medical bay. I’m told it’s the third door on the right. When you get him there, do something to keep him alive. If he buys the farm, get together with the rest of the unit and help them out instead.” Corbec said, and shuffled to Pyroshark and Sol 249. “You two, when we get downstairs, you both go right, no, left immediately and go through the door at the end. In there should be some kind of main control for the Nanobots, nanites, whatever you want to call the bastards. Protect it at all costs. And while you’re at it, see if you can’t mess around with the system, perhaps shut the bots down. Either way, remember that it runs all of the buggers globally, and that I want that tech for after this fiasco. Understood?” They murmured their assent. “And everyone! When we get down there, if you see a Grizzled Ancient, apprehend them, do not kill them unless they try to kill you.” “I hear you.” “Sure.” “Will do.” Corbec turned away from the soldiers and limped to a side railing of the lift. He put his elbows on the railing and leant heavily on them. “What’s wrong?” Sally whispered into his ear. He’d been so wasted he hadn’t noticed her get so close. “Nothing. It’s all fine.” He murmured back. Sally held up her right hand and took off the black glove on it. The 24 karat gold ring, studded with diamonds in the shape of an S, glittered as the hard light filtered into the lift again. “See this?” She asked quietly, throwing the glove away. “It tells me stuff about you, and yours about me. You are not OK, any idiot could notice that. And I know why. It’s those things inside you, wearing you down, wiping you out. And you know it too. Don’t act hard now Corbec, tell me how much longer you can keep this up for.” She hissed, turning her back on the others so they couldn’t hear. “You’re right, it’s these things. Ever since the crash, when I used the shield to survive the impact, I’ve felt drained. Must’ve taken a lot of juice up from that. But I’ll be fine, I’ll get by.” “But what about us?” Sally asked. [Edited on 1/21/2007]

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  • I better get writing then.

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  • You're not the only one. It's been a stressful week (I had my maths GCSE). I'm going live in about 30 mins but I'll come back after that.

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  • Wahey. Hopefully this chapter won't take much longer. I'm getting tired.

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  • I don't usually watch the credits. And now for the unveiling of my master plan POST 400

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  • At the end credits, all it actually says is "xxxxx" for his name.

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Colonel Corbec [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] js2096 I thought it was pretty good. Loved the ending.[/quote] I liked how you never actually learnt Daniel Craig's character name. [/quote] Hmm, never noticed that.

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] js2096 I thought it was pretty good. Loved the ending.[/quote] I liked how you never actually learnt Daniel Craig's character name.

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  • I thought it was pretty good. Loved the ending.

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] js2096 [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Colonel Corbec OK, basically the next chapter has already taken up about five pages of Word Processor, and it isn't three quartes done. (It is going to be BIG.) Hopefully, I will be able to get the final part out as well today. I'd have done this sooner, but I was watching L4yer Cake today.[/quote] What did you think of it?[/quote] Absolutely brilliant. I loved all of it. A bit savage at times, but still great.

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Colonel Corbec OK, basically the next chapter has already taken up about five pages of Word Processor, and it isn't three quartes done. (It is going to be BIG.) Hopefully, I will be able to get the final part out as well today. I'd have done this sooner, but I was watching L4yer Cake today.[/quote] What did you think of it?

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  • OK, basically the next chapter has already taken up about five pages of Word Processor, and it isn't three quartes done. (It is going to be BIG.) Hopefully, I will be able to get the final part out as well today. I'd have done this sooner, but I was watching L4yer Cake today.

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Colonel Corbec [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] js2096 [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Colonel Corbec Anyway, I've almost done the next part, but unfortunately I haven't finished it. I'll have it done by the end of tomorrow though, and maybe even the final part on top of that. Rest assured, I haven't given up on my work here.[/quote] I defy you to prove it.[/quote] Such audactiy will be met with harsh words! And a new chapter! Or two![/quote] Well lets do it then! Lets have a read.

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] js2096 [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Colonel Corbec Anyway, I've almost done the next part, but unfortunately I haven't finished it. I'll have it done by the end of tomorrow though, and maybe even the final part on top of that. Rest assured, I haven't given up on my work here.[/quote] I defy you to prove it.[/quote] Such audactiy will be met with harsh words! And a new chapter! Or two!

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Colonel Corbec Anyway, I've almost done the next part, but unfortunately I haven't finished it. I'll have it done by the end of tomorrow though, and maybe even the final part on top of that. Rest assured, I haven't given up on my work here.[/quote] I defy you to prove it.

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  • New chapter. Schweet. And a good one at that. For a brief moment I thought that Corbec was dead; if so, that'd sure as hell screw up a few plans I've had recently. Of course, none of you have any idea what I'm talking about, but if you check the Colonel Corbec Club I'll reveal the bare details momentarily. -Pyroshark-

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  • Anyway, I've almost done the next part, but unfortunately I haven't finished it. I'll have it done by the end of tomorrow though, and maybe even the final part on top of that. Rest assured, I haven't given up on my work here.

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  • Right'o

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  • PM when it is done then.

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  • Haven't the slightest idea.

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  • Promotion? Cool! When’s next chapter coming out.

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Gamerz_Property [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Colonel Corbec Wow. That's quite something. Remind me to give you a promotion in The Colonel Corbec Club.[/quote]Wow, did you write all of that? how long did it take you? that is amazing. Props![/quote] Ahm. I forget. I think I wote it before the Christmas holidays. The thign is, I wrote The Flood 2 during the summer holidays last year, and finished it before the end of them. Before the end of the aforementioned holidays, I began writing The Flood 3 and finished it before the beginning of Christmas. Can't remember the dates involving this though.

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  • [quote][b]Posted by:[/b] Colonel Corbec Wow. That's quite something. Remind me to give you a promotion in The Colonel Corbec Club.[/quote]Wow, did you write all of that? how long did it take you? that is amazing. Props!

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