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Edited by D3athAndR3birth: 6/7/2015 8:41:56 PM
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Making a Dent Part III (Saint-14/Fallen Fan Fiction)

And I'm back with what I thought would be the thrilling conclusion to this story. It resoundingly is not; however, I'm thinking part four will be the actual end... Hopefully... We'll see. Sorry that this has taken so long; Prison of Elders has eaten away all the free time I have. If you haven't read the first parts, then: Part One: https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/120935319/0/0 Part Two: https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/122124663/0/0 As always, thank you all for the support and I hope to hear your comments/critiques. Just to warn you, this part had to be put into this post and two comments below “Move! Now!” Saint-14's orders rang out into the decrepit room, barely audible over the sound of Fallen screams and shrieks. His four compatriots sprinted away, heading down a new hall, hoping to find some sense of direction. The Exo followed shortly behind, jogging backwards to see his Ward of Dawn shield dissipate and clear the way for the creatures of darkness. As it did, Saint's helmet shot out another beam of light. He let it drift across the front line of the now moving forces, blinding them before he too turned and ran to meet with his team. There was chaos. The alien sounds filling the halls of the ancient Cosmodrome as if throngs inhabited those now useless halls. The four Titans and one Warlock were in full sprint as much as the terrain would allow. Whether it be dead end rooms or collapsed passages, they weren't shaking any of their pursuit. Yvette had fallen to the back of the group, turning behind momentarily to shoot at Dregs who moved a bit too quickly for his liking. “Saint, sir, not to question orders or anything, but where the hell are we going?” Saint had moved to the center of the group, barking orders as needed to keep them together. His Ghost had pulled up a map of the basic scouting missions that had explored the ruins and the fragmented remains of blueprints that had been pulled from one of the building's computers. There was too much missing though; they had gone too far for any of the data to be reliable. He called through the Ghosts' comms system, “Cayde-5, we need an evac route towards the Ketch. Now.” There was a long pause before he added, “Cayde? Respond!” The leader of the chain was so caught up in trying to reach the Hunter, that he almost plowed into Vell's back at full speed. The group stopped short as a Vandal fell from a hole in the ceiling, gurgling and sputtering ether as it fell and collapsed on the ground. It clutched in vain at a knife sticking out of the front of its throat. Cayde's head then pushed down into the hole, making him look upside down to the others. “Oh, fancy seeing you here, see, I was just butchering-” Krace yelled, “Shut up! Where in the Traveler's light is the exit?!” He turned and fired his machine gun down the hall they had come from as the Fallen started to catch up, trying to help Yvette hold them back. Cayde did his best to purse his metallic lips in annoyance, but he shouted back, “You're not far; follow the signs for the launch zone. The Ketch landed a few minutes ago. I think that's where they're all headed to be picked up.” “Good! Now, stay up above; get over there and wait for us to emerge before you fire on the ship.” Saint didn't wait for a response, he just turned to Revenant and shouted over the machine gun fire, “Collapse the hall.” The Warlock paused for just a moment, staring at the Exo in thought. “Yes sir! Of course sir!” He turned towards the oncoming wave of Fallen. “Right away sir! I am ant among millions, a soldier for my queen.” He held out his left hand and called upon the Void, focused it, and condensed it until he held a faintly glowing purple orb. He then threw the orb over the others' heads, landing it just in front of the first of the Fallen forces encroaching. There was a millisecond's pause before it began sucking at the matter around it. “To hold a gravity well, a singularity so small in one's palm...” He didn't finish the thought before pieces of Dregs were torn off and pulled into the miniature black hole. Then went whole Fallen. Then pieces of the ceiling. Finally, there was a resounding groan from the building, tied of all it had seen and now this new stress on its form. The hall's walls and ceiling collapsed in, crushing some of the Fallen and leaving innumerable more to claw and scream at the debris in frustration. “Keep moving. They will find a way around.” Saint took lead now, running down the hall, letting his subroutines translate each sign they passed. Revenant was slower to sprint, so the only female of the group ended up running side by side with him. She said in a hushed, but harsh whisper, “A soldier for the Queen? I thought the Crows were supposed to be subtle.” After a needless teleport, he retorted, “And I thought all Awoken were to remain in the Reef, aside from Crows; yet, here you are. Earth? The Chain? Even your own Ghost?” The robotic call of a Servitor echoed down a perpendicular hall and, with a quick glance, Yvette was able to see its faint glow in the distance before they passed the hall. “Fine. There's no time for this right now.” Above the group, Cayde-5 had created a spectacle of the roof. Ether and blood were smeared across the metallic surface, exploding outwards at each point of contact. Thirty-four bodies were sprawled across the roof and not a single intact head among all of them. He kicked himself for needing the knife for the last one. “Ghost, it could have been a perfect game; I was so gorram on point... I don't think it'll ever happen again.” He could still feel heat radiating from the barrel of his sniper; had he pushed further, the rifling would have melted away. His Ghost, still dematerialized and only speaking directly to him, replied, “Sir, don't you think we have more important things to worry about? Like how we're going to stop a Fallen army from escaping?” The Hunter jumped over a body as he laughed, “Ghost, we've got Saint-14 down