Use relatable humor, like what bungie decided last minute to do to cayde6 in destiny (not a desticle just stating an example). Also, include cool goals, and a medium plot line. Side quests are always fun. Don't pull a megatron and have 15009 different incarnations after he's already -blam!-ing dead but yeah otherwise good lcuk

Make it somewhat relatable.

I suggest using names you can actually pronounce.

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you should just write a book about me

Have you read the Eragon series? A lot of what you are describing gives me Eragon vibes. If you haven't I highly suggest it, great books.

Both have a dream about each other and know about the telepathic link and the guy tries to find the girl but she is in prison for crimes against the king and is tried for death but the man finds her before the execution and helps her escape and now is wanted by the high king king of kings if you could say and they both fight the king and and loses the first time to were they are banished from the kingdom... They come back and try to fight the king once more and they have now taken the Kings life and are the new rulers of the kingdoms to were it is full on war

A really good place to get inspiration is from the story for the Magic the gathering card game, which has one of the coolest stories actually

Sword ideas Knightmind - a double edged sword used to ward of certain mind magic The Reaper of Sanity - a sword that when a person is cut with it, they rapidly begin to lose memory, and the wound catches on fire. It would be a loooooong sword, possibly Xordars.

The magic should be could Visur, variation of the Latin word for essence. Make it to where it's existence resides in everything. It's almost an impossible skill to learn how to draw it out, but make it either an born ability that has to be unlocked, or an item that does it for you. When something dies, the Visur in it becomes corrupted and dark. Xordar should secretly have the ability to absorb it, and him being on of the few. Make it his main source of power

Doramar, for the male Múriel for the female Xordar for the God king

By heavy magic element do you mean there's a heavy usage of magic or is there going to be a magical material? How is this magic going to be used for the most part? Fire, water, etc.? Light and darkness? Push and pull? Mind? Time? All of the above?