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4/14/2013 9:42:36 PM
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My Destiny (part 2)
Well ladies and gentlemen, part two is out for your enjoyment. Hope you like it and let me know what you think.
English
#Destiny
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1 AntwortenFinally getting around to read the rest of these, awesome stuff so far!
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And this one.
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3 AntwortenNice! You're story is masterpiece, keep it up :D.
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1 AntwortenBearbeitet von Queztlis: 4/16/2013 3:56:32 AMColonel Aloki I very much enjoy reading your work it is very nice to see such talent along with some moral standards that have been lacking in recent years in the fan fiction industry. If your interested I would like to propose a small gift to you. In the form of me editing and give feed back on your fantastic work, when I say edit I don't mean in any way change your original content but merely correct spelling and more oppressing grammatical errors. Again this is only to bring you to light and show off your skill at weaving such story and details of a very unknown subject. If you interested email me( darkbandit1@gmail.com) Thank you for your time and effort into creating your piece of destiny lore and I look forward to your future installments.
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1 AntwortenBearbeitet von LegendaryWarlock: 4/15/2013 7:50:49 PMYet another great installment! This is like the story of the Arabian Nights, though, where each night the princess left off her story on a cliffhanger every night so the sultan wouldn't kill her ╚(•⌂•)╝You're keeping us hooked so we don't loose interest :) But anyway it was great! Edited: my post was missing a comma
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1 AntwortenYay part 2!!!
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1 AntwortenGreat job, I really liked it. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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1 AntwortenAnd another truly amazing segment to this story.The details you implement seem to be as if they are real as in real for Destiny. Can not wait for the next addition to this story and the many to come. Keep up the great work!
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1 AntwortenHot damn. Another amazing read. I truly do wish I had the talent to write like you do.
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1 Antwortenhttp://www.bungie.net/en-us/Forum/Post?id=60200607 for part 1
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1 Antwortenreally enjoy your writting cant wait to see what happens next.
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3 AntwortenAnother great chapter. I cant wait to read more.
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1 AntwortenAs a suggestion, you should put links to all the others in the series in the OP so people don't have to go digging if they've only seen this one. Good work so far
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5 Antwortenglorious!
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7 AntwortenBearbeitet von iGraviton: 4/14/2013 10:04:35 PMAnother great work. Some minor grammatical and syntax errors, but nothing that took away from the story. I'm excited to see how this evolves in future installments. Keep up the good work!
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1 Antwortengood good, its seems my character might be the only male awoken warlock lolz