there; you worry too...” He slowed his run, slack jaw at the sight before him as he approached the lip of the building. “You know what, little buddy? You might not worry enough.” He stared blankly at the open courtyard that lay before him. It had once been one of many launch pads, initially used to explore the solar system and lastly used to escape the doomed planet. When Cayde-6 looked out over it though, he could just barely tell that anything that had been there had long been covered by overgrown grass. Instead, he saw the giant Ketch resting in the far side of the expanse. Its back half had landed on top part of the Cosmodrome, collapsing the weakened structure entirely around it while one of its massive engines had pushed a derelict human ship over, spreading its bulbous parts across the ground. Fallen poured out of every door from the Cosmodrome, moving in packs of twenty, each group surrounding a servitor. He tried to count, tried to come to any estimate, but there was too much movement. They disappeared into the giant ship as quickly as they exited the buildings. There were drop ships lifting off from other portions of the complex and even others landing to help load up the innumerable forces in the one area. Cayde opened his mouth to say something, anything that relay what they had found, but was silenced by an explosion below him. Saint-14 was the first to charge through the doors as they blew apart. He slowed from his full run as he recognized the panoramic size of the enemy in front of them. The other four were shortly behind, stopping as well in shock. They were on the top of a slight hill, just enough of a grade to give the vaguest of advantages. Then again, there were at least three hundred Fallen to each of them, not including those on the Ketch or those still in the Cosmodrome. Krace was the first of the team able to find any appropriate words, “We're xìngjiāo.” The leader of the Chain couldn't agree more. There were subroutines built into his consciousness that immediately told him the astronomical odds of surviving if they ran now. Survival without running could only be expressed with a limit of zero. There was however a 1.3% chance they could kill Kell Trykais before they died. It was good enough odds for him. Saint spun around to his team. “Yvette, take that hall; you make sure that not even one Dreg finds their blade in our backs. Understood?” She nodded faintly, still in awe, until he added, “Then move!” “Vell, Krace, form up with me; we have to hold back as many as possible until we can find Trykais.” The two other Titans, now snapped from their morbid reverie, stepped to the front of the small rise with their leader. They carefully reloaded each of their weapons, preparing for as much of a stand as they could muster. “Revenant, take your shots carefully and let me know when you are ready with Bloom. And Cayde-6...” There was a forced laugh over the comms. “You want me to shoot things, right?” “Snipers, servitors, and major targets. Your priority though is to find Trykais and put a bullet in his brain.” Cayde nodded to himself, half-listening as his Ghost rattled off all the reasons they should have stayed at the wall. He pulled Gorgeous from his back, blew gently on the barrel, hoping it had cooled enough, and took aim. “Shān yǔ yù lái fēng mǎn lóu, little buddy. Might as well be the first to shoot.” There was a shot and, half a second later, a Vandal's head exploded in ether and gore, dropping its rifle to the ground in its rooftop perch. It was another painfully long fifteen seconds before the Devil army realized what was happening, much to the chagrin of another three dead Vandals.

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  • The response sounded like a roar, like white noise fed in on itself to create a rumbling yet high pitched feedback, like the death rattle that had encompassed the world at the Collapse. They were the proud of House Devil and yet here stood the demons that had fought them back; two-armed and unworthy, these humans and machines had fought them back from the Wall and now thought so mighty of themselves that they would chase the Devils to their Ketch? There could be no reprieve. Arc energy tore through the air, tearing at each molecule, as it seared its way towards the offenders. Yvette heard the sound of death, but she had her orders. She had stepped back into the ten foot wide hall that led to her allies. With feet set wide, she only took up just over two feet of that space. That left eight possible feet of failure, of the enemy brushing past her and ending the lives of her commander and fellow soldiers. Their chances were bad enough without worrying about the rear flank; thankfully, she had not originally been a Titan of the Chain. Thankfully, her beginnings were in a much more elegant station. The hunters of the Reef were much more accustomed to such tight surroundings. She pulled her shotgun to ready across her chest and took a moment to simply be, to breathe, to let the stress and the sounds and the day flow through her. By the time the first Dreg came around the corner, she had found her center and rewarded its tenacity with the shotgun, swung like a bat from the barrel to crush the alien's temple in with the handle. More of its kind quickly followed, screaming in a blood rage, so her dance began. The Titans had taught her strength, the ability to snap the neck of a Dreg in a single punch, an ability she was quick to use. The Queen's Guard had taught her mobility and that every part of her body was an equal weapon, so as she threw punches, she could as easily and sometimes simultaneously crush the faces of the enemy with precise kicks. There were times were she was completely off the ground, only suspended by momentum and the force of her own blows. She felt knives skipping off of her shields and arc energy scorching around her. Each successful hit was rewarded with an actual shot with her weapon, rather than just a physical mauling. She did not step backward though; Yvette was set on making a line with bodies that none would pass. One enterprising Dreg did manage to jump on and latch to her back; it was quickly dispatched by the Awoken throwing