[i]chrk[/i] Remember your mission, 3G. Stop Xavi and bring him back to base. [i]chrk[/i] He will be interrogated for the murder of Frindeau, over. [i]chrk[/i]
"Why am I 3G?" Questioned 3G."I'm no different than any other person. Likable, dutiful, the list goes on."
3G wandered the streets of a bustling Apronz Moon[1], looking for Xavi, a Jri'tun of infamous tasks. Xavi was accused of murdering Zeul Frindeau, captain of G.E Trojan-4C, a G.E Fleetship[1], then fleeing here. New Seoul[2], the most technologically advanced "Hendo City[3]".
3G though,"I have friends, family, a job, what gives me my odd name?"
3G walked throughout New Seoul, looking down alleyways and on the tops of buildings for Xavi. He knew Xavi was a deadman, once 3G caught him. He'd by tried then either jailed or executed.
A loud fizz, like that if one of the many Gamma Shot weapons. Then something ran out of the Galactic Empire Headquarters in New Seoul.
Xavi.
"Mark," 3G said. Then something flashes before 3G's eyes:
[b]/activate GPS in obj_X1[/b]
That's what his officer, Gringi, had told him to say once he found Xavi. 3G had no idea what had just happened.
Xavi hijacked a civilian's Drango[4] and drove down. 3G gave chase. He'd been trained for this situation, so he knew he'd need a Drango or something of the sort.
3G went up to a car. No one was in it, so he said what Gringi had told him to say:"Unlock."
[b]/activate WH_obj_Drango[/b]
"What is happening? I'm I... different?" 3G asked himself.
Ignoring the question he got in the car and drove after Xavi. Xavi was planning something sinister. He had to be stopped.
The Drango sped quickly down the streets, as with all Hendo Technologies[5], and 3G quickly caught up with Xavi.
Xavis head reared,"Don't you want the truth?!" He yelled, pulling out a G.S-Peck[6]. Xavi pulled the trigger, and 3G thought he was done for. He had seen what Gamma technology can do to living cells, and he knew it was painful.
An erie green light oozed from the pistol, and 3G closed his eyes, ready to die.
Nothing happened. He didn't melt, he could still see. He was alive.
Xavis faced turned grim. He stepped on the gas. Xavi was heading towards one of six Electrogens[7] keeping the city afloat. He planned to down New Seoul, killing thousands of civilians indirectly.
Xavi turned the corner, Electrogen 5 down the road. The Drango the criminal was driving crashed right into it, the Electrogen sparking.
The city wobbled, then rebalanced due to the cities backup plan. Electrogens 6 and 4 gave more power, while 1, 2, and 3 gave less.
3G got out of the Drango, and ran faster than ever before by saying "Speed."
[b]/activate right_leg_springboard and left_leg_springboard[/b]
3G felt different. Alien. Fake.
Nonetheless, 3G picked up Xavi by the shoulders and kicked him to the ground. He heard sirens, the G.E Local Police Force had followed.
An officer stepped out. It was Gringi. He was equipped with a D.E.C-Paralyze, and Xavi was shocked still. His head sparked.
3G never got a good look at Xavi. After taking a good one he realized Xavi was a I.D[8]. A robot. A fake.
The N.S.E.S[9] was already on Electrogen 5. Working with finesse to repair and save New Seoul.
"Good job, 3G!" Beamed Gringi,"Xavi will be investigated for the murder of my father. Poor Zeul, good man and even better father."
Gringi was close to tears, but held back.
"Sir," 3G said after a minute of silence,"what am I? Who am I?"
"I guess it's time I tell you, isn't it?" Gringi said,"You are a S.D.R. But that doesn't make you any less human than I."
3G pondered that. A Special Duties Robot. Fake, just like he had thought. But 3G knew something about S.D.Rs. They had the brain of a person. A living person.
Thinking on this he felt something new. He felt cold. Affected.
"Is 3G my actual name?" Sputtered 3G.
"No," Gringi said,"your real name is Carter. First Sergeant. We found your body lying in the snow of a distant planet, broken and freezing. But your mind in the other hand."
Silence.
Gringi broke the silence,"We have your next mission. We've received a transmission from Sandra. A soldier named Brady plans to rebuild Vargen. We want you to help."
Carter questioned,"How will I get there?"
"See that?" Gringi pointed towards a doc,"that's your new 9B-Cardinal. Take it, and go to Vargen."
Carter understood. He took off to rebuild a fallen city.
Thanks for reading! Like the plot? Like the post![spoiler][b]Database:[/b]
1. Fleetships are giant space bases, which house thousands of soldiers.
2. New Seoul was created in honor of the technology city Seoul, South Korea, on Earth.
3. A Hendo City is a place held off the ground by super powerful magnets, for reasons like a poisonous atmosphere, like on the planet which houses New Seoul.
4. A Drango vehicle is transport for civilians, which moves by use of Hendo tech.
5. Hendo Tech is anything that uses magnets to levitate things off the ground.
6. G.S-Pecks are the standard sidearm for anti-cell confinement.
7. Electrogens are what New Seoul and other Hendo Cities use to float.
8. I.Ds are what the Galactic Empire uses to find info, hence Information Droid.
9. The New Seoul Electric Specialists travel the galaxy has the most superior electricians who can fix anything.[/spoiler]
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5 AntwortenPretty good.
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5 AntwortenI thought Lost was a TV show.
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1 AntwortenIt was good!
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5 AntwortenI liked it
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1 AntwortenI'm short on time, but I appreciate good writing, so I'll be honest and I'll have to be quick. First of all, some rookie spelling/grammatical errors. This is basic. Perhaps you should begin with an introduction to explain and describe the setting. People will find it hard to immerse themselves in something they can't visualise or understand - a glossary at the end is no help at all. Personally, I think the story is relatively interesting but it definitely needs work.
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2 AntwortenI really liked it. You should write this into a novel.
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1 AntwortenThey were dead the whole time
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2 AntwortenBearbeitet von Cyber_219: 9/5/2016 8:15:33 PMDay #1 Bump