Oh didn't mean to offend, it's just compared to ur work it's top notch.
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Not offended, I just think you're being silly by calling it 'great'. My work? What work?
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Compared to the first game it's a great story. But if that's ur only complaint then carry on
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Still not great, 'better' I would agree with. It has the potential to become great though.