herself at a wall as hard as possible. A Captain forced its way through the growing crowd, barking orders from the back of the hall. It was summarily killed when a lightning grenade latched to its face, electrifying it and another twenty Fallen in front of it. Yvette was silent through it all, had giblets of Fallen strewn across her, and had over worked her Ghost, having it constantly recharging her shields. Her stoicism remained as her shotgun shells were depleted, leaving her with fists and two automatic weapons that were unwieldy in such a situation. She did finally grimace though as the Fallen parted to allow a servitor to approach her line of bodies. She had no time to reload or to ready another grenade, so she ran. She crossed her self imposed line of attrition, into the Fallen territory. A void blast nearly took her off her feet, but the Awoken pressed forward and slid. She was under the ether machine and could hear Fallen laughing at her situation. Her hands groped from the underside of the orb to its front, finding the seam between the body and the eye of the servitor. Another void blast, this time just above her head, sheered away the remnants of her shield, but the machine's seam gave way. She could feel wire and filament and coils, everything she hoped was the arteries and lifeblood of the alien machination. Yvette grabbed a handful and pulled as the servitor charged its void energies again. Outside, the remaining three Titans did a slow dance among the soft clinking of shells onto the ground. All three had their machine guns at ready, but only two at a time would stand at the crest of the small slope they were on. While two poured out bullets, the third would step back and reload his own weapon or provide the others ammo from his reserves. They only had so many bullets though and they already could not take a step without brushing shells out of the way. Some of those same shells rolled down the hill only to stop on the very bodies the bullets had made. They heard an explosion from behind them, but didn't have time to look or even hope that Yvette was okay. Revenant seemed to be having the time of his life though. Whereas the Titans had gone into a focused, stubborn silence, the Warlock seemed to be worked into a mania as he carefully picked off stragglers making their way to the top of the hill. His speech was constantly interrupted by the machine guns, explosions, or his own hand cannons firing off. “The sight of Light and Dark... Traveler and... the greater Hive gods... Burned down from heaven... Cooled along the Jovian orbits... We are... And marked for existential... If the Gate Lords deem it so...” One phrase could be heard repeated over the rest though, “Pray, you godless heathens! Pray for the return of your stolen god, lest your jealousy burn off your ether into dust.” “Sir, I have bad news.” Saint-14 didn't look up for a speaker, knowing his Ghost wasn't anywhere in sight. He blasted light from his visor again, blinding more oncoming Fallen as he said under his breath, “Can it really be bad in comparison to this?” “It would seem the City has managed to triangulate our location; they're preparing to send out ships to extract us, without consent.” “Which means they will most likely stay in low orbit and remove us from their... We have to finish this.” Saint then yelled into the comms system connecting the team, “Cayde, do you have eyes on the target?” The Hunter began to respond with, “Not yet, I-” but was cut off by a new sight. A drop ship materialized in the distance carrying what all of them had feared. A single Devil Walker was docked to the underside of the ship and it was headed their way. Cayde-5 went silent on the comms even as the commander repeated the question. He needed focus. There were always two pilots per drop ship, two Vandals specifically. Dregs were not worthy to fly. Vandals averaged a height of 6'1. Cayde whispered to himself, “Alright, please Gorgeous, help me out.” Two shots rang out, so close together that the untrained ear might have only heard one. Both bullets shattered the protective barrier of the drop ship at the same height but about five feet apart from one another. The ship held course for a moment, before it started to list heavily to the right. It veered heavily off course and crashed near the Cosmodrome's rocket yard. The Hunter yelled, “That's gorram right! Perfect!” “Cayde! Where is Tykais?!” “Sorry! Didn't you see that- Ah, never mind. He's not here. If he's on the Ketch, we haven't lured him out.” Saint's internal alarms started whirring angrily as his shields dropped momentarily. He stepped back for Vell to take his place, but as he reloaded, he shouted over the Warlock's rambling, “Revenant, do it now. Kill as many as you can.” The Warlock nodded and began to step forward only to see an arc round scream across the courtyard and pierce Krace's red armor, his lung, and out the other side. The Titan fell in a heap, trying to catch his breath uselessly. Vell moved in front of the fallen man instantly, taking up his position and firing down into the Fallen crowds. The normally quiet Titan yelled to Krace's ghost, “Get him up, and fast. Siphon some Light from me if need be.” Revenant turned to look at Saint to see if the order still stood. When he was only given a nod, the Warlock focused back in front of them. His eyes glowed brilliantly as he readied himself. For once though, he acted wordlessly, as if his power was taking every bit of concentration. His body disappeared and, as was his custom, appeared in the air above the group. This time though, he floated momentarily, long enough for his whole body to glow and for him to fling his arm out as if throwing an object. Instead, three balls of void shot out and drifted down into the crowds of Fallen. The resulting explosions sent tens of bodies into the air and scattering among the still living; however, those dead bodies started glowing in the same purple hue. There were screams as the aliens realized what was happening, but that's all they had time for. Each body erupted in another explosion, killing in total what was nearing a hundred of the Devils.

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