"Zing Zing Zing Zing" Another Vex Goblin lies dead at my feet as I reload my Vex Mythoclast.
"Nice work, Continue testing the weapon so we can gather more telemetry on how it works." Said Banshee-44 over the Radio.
"I'm running out of things to shoot, and I'm also running out of ammo to shoot them with! How come you haven't been able to determine the Firing mechanism of it yet?" I ask frustrated having slain over a thousand Vex units that day alone.
Banshee-44, responds equally frustrated "Keep shooting things till you run out of things to shoot, or things too shoot them with! If you would let us disassemble it we could reverse-enginee--" "I said no." I said, interrupting Banshee.
"If you won't let us disassemble it, then at least help us gather telemetry on it!" Banshee said anxiously, I roll my eyes and ask, "Ok, Where should I go next then?" He responded "How about where you found it?"
I'll add more later. Stay tuned.
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Love it walrus! Keep it up
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Will you add more or you're busy?
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Reply 4 l8er
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Bump!
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Awesome!!!
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All of your characters are exos. I didn't know they could roll their eyes. o:
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Nerf too much story
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I onestly feel it's a bit jumpy. When you make someone in a story talk, you don't always need confirmation of that character speaking. Also, if you do confirm don't make it complex. Make it more simplistic.
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Pretty good story, but maybe add a bit more detail to the environment and use different words than "said". Like "croaked", "stated", etc. Looking forward to more